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you spit 1st
gud luck
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20 lines max
usual rules
you spit 1st
gud luck
Betta show up!!!
i never no show kid..and fuck a prewritten verse...keyed
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Eager for me to drop-i'll still wreck shop-watch as my punches disperse
spit first?-cuz u just dont feed off of lines-u eat the whole fuckin verse
it gets worse-ur minimum wage security-its useless puttin ur guard up
i could easily cut to the chase-but why?-when u already chase to the cut
u fucked up acceptin this battle-thinkin u'll win-thats some funny shit
cuz i'll deposit my fist in ur chest-and withdraw nuthin but ur heart in it
theres more kid-on the 7th line-u already anticipating to see whats next
thought u was a heavyweight?-but u was only rearrangin ur bench press
a waste of my text-fuck 20 lines-when in 10 the job already got done
but go ahead & drop ur 2 cents-but wait-damn..i already stole ur income
and u just been sonned!
damn..that was pretty good. thats what i'm talkin about. keep up the good
job and good luck to both in this battle.
The only time you can have sex is when you are touchin yourself
Your nothin but sum fake ass bitch who is goin to get fucked up as well
You aint go no skills and shit, that stuff you just wrote didn't sound like a spit
And if that was a spit,it sounded like you were 'tryin to' hit
But actually there didn't came nothin out of ya mouth that made sense
You know what i'm talkin about, but hey nigga, no offence
I've got a sixth sense that tells me you ain't worth a fight
And you know I'm right cuz that verse just put you outta sight
I'm the reason that you can't fall asleep at night
Cuz like Freddy Krueger I come to kill you in your dreams
Just like reality, nothin is what it seems, know what I mean?
I don't touch Myself cuz I got bitches who do it for me
The only time ITouchMyself is goin to send his shit free
Is when he sees one of my bitches standing near me
Have no fear, cuz I know you ain't worth a dime
I spit clear, just read the sign that says my verse is sick
Just go ahead and feel free to touch your dick
I don't have nothin to gays, but does that really gives you a kick?
Lets get sum votes in.........................
ITM
Eager for me to drop-i'll still wreck shop-watch as my punches disperse
spit first?-cuz u just dont feed off of lines-u eat the whole fuckin verse
it gets worse-ur minimum wage security-its useless puttin ur guard up
i could easily cut to the chase-but why?-when u already chase to the cut
u fucked up acceptin this battle-thinkin u'll win-thats some funny shit
cuz i'll deposit my fist in ur chest-and withdraw nuthin but ur heart in it
theres more kid-on the 7th line-u already anticipating to see whats next
thought u was a heavyweight?-but u was only rearrangin ur bench press
a waste of my text-fuck 20 lines-when in 10 the job already got done
but go ahead & drop ur 2 cents-but wait-damn..i already stole ur income
verse that get's my vote
metas,personals,pounches<---all was stronge ange hit to his opponente,
structure was well done as it let your whole verse flow right
Daffer22
The only time you can have sex is when you are touchin yourself
Your nothin but sum fake ass bitch who is goin to get fucked up as well
You aint go no skills and shit, that stuff you just wrote didn't sound like a spit
And if that was a spit,it sounded like you were 'tryin to' hit
But actually there didn't came nothin out of ya mouth that made sense
You know what i'm talkin about, but hey nigga, no offence
I've got a sixth sense that tells me you ain't worth a fight
And you know I'm right cuz that verse just put you outta sight
I'm the reason that you can't fall asleep at night
Cuz like Freddy Krueger I come to kill you in your dreams
Just like reality, nothin is what it seems, know what I mean?
I don't touch Myself cuz I got bitches who do it for me
The only time ITouchMyself is goin to send his shit free
Is when he sees one of my bitches standing near me
Have no fear, cuz I know you ain't worth a dime
I spit clear, just read the sign that says my verse is sick
Just go ahead and feel free to touch your dick
I don't have nothin to gays, but does that really gives you a kick?
not that great of a verse
you can use betta pounches and personals in your rhyme
keep elevating
vote
ItouchMyself
ITM wins
Better verse period.
I'll ellaborate if other kid bitches about the vote.
But yeah, he killed him
Please ellaborate then... cuz he bitched to me about this vote. -Token
uppin this thing...good looks to all who voted on this so far..drop links
and i'll peep ur battle...lets keep the votes coming...
uppin this thing again...don't sleep...come wit it...leave a link...
i'll hit it back...good looks
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this will be my 3rd upping..if this can't get no votes...fuck it then....
cats be too focused on there own shit...
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Eager for me to drop-i'll still wreck shop-watch as my punches disperse
spit first?-cuz u just dont feed off of lines-u eat the whole fuckin verse
lol...nice, i think its beter if you add wordplay or sutton but that was a nice punch
it gets worse-ur minimum wage security-its useless puttin ur guard up
i could easily cut to the chase-but why?-when u already chase to the cut
ehh
u fucked up acceptin this battle-thinkin u'll win-thats some funny shit
cuz i'll deposit my fist in ur chest-and withdraw nuthin but ur heart in it
lol, alright punch
theres more kid-on the 7th line-u already anticipating to see whats next
thought u was a heavyweight?-but u was only rearrangin ur bench press
lol haha..good punch
a waste of my text-fuck 20 lines-when in 10 the job already got done
but go ahead & drop ur 2 cents-but wait-damn..i already stole ur income
lmao....nice ending
The only time you can have sex is when you are touchin yourself
Your nothin but sum fake ass bitch who is goin to get fucked up as well
too forced, but ok bar
You aint go no skills and shit, that stuff you just wrote didn't sound like a spit
And if that was a spit,it sounded like you were 'tryin to' hit
eh :|
But actually there didn't came nothin out of ya mouth that made sense
You know what i'm talkin about, but hey nigga, no offence
lol, made me laugh, but need sumpin more hard hitting
I've got a sixth sense that tells me you ain't worth a fight
And you know I'm right cuz that verse just put you outta sight
alright...
I'm the reason that you can't fall asleep at night
Cuz like Freddy Krueger I come to kill you in your dreams
Just like reality, nothin is what it seems, know what I mean?
blah...kruger lines are also played
I don't touch Myself cuz I got bitches who do it for me
The only time ITouchMyself is goin to send his shit free
ehh, alright
Is when he sees one of my bitches standing near me
Have no fear, cuz I know you ain't worth a dime
didnt rhyme...not really hard hitting
I spit clear, just read the sign that says my verse is sick
Just go ahead and feel free to touch your dick
I don't have nothin to gays, but does that really gives you a kick?
ha..alright personal, alright ending, not a bad bar
overall i think 'ITM' took this with harder punches, nice battle though stay up..and thanxz fo the vote on my battle...wun~
ru mutherfuka crazy itm shit was straight up whack it made no sense come on now yall need to read dat again daffer had dat all da way
ITM:
punches were nice, flow was nice, personals were there, structure was nice, opener was good, closer was nice, overall = awesome verse..
Best Lines:
Eager for me to drop-i'll still wreck shop-watch as my punches disperse
spit first?-cuz u just dont feed off of lines-u eat the whole fuckin verse
^ this was funny.. nice job..
a waste of my text-fuck 20 lines-when in 10 the job already got done
but go ahead & drop ur 2 cents-but wait-damn..i already stole ur income
^ this was nice as well..
Daff:
punches were weak, flow was ok, personals were there, structure was nice, opener was wack, closer was ok, overall = good verse..
Best Lines:
But actually there didn't came nothin out of ya mouth that made sense
You know what i'm talkin about, but hey nigga, no offence
^ only one that stood out.. made me chuckle..
nice job by both cats, but i think the rookie (wink wink) got the victory..
BE SURE TO HIT THE BATTLES IN MY SIG!!
Vote - ITouchMyself
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Don't sleep on this guys.................
^aight kid. dont forget that. Follow up my Vote with your Honest VoteQuote:
Originally Posted by Daffer22
on all my battles..aight. If you could do this it would be Greatly
appreciated. On Game..Thanks.
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aight, here it is.
Multies:tie
Personal’s:tie
Punches:TouchMyself
Flow:touchMyself
Eye Opener’s:none
Vocab & Complexity:none
POLL Vote___TouchMyself.
this battle was Ok. I liked Touch's Ryme schem a little bit better then
then Daffer's. Daffer, you had a Good flow, but you should have used
more multies and Personal's. I liked your Opener and Finsher, but Touch's
Consistancy of equal bars and Flow was On Point in this Particular Battle.
RETURN THE FUCKING FAVOR PLEASE. THERE ARE TO MANY
HYPOCRYTES ON R.B! I TOOK THE TIME, PLEASE DROP A VOTE
MINE TOO. I HATE SLEEPERS. LoL.
Me_____VERSES_____INFINIT SKILLZ
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115148
Me____VERSES______D’CYPLE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...68#post1206468
Me_____VERSES_____UBEN. SONNED
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...32#post1206532
Me______VERSES_____SUNSHINE
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=115900
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Don't Sleep On This!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Quote:
ITouchMyself
Eager for me to drop-i'll still wreck shop-watch as my punches disperse
spit first?-cuz u just dont feed off of lines-u eat the whole fuckin verse
it gets worse-ur minimum wage security-its useless puttin ur guard up
i could easily cut to the chase-but why?-when u already chase to the cut
u fucked up acceptin this battle-thinkin u'll win-thats some funny shit
cuz i'll deposit my fist in ur chest-and withdraw nuthin but ur heart in it
theres more kid-on the 7th line-u already anticipating to see whats next
thought u was a heavyweight?-but u was only rearrangin ur bench press
a waste of my text-fuck 20 lines-when in 10 the job already got done
but go ahead & drop ur 2 cents-but wait-damn..i already stole ur income
Yup...
Nice punches
Personals were decent
Wordplay was ok..
Flow was good
Multies were decent
Structure was orignal (13th style)
Overall.....15/20
Quote:
Daffer22
The only time you can have sex is when you are touchin yourself
Your nothin but sum fake ass bitch who is goin to get fucked up as well
You aint go no skills and shit, that stuff you just wrote didn't sound like a spit
And if that was a spit,it sounded like you were 'tryin to' hit
But actually there didn't came nothin out of ya mouth that made sense
You know what i'm talkin about, but hey nigga, no offence
I've got a sixth sense that tells me you ain't worth a fight
And you know I'm right cuz that verse just put you outta sight
I'm the reason that you can't fall asleep at night
Cuz like Freddy Krueger I come to kill you in your dreams
Just like reality, nothin is what it seems, know what I mean?
I don't touch Myself cuz I got bitches who do it for me
The only time ITouchMyself is goin to send his shit free
Is when he sees one of my bitches standing near me
Have no fear, cuz I know you ain't worth a dime
I spit clear, just read the sign that says my verse is sick
Just go ahead and feel free to touch your dick
I don't have nothin to gays, but does that really gives you a kick?
Eh...
Punches were soft
Personals were weak
Structure was off
Multies, unheard of
Wordplay.. not really
Flow ... to original
Overall...11/20
V/13th Disciple
Daffer came to.. blah
Soft, weak, and original...
Newbiesh shit...
Keep elevatin tho