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check in and agree on line limit
drop by Tuesday Feb. 16th Midnight...or anytime before
no recycling or biting
no dickryde/crew/fan votes
*edit*
the guy below me is a fucking moron....there is a due date...no bitching out....ur crew is suppose to be "all mighty and powerful" not pussylike....dont bitch...drop on time or it will be counted as a no show....
Judge The Rhyme, Not The Crew
peace
Edit : Here's a personal for you
Your crew is dope.. :thumbup:
And it was 10-12 lines
For all these battles..
^ Fucka Wits End pussy.. ur a disgrace to ya crew.. now stfu an stop lookin fa excuses as to why u lost.
14 lines..
a compromise.. u wanted 12.. i wanted 16.
An i'll post today at some point..
-check-
No it wasnt.. Smoka jus said 'agree on line limit'.. 14.. can u not stimulate ya brain to produce 2 more lines?
Surely someone as dope as Wise Ways who's in the almighty Wits End can do that..?
An theres ya fukkn personal ^^
Lmao..what ever man..
Hottie said it in tha IJL forum
But if you already got 14 ghosted for you
Its fine with me..ya merked anyways..
Good Luck... :)
Ur genuinely afraid of losin arent u??
For those of u that dont know:
A.I = Arson Ill (elite of IJL)
Im prolly jus battling the Leaders alias.. another pussy getting whored
Wits End raises the bar?? Wise only got in cos the WarLords were floored…
Like his title this fags hopes are -dashed-.. the unfortunate misfit in his crew
Misunderstood ‘ghost writin’.. to mean bars fa blind men ta walk-thru…
Ya need ta forget ya voting rings an sad lil cliques.. ya led by a bitch
Makin Hottie a Wise leader.. first choice when it comes to handling dikks…
Welcome to Elevated.. wait.. r u lost?? < same as battlin A.I’s Leader
Ya Theory’s in Kaos.. an more conFue-Xion’s bout to occur...
Pinned ya hopes on a dream.. an like Prom Nite cherries ya bout to get popped
The Wits beginning to End.. an A.I is big shots wiv nothing but hot drops…
Big names is all ya got.. in a crew made up of.. Oh.. I forgot!
Suppose I could get myself banned.. then you’ll recruit me fa top spot…
Prediction: when this coward finishes his verse an gets to postin
Its strait to AIM, pleadin: “I need the –Technician- in to fix the votin”…
And dont post anything unless its ya verse..
Edit : just thought I'd be as special
as you and edit in my crew :)
"Wits End"
Whoa Ill..ya crews faith in u..sad to say..is covered with holes
Ain't hard to tell..even ya own leader put me on top of tha polls
This kid gets alot of ass..he's got a list of gays and boy skanks
I don't know whats dumber..
Christmas handeling money..or Ill with a picture of Loyld Banks!
..Arson Ill?
U coming at me with toy tanks & hitting me with plastic bullets
Asked Ill to carry some talent,but he got dropped trying to hold it
& U ain't naturally a herb.. so I guess I can't hold that against u.......but
Tha moment u click "post quick reply"..all of tha wackness hits u!
To Ill beating someone good is like pussy,he don't know how it feel
Got sick peeps calling his crew fake..so he had to put "tha real deal"
& ya Loyld's got a lisp..except we can't understand it quite fully
I'm hearing "feel me & hold me"..when u say.."Is really that gully"!
Like get'n contract papers for adoptions..I guarantee u total funding
Cuz fuck me spitting this shit to u..I just handed Illtalic his sonning!
Very tough battle to judge...
I like both cats, so don't wanna piss either off...
And both cats threw pretty good, so...
1)Wise takes the opener (great use of a personal and current event)
2)Gotta say that Wise hit funnier and more personal on this, nice attempt from Ill tho.
3)Wise came funny and witty, but Ill got em with the personal on his crew.
4)Going with Ill even though he reached for the rhyme, but Wise was reaching for a punch (worse in my opinion)
5)Better personal punch by Wise, alot better.
6)Ill took this with some nice wit...good shit...Wise reached again and fell flat.
7)Ill takes the closer (I'm really gettingtired of 'sonniing' disses...they've all been done...Nice personal and wordplay from Ill.
So who won?
According to that shit^^^
Ill wins by a tiny hair.
Peace
Not sure wot the numbers mean.. but thanx fa the breakdown dawg.. no link? Ok.
illtalic
Im prolly jus battling the Leaders alias.. another pussy getting whored
Wits End raises the bar?? Wise only got in cos the WarLords were floored…
not too bad, 5/10
Like his title this fags hopes are -dashed-.. the unfortunate misfit in his crew
Misunderstood ‘ghost writin’.. to mean bars fa blind men ta walk-thru…
nice, hit hard, 6/10
Ya need ta forget ya voting rings an sad lil cliques.. ya led by a bitch
Makin Hottie a Wise leader.. first choice when it comes to handling dikks…
nice personal, hit hard, 7/10
Welcome to Elevated.. wait.. r u lost?? < same as battlin A.I’s Leader
Ya Theory’s in Kaos.. an more conFue-Xion’s bout to occur...
a good personal, 6/10
Pinned ya hopes on a dream.. an like Prom Nite cherries ya bout to get popped
The Wits beginning to End.. an A.I is big shots wiv nothing but hot drops…
wording, an concepts let you down, 5/10
Big names is all ya got.. in a crew made up of.. Oh.. I forgot!
Suppose I could get myself banned.. then you’ll recruit me fa top spot…
lol, nice, solid hit hard, 7/10
Prediction: when this coward finishes his verse an gets to postin
Its strait to AIM, pleadin: “I need the –Technician- in to fix the votin”…
nice closer, 7/10
overall 43/70
wise ways
Whoa Ill..ya crews faith in u..sad to say..is covered with holes
Ain't hard to tell..even ya own leader put me on top of tha polls
lol, nice opener, 7/10
This kid gets alot of ass..he's got a list of gays and boy skanks
I don't know whats dumber..
Christmas handeling money..or Ill with a picture of Loyld Banks!
..Arson Ill?
not too bad, wording let you down, 5/10
U coming at me with toy tanks & hitting me with plastic bullets
Asked Ill to carry some talent,but he got dropped trying to hold it
nice punch, 6/10
& U ain't naturally a herb.. so I guess I can't hold that against u.......but
Tha moment u click "post quick reply"..all of tha wackness hits u!
pretty witty, 7/10
To Ill beating someone good is like pussy,he don't know how it feel
Got sick peeps calling his crew fake..so he had to put "tha real deal"
not too bad, 6/10
& ya Loyld's got a lisp..except we can't understand it quite fully
I'm hearing "feel me & hold me"..when u say.."Is really that gully"!
i didnt really like this, 5/10
Like get'n contract papers for adoptions..I guarantee u total funding
Cuz fuck me spitting this shit to u..I just handed Illtalic his sonning!
not too bad, 6/10
overall 42/70
The numbers were bars...
I just didn't copy them like Menolin did.
Peace
Gotcha..
werd at the votes..
ill takes this 1 in my opinion only just tho y?
his opener was alot better than wise i liked it alot.....wise i thought u cud of come better and ive seen better off u.....
on tha other hand wise takes the closer as his was alot clearer 2 me than urs ill.....wise i liked ur wordplay....
after that i liked both of yalls wordplay punches and personals but i tink ill took it as he came a lil bit harder than wise gd battle n e way both of yall
nice to see well broke down fair votes......nice drop from u both.....just adding my two cents :)
peace
Nice verse ill.. mine was kinda rushed cuz i was in a hurry
But Smoka get on AIM tonight...I need to talk to you about someothing
^ Here's a slice of Humble Pie for ya Wise.. u can eat it along wiv ya own words..Quote:
Originally Posted by Wise Ways
i suppose that was quick keyed verse.. not nearly ya best of course.
3-0..
-uppn-
-uppn-
::::::illtalic:::::
Im prolly jus battling the Leaders alias.. another pussy getting whored
Wits End raises the bar?? Wise only got in cos the WarLords were floored…
okay ... not to shabby ... personal/punch ...
Like his title this fags hopes are -dashed-.. the unfortunate misfit in his crew
Misunderstood ‘ghost writin’.. to mean bars fa blind men ta walk-thru…
this ones nice ..... hit hard in my opinion
Ya need ta forget ya voting rings an sad lil cliques.. ya led by a bitch
Makin Hottie a Wise leader.. first choice when it comes to handling dikks…
personal go meta / punch
Welcome to Elevated.. wait.. r u lost?? < same as battlin A.I’s Leader
Ya Theory’s in Kaos.. an more conFue-Xion’s bout to occur...
another sold personal
Pinned ya hopes on a dream.. an like Prom Nite cherries ya bout to get popped
The Wits beginning to End.. an A.I is big shots wiv nothing but hot drops…
wasnt feelin it toooo too much ... weird way to go about it
Big names is all ya got.. in a crew made up of.. Oh.. I forgot!
Suppose I could get myself banned.. then you’ll recruit me fa top spot…
made me laugh ... nice hit...pretty hard
Prediction: when this coward finishes his verse an gets to postin
Its strait to AIM, pleadin: “I need the –Technician- in to fix the votin”…
liked the closer .... good verse here kid
overall 16/20
****wise ways*****
Whoa Ill..ya crews faith in u..sad to say..is covered with holes
Ain't hard to tell..even ya own leader put me on top of tha polls
had me chucklin ... not bad at all .. nice opener
This kid gets alot of ass..he's got a list of gays and boy skanks
I don't know whats dumber..
Christmas handeling money..or Ill with a picture of Loyld Banks!
ehh.... nice ...could have been better...
U coming at me with toy tanks & hitting me with plastic bullets
Asked Ill to carry some talent,but he got dropped trying to hold it
good punch hit pretty direct ...
& U ain't naturally a herb.. so I guess I can't hold that against u.......but
Tha moment u click "post quick reply"..all of tha wackness hits u!
nice punch good meta ... personal attempt ... made me chuckle...
To Ill beating someone good is like pussy,he don't know how it feel
Got sick peeps calling his crew fake..so he had to put "tha real deal"
ehh... it was ok .. not too shabby
& ya Loyld's got a lisp..except we can't understand it quite fully
I'm hearing "feel me & hold me"..when u say.."Is really that gully"!
wasnt feelin it too much ... it was OK...
Like get'n contract papers for adoptions..I guarantee u total funding
Cuz fuck me spitting this shit to u..I just handed Illtalic his sonning!
not as good a closer as ittallic had ...
overall not a bad verse 13/20
ittalic just alittle more creative with his disses....and Choice of vocab...helped him...
some harder hitting punches and more personals wins this 4 him.......
peep my battles in elevated both of you........
Nice breakdowns on the whole.. appreciate it..
lookin to close this..
Ill
Im prolly jus battling the Leaders alias.. another pussy getting whored
Wits End raises the bar?? Wise only got in cos the WarLords were floored…
^that was ok thought it could have been a better opener
Like his title this fags hopes are -dashed-.. the unfortunate misfit in his crew
Misunderstood ‘ghost writin’.. to mean bars fa blind men ta walk-thru…
^nice i thought ok punch
Ya need ta forget ya voting rings an sad lil cliques.. ya led by a bitch
Makin Hottie a Wise leader.. first choice when it comes to handling dikks…
^^mean but good personal of the wits end crew
Welcome to Elevated.. wait.. r u lost?? < same as battlin A.I’s Leader
Ya Theory’s in Kaos.. an more conFue-Xion’s bout to occur...
^again nice personal on the crew and itz members
Pinned ya hopes on a dream.. an like Prom Nite cherries ya bout to get popped
The Wits beginning to End.. an A.I is big shots wiv nothing but hot drops…
^mediocre punch right here
Big names is all ya got.. in a crew made up of.. Oh.. I forgot!
Suppose I could get myself banned.. then you’ll recruit me fa top spot…
^^i liked this one decent punch again
Prediction: when this coward finishes his verse an gets to postin
Its strait to AIM, pleadin: “I need the –Technician- in to fix the votin”…
^^best punch nice way to close
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WW
Whoa Ill..ya crews faith in u..sad to say..is covered with holes
Ain't hard to tell..even ya own leader put me on top of tha polls
^nice...
This kid gets alot of ass..he's got a list of gays and boy skanks
I don't know whats dumber..
Christmas handeling money..or Ill with a picture of Loyld Banks!
^good punch nice way to get on his avatar,keepin it personal
..Arson Ill?
U coming at me with toy tanks & hitting me with plastic bullets
Asked Ill to carry some talent,but he got dropped trying to hold it
^kind of weak punch i thought
& U ain't naturally a herb.. so I guess I can't hold that against u.......but
Tha moment u click "post quick reply"..all of tha wackness hits u!
^wasnt feelin this punch kind of
To Ill beating someone good is like pussy,he don't know how it feel
Got sick peeps calling his crew fake..so he had to put "tha real deal"
^nice punch
& ya Loyld's got a lisp..except we can't understand it quite fully
I'm hearing "feel me & hold me"..when u say.."Is really that gully"!
^^boo!!didnt even rhyme moron:)
Like get'n contract papers for adoptions..I guarantee u total funding
Cuz fuck me spitting this shit to u..I just handed Illtalic his sonning!
^^weak ending/closer
punches-ill
personals-ill
structure-both
vocab-ww
humor-ill
similies-ill
complexity-both
creativity-both
multiples-neither
overall-ill
good battle