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no hate votes that means that born to kill(damn faggot) cant vote in this battle
ok ill spit first however you spit 25 minutes after i do.. if you dont you will be branded a no show and lose by no show.. peace
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no hate votes that means that born to kill(damn faggot) cant vote in this battle
ok ill spit first however you spit 25 minutes after i do.. if you dont you will be branded a no show and lose by no show.. peace
I'm gunna play ya like cards and get second best a flush,
Just to give a u a chance heres a year, theres no rush,
Im just chillin while shakin like you was outkast Ice Cold,
Versin' me is worst then gamblein u wont win let the Dice Roll,
The only way this cat actually gets cookie iz with his hand,
Ill beat u sensless and come back at you like an elasticband,
U've got no chance ta pop me son i am the devil,
Aint an elevator in the world that ull bring u to my level,
Your elevating? Going through the sediments of the evident,
Your style's like camera film cos you need to take time to develop it,
listen kid
everytime your voice gets SPOKE IN TRACKS, people just break out in OPEN LAUGHS,
your the biggest JOKE IN RAP
a verse of yours is bout as advanced as lyrics written by mc hammer after SMOKIN CRACK
your brain must have BROKE AN SMASHED,
or either as a child you got dropped on your MIND PLATE
cuz your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT
you could obtain a higher IQ than yours by testing a PRIME APE
shit kid even SLAYED CORNS DISS YOU
seen your pic and you bout look perfect for centerfolds of GAY PORN ISSUES
dude you've got a love for anal PENETRATION ,SERIOUS
you claim your a "blood" but only time you see "red" is during your MENESTRATION PERIODS
kid ive seen most of your battles and you were NEVER LETHAL
faggots like you are perfect examples of why abortion is BETTER LEGAL
dude youll NEVER DATE, cuz your grill looks like its just been through a SHREDDERS BASE
compared to you, the offspring of michael jackson and apes would result in a BETTER FACE
so just GET AWAY from Rap battles cuz you dont deserve to STAY HERE
so keep talkin shit and im a tear your FACE BARE
and leave your damn head with more knots than macy GRAYS HAIR
funny shit.. aiight uppin this so i can ko this kid
Punches: Smiley, def, the Prime Ape line was nice, the menstruation line was your best line. Master had some alright punches, but not enough. He had about 2 good ones.
Wordplay: Smiley, the the blood/red line, I thought that was dope
Multis: Smiley, had about 3-5 syllables per line
Personals: Neither, nobody had any personals
Opener: Tie, both openers were pretty weak
Closer: Tie, both closer's pretty dope.
Vote - Smiley
Good battle, Smiley's stuff was just better, then multis are tight. Rap Master's stuff was pretty decent also, just keep doing what you do.
you claim your a "blood" but only time you see "red" is during your MENESTRATION PERIODS
Smiley's best line
Your elevating? Going through the sediments of the evident,
Your style's like camera film cos you need to take time to develop it
Rap's best bar
Return the favor in my battle with Rule
uppin for more votes..............................
up this come, on people more votes............................................
uppin............................................. .....
Yeah I got to go with Smiley...He had a few stretched bars but he was coming seteadily with solid punches and multi's nearly every line...He had a few good personals...I like the crossing Michael Jackson and an Ape line ...that's funny.
Rapping Master you came weak...you had a few good disses in there but the Agression level wasn't there..your rhyme scheme was also pretty basic. I like the drop and all but you were missing the tenacity that smiley had and you didn't punch EVERy line..
Vote= Smiley.
Both of ya'll please.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614
aiight i think smiley took this one cuz he had better punches(dude you've got a love for anal PENETRATION ,SERIOUS
you claim your a "blood" but only time you see "red" is during your MENESTRATION PERIODS)
also he had better flow and vocab..the other head wasnt that bad but i think smiley takes thiis one
srry i cant poll
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113661
fuck this man up.....................................
iight...
Smilie... Your shit made me laugh man... You had nice punches... Some of them are hilarious... Lmao... MC Hammer after smokin crack had me rollin... Lol... Flow was disrupted in some parts... But punches made up for that...
Master... Judging by the lack of personals... And punches to be honest... Im guessing this was pre-written... Not bad for most of the newbs in FL... But you just didnt have enough to take it to Smilie...
v/ Smilie
Pz...
oopps... Polled... Forgot to last time... My bad...
Pz...
uppin this for the ko.............................
nice battle yo....................................
Winner = :)
:) - Nice verse, Your Structure Was Off, But I Was Surprised Cuz It Flowed Well. Nice Punches, They Connected, And Hit Pretty Hard, Ok Vocab, Ok Wordplay Nice Verse Tho.
Rapping Master- You Had Nice Structure And Flow. Your PUnches Were Elementary, Elevate, Get Better Vocab, You Gotta Work On Everything, Your Wordplay Was Weak, OK verse..
Smiley
Punches- B+
Flow- A
Structure- D
Vocab- B-
Wordplay- B-
Overall Grade- B/B-
Rapping Master
Punches- C
Flow- B+
Structure- B+
Vocab- D
Wordplay- C-
Overall Grade- C
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