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10-15 lines max
No crew votes d/r
no hate votes..no biting feeding.
or recycling..
Sense U need more hours to drop iLL..it's Ur choice..U have an hour to drop..
or 2 hours if U need it..Ur choice...
and sense U brought it up U drop first...
remeber to choose how many hours 1 or 2..and it starts once u check in..
Get merked
fuck 16 lines , ill key one for u right now
battle me? my skills are endless, relentless...i got more "bars" than jailed up fences//
the mic menace, acting like Texas about to "serve" Chemist a death "sentence"///
my spits wetness will soak this MC until hes "washed up"//
bio chemist is a fraud, hes only a bluff///
like the chemical weapons in Iraq, that never popped up//
so you battle online, i dont give respect just cause you win belts///
and i dont need biological weapons to make this kids skin melt///
im devilish, here to" bomb" on these terrorists when i drop it///
then torture their "chemist" tied up in his office///
then make him read my lyrics contents so his eyes pop outta his sockets//
fucked up your optics, ill transmit a virus though kleenex///
infect his lines with diseases, then tell him to eat it///
this is my first time seeing a BIO CHEMIST, who doesnt know how to be "sick"////
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
and whenever someone says bio chemist, i always think DUD//
i got this thug running, to me its just funny///
im gonna shut him down like a chemist without any funding///
good thing you have a labratory, cause your gonna need nurse care////
imma fry this scientist with my mic, till he looks like Eintstein with worse hair
Ur Gay when It comes to lyrics, Anal to me and -Trapt-
This proves U try to do -Re Dic Us- (ridiculous) moves now how gay is that…
Battle me Fear is a Must On the same Level..??
I’ll kill U in the next episode so we can -See Equal- (Squeal)…
Unwritten so U don’t script any Hazard…
Read his sig “Gay n Green” (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he’s fagot
After this battle U won’t have a mouth To breathe Threw,
Chemically thrust moves vanishing Ur vocals..
With Ur whack ranks and gay style Ur new alias is -Diss Purse-
U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-
11 lines of true punches…
And U broke the rules..
i never agreed to ur rules....so how did i break them LOL
well first off nice drop
but being an MC doesnt mean spittng as many punches as u can......(oh yea that see-equal, sequal line is played out"
Read his sig ?Gay n Green? (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he?s fagot- SICK
good battle , but your verse didnt touch me or my pride next tmie come at me but still props
uppin 4 votes
I know my verse didn’t touch yours I ripped U…
U know why
Because Of punches and personals…That’s what wins battles
And by battling me that’s technically stating that U agree with the
Rules..
Ur good at ciphering I guess …as for battling there is a difference..
No more freespoting
Uppin for votes…
hey can ya'll vote on this?I need a few more posts before I can vote but I promise I'll suscribe to this thread and vote when I can!
unwritten hazard - ur structure was fuckin horrible.......that made ur flow fall off drastically.......vocab was pretty good........nice multis......wordplay was tight.......punches were ok........personals were aight......
bio chemist - structure was good.........flow was on target........vocab was ok..........some of the multis were good........wordplay was ok........punches connected........good personals.........
breakdown -
structure - bio
flow - bio
vocab - unwritten
multis - unwritten
wordplay - unwritten
punches - bio
personals - bio
conclusion - bio chemist takes this in structure, flow, and more importantly punches and personals so he gets my vote........
VOTE - BIO CHEMIST
yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114139
thanx.........
thanks for the vote and honesty
but seriously, bio chemist's punches were lame..lol
No they weren’t and stop freeposting….
U just admit it yourself my punches were good
Now you are contradicting Urself..which proves
Ur just a fraudulent lyricist…
Uppin Votes
Lets go quick votes..
I voted on enough battles this should not be slept on lets go..
Uppin
up for votes votes and more votes....stop sleeping...*
yo the link that i posted above already got closed, so if u could return the favor here itd be appreciated......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227
thanx.........
LOL i dont knwo what's goin on here... n noone better call me a noob or tell me i dont know what im talking about.... I think unwritten hazard took this battle...
Your right ... he didnt have a lot of direct hits ... he had a few nice lines tho .... The structure wasnt so fucked up i couldnt read it, coulda been fixed but his shit flowed fine...
"battle me? my skills are endless, relentless...i got more "bars" than jailed up fences//
the mic menace, acting like Texas about to "serve" Chemist a death "sentence"///"
^^ Nice multis n wordplay
"good thing you have a labratory, cause your gonna need nurse care////
imma fry this scientist with my mic, till he looks like Eintstein with worse hair"
^^ Kinda funny - real visual, good imagery
I really just didn't like Bio Chemists verse...
the first line was actually a pretty decent punch:
"Ur Gay when It comes to lyrics, Anal to me and -Trapt-
This proves U try to do -Re Dic Us- (ridiculous) moves now how gay is that… "
"Battle me Fear is a Must On the same Level..??
I’ll kill U in the next episode so we can -See Equal- (Squeal)…"
^^ Dont like this one
"Unwritten so U don’t script any Hazard…
Read his sig “Gay n Green” (Gang Green) this Leprechaun proved he’s fagot "
^^ creative wordplay ... punch was just ok ... hazard n faggot seem a lil too forced
"After this battle U won’t have a mouth To breathe Threw,
Chemically thrust moves vanishing Ur vocals..
With Ur whack ranks and gay style Ur new alias is -Diss Purse"
^^ Wtf is all this??
"U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-"
^^ Ok line but how is that a punch ...i get what youre saying but i just dont see how it's effective
All in all you had a couple decent punches, some decent wordplay... flow was ok...
This was Hazards worst filler crap...
"im devilish, here to" bomb" on these terrorists when i drop it///
then torture their "chemist" tied up in his office///
then make him read my lyrics contents so his eyes pop outta his sockets//
fucked up your optics, ill transmit a virus though kleenex///
infect his lines with diseases, then tell him to eat it///
this is my first time seeing a BIO CHEMIST, who doesnt know how to be "sick"////
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
and whenever someone says bio chemist, i always think DUD//"
But i really liked his first line and some of the other stuff decent until ^^ that crap...
It's almost a tie battle... i think Bio Chemist came weak... Hazard should work on less filler... but he managed to pull it off by a hair... I might be the only one who sees it this way but i think Unwritten Hazard got this....
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOR AND DROP AND HONEST VOTE ON ONE OF MY BATTLES...
knew I should of put no newbie votes
Hazard if everyone reads went way over the
excepted mount of lines
whatever....
uppin
Uhh...this battle was subpar
Bio got it..but cuz tha other kid blew
he had punches and wordplay from 2 years ago
Bio..you forced so many punches/wordplay
But you got it..just a better verse
v/ Bio Chemist
hit this up...its being mad slept on...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=113996&page=1
lol
calm down its just a battle
so i wrote my lins then u, either your usin that as an excuse or tryin to win with a technicality
either way stop talkin shit already and let the people vote
::uppn 4 VOTES::
Quote:
Originally Posted by Bio*Chemist
LOL - I wasnt even gonna vote cuz i knew your faggot ass would say somethin ....
I know you have some talent but you came weak as hell and i think the other kid edged it. Seriously, your shit sucked ... both of 'em did
Call me a newbie again, i guess we'll have to set a battle up so i can rip you
Please stop you can't rip me believe that...
stop freeposting in my thread...
enough said ..
uppin
Don't sleep on my boyz front lines everyone deserves to have their battles closed...uppin this to top so peeps stop sleepin leave links...
Unwritten hazard you had some strange structure that i couldn't quite follow that well. I dunno if its just me but i think u gottah work on it. Concepts too! You wanna keep certain "related" thought in the same "bar" cause u were jumpin all over the place with the whole biological warfare bit. Anyways good vocabulary and fair personals. COuld have been better tho. just keep at it.
Bio Chemist you had flawless structure and you knew when to stop. I admire that. some peeps prolong there verse till no1 wants to read it or listen 2 it anymore. So good job on that. Your concepts were alright. Maybe couldah used a bit more creativity. Punches were good same wit personals. Overall I would say da chemist won this rhyme bout.
but good job 2 both of u
damn, this shits old, i was supprised to see it on page 3 lol
anyway, thanks for the feed sabotage.
uppn.
Spacist lyrist's vote should be d/qed
u put in the rules no crew votes and he's a I.J.L. like bio*chemist
unwritten u gotta pick up on that
i would vote but i hate bio chemist so i would be a hate vote
but i still think unwritten will win this as long as no more IJL's vote
lmao..this was a funny thread to read with all the side comments :laugh:
Anywho..
IMO, Bio got this simply because he was so much more creative and witty. His personals hit pretty hard, even though some were played, they were humorous, which is always a plus :thumbup: ... However, Bio, your shit didnt rhyme alot of the time, rhyme scheme was way off..example:
..lolz, see what I'm sayin? there were a few more like that too..work on that and you'll be aiight. Not a bad drop.Quote:
Originally Posted by Bio*Chemist
And Unwritten, you came with a lot of lines, sure, but alot of it was weak. Nothin was really standing out to me at all, and your structure was fucked up beyond repair...lolz, maybe not that bad, but it resulted in hurtin your flow and made it harder to read..work on that...
To both, keep elevatin..
Vote / Bio
Peace..
unwritten- u had little punches and personels. while readin i almost forgot it was a battle. ur flow was aight and ur structure was good. its just ur punches and personals u had alot less than bio.
bio chemist- u had punches and personals, better ones and more than him. ur flow and structure was aight too. chemist, u had better punches than unwrittin thats why bio gets mah vote.
vote: bio chemist
you know i am battlin DA kid....he da faq east of philly, and i will go against whatever he said
Wow these comments are all pretty rediculous. Makes me wonder why i even ask for feedback on my shit but here is my opinion.
Unwritten I like you verse better than bio's actually and he is acting like a little bitch over stupid shit. BUT one thing he's right about is that u broke the rules. Since u guys didn't come to any agreement I can't give u my vote cuz of the rules violation. But I felt you did have some nice punches, wordplay, and multis. You came halfway intelligent with it and this site needs more of that. less filler next time
Bio your verse was played and you're getting nothing but bs votes. I refuse to give you my vote cuz u are acting like a little bitch. Oh an after you continually freepost you tell others not to do it, you are a deusche. Don't complain when some1 votes against you, learn to take criticism cuz your shit is far from perfect.
Vote would go to unwritten but due to rule violation I'm not leavin a vote. Sorry guys.. hit up my battle with thing and my lost a friend open mic.
Bio got this
hazard's structure was wack which fucked his flow up to
best lines were:
U proved Ur a newbie using 16 lines, Follow the rules How illiterate,
Even if I -Clowned Ur scripts- U still wouldn’t be an -Insane Joker Lyricist-
which are bios
bio got flow vocab structure and personals o and punches
multis were tie
wotta merking
BIO WON EASY
hazard u really need to elevate man work on it
remember to make the whole thing personals
V/ Bio
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=120021
Not that great of a battle, but Bio definitly took this....
Unwritten...okay verse..but it seriously lacked punches.
I think you only had one or two actual punches and
they were weak at best...yer personals were also pretty
eneffectual, and were missing any real creativity...overall
you did a poor job at dissing yer opponent, instead you
stuck to using mostly filler and self-glorification..
for example...
work on yer punches and personals and try to useQuote:
i joined rap battles, and like a stray "kat", people showed me no love//
my inks blood, cause rap is the only thing that i think of//
more creatvity...also be more direct w/ yer disses
and dont talk about yourself...elevate
Bio decent verse...you had some okay punches and
personals, not the best ive seen from you, but it didn't
need to be....also your verse seemed alot more direct
and you actually dissed your opponenet...though i
would have liked to see better creativity, you still get
this w/ a better overall verse
v/ Bio Chemist