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aight aight, finally...
daffer is down for battle...
we'll found out who's the best one 'round here (belgium)*
u make da rulez daffer, I only have 2...
No feedin and unlimited lines...
post your rulez and we'll get this shit goin'...
pz... 'n good luck...
*: I'm from belgium 2...
aight, no dickridin, no bitin, that's all, you spit 1st
aight time 2 do this shit...
yo, itz d.liver.e, straight from belgium gettin' down to business...
I'll feel bad when I beat ya, should've told u not to risk it... :thefinger
haha, here we go...
know why u didn't wanna battle me... u'll never survive this
I'm already known 'round here as belgium's finest...
*h*ip *h*op *h*ype, y'all can call me triple H
spit rage on stage, break *barz* down like in a cage
u a nobody, your best could never beat my fillers
build a temple of wackness 'n u can b the pillarz
u gettin' outta line... thinkin' u can rhyme
your style is strictly ripped of shit like 8 mile
change ya lifestyle 'n music, switch over to rock
u couldn't write nice rhymez if u wrote around the clock
u suck with wordz, better never go acapella
ur like jay-z only worse, u like to 'rock-a-fella'
I'll slice your rhymez in piecez, like mozarella
I "reign" when I rhyme, go 'n get your umbrella
u a fuckin' faggot ass rookie, ya bitch ass overrated
u ducked me for battle so I know ya feel intimidated
I had enough about u... talkin' 'bout how good u are
u a fuckin' geek without a single decent bar
u won't get far, directionz were left outta sight
still u wouldn't give up 'n putted up a fight
u cheated ya way 2 winz... battlin' some "first-timez"
I'll crush ya confidence like I'll crush ya linez
they aint better than minez, they sound totally wack
u go 2 work in spermbanks, just to work on ya "cum-backz"
though u stay wack 'n your lyrics look like dumb-trackz
minez r bombpacked, yourz just sound like mixtape-rejectz
My rhyme flows fire n coal,I strike mic they explode
To shatter this fake 'rapper' mold,so when the drama unfolds,i aim for your dome
Spittin lyrical hollows outta verbal chrome
Playin the fake rapstars game,blazin you between goggles when i unload
Personal foul,i shut D.Liver.E down,one hit, you outta bounds
You got no 'balls' callin for 'time-out', I lay ya ass down
Claimin you 'rappin' when you simply hoggin,u not 'scoring'
U turning over when i take-away yours, u point-less often
Come with caution,or leave in a coffin...or leave coughin
Cuz if i spit sick shit your way,you will be leavin nauseous
I'ma evil person, but not like nazi-germans, but with perfect verses
Cuz when I concentrate on your 'camp',my blaze bursts will bake a herb bitch
I'm tying the hands of time with a rhyme,so I can seize the moment
Spittin offensive lines,breakin the line of defense,when i face this weak opponent
Don't call out my name cuz I put you into silent, you know I'm violent
Special delivery for this so named gangsta, you sayin your the wanksta
But I pop you up with my glock, so I don't have to write around the clock
I bring you into shock when I show you my rhymes
Cuz you never saw so gud bars, lets say this is over with my 20 lines
You'll never thought you cold lose this battle, I put you down with my rattle
Lets get sum votes in..................(gud battle)
it lookz pre-written but itz ok... voteZ............. leave linkz.
but u elevated a lot, good work... pz................
man it's not pre-writtin, it just came in my head and look at the time i posted my verse 16 minutes after yours, but anyway gud battle and lets get the votes started
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deliver - structure was good........flow was pretty good........vocab was ok.........some multis were aight........ok wordplay......some of the punches were good........ok personals.......
daffer - structure was ok.......flow was ok.......vocab was nice........multis were good......wordplay was pretty good.........some of the punches connected..........good personals......
breakdown -
structure - deliver
flow - deliver
vocab - daffer
multis - daffer
wordplay - tie
punches- daffer
personals - tie
conclusion - daffer takes this in vocab, multis and punches so he gets my vote......
VOTE - DAFFER
yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same........
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227
thanx........
ok 1-0 for me........................................
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aight uppin' once again...........................
D.liver.E you had an OK verse....lotsa filler and played rhymnes tho....Not too many hard hitting punches in your verse...Daffer..you shit was a lil stretched./..but otherwise you came pretty good..Some nice punches and metas in ya verse....Vote goes to Daffer22 for haveing the harder hitting verse out of the 2...Nice battle guys...
PLease drop an honest vote here guys...I took the time foir yall...thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115610
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ok this battle was ite,
took ages to read but i liked both verses,
overall id say daffer gets this,
close but he had alot better and harder,
punches man......also a nicer strucutre,
you both had a good sense of flow bur d.liver,
your punches lacked man,
also daffer had more consistency i think d.liver took,
personmals but thats it.,............close but not close enuff.lol
v-daffer
plz hit this 1 up now...
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=116010 gainst guilty.thx drop your links........woot
aiight D.liver.E you was aiight but the verse was to simple, you had a few good punches though and an aiight flow...............
Daffer you was good and you verse had a bit of creation init whch is nice to see, you had some hard hittin punches which hurt him, and a smooth flow............
\/0te.....Daffer22
D.liver.E you have upped 8 times................
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - ILLunatic
Ok here's the breakdown on this weak battle, both need elevation, alot to become big, but any wayz
Punches and Personals=Daffer, because D liver E talked to much about himself and not about the opponent he was battling, so that equals a bad battle verse, good open mic verse, no real good personals or any I seen that caught my eye
Structure and Flow=Tie, both were ok in both of these 2 categories, so it's even here
Wordplay and Vocabulary=Daffer, he took this barely, no wordplay, but he had better vocabulary, juss straight up and coming clean about it................
Conclusion=Daffer took this because D Liver E, talked about himself and didn't drop a battle verse it was a open mic verse almost the same like Daffer, both need elevation and help on punch lines, Wordplay, and Personals..............
Vote=Daffer