ite ite...ill try n drop by tonight.........
max 12 linez..........
try n spit by tonight........or rite now.........no crews.....hate.......or any garbage like dat.............
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ite ite...ill try n drop by tonight.........
max 12 linez..........
try n spit by tonight........or rite now.........no crews.....hate.......or any garbage like dat.............
check...................................i'll spit when i get home........................
ite ite.......watch as i rippp this emcee.......
His record has yet zero losses..but in math u alwayz gotta "carry" the "one"
He now gonna hide more dan hiz records-he gonna b covered up more dan a nun!!!
Your wak ass rhymes aint gonna touch me....cuz i came in wit a vaccination....
After he read mah verse-he's trembling and hez wrtiting his with great hesitation..
I didn't go so hard on him......so I think u might actually win ( wink wink)
Now watch as this emcees slowly fades away as if he were invisible ink
This faget's doing more "spitting" onto hiz screen than in hiz own verse...
He ran outta water...hez dehydrating......someone run and get a nurse!
Since itz Valentines Day, ill show luv and sink down to ur level....
In this battle im doing more "sweeping" than a supreme Dirt Devil**
None of your punches can "affect" me...cuz i came in with a vaccination..
" lyricallyabussive easy got this battle for better punches"..end of conversation
WWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTT
WWWWWWWWWWOOOOOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTTT
**A dirt devil iz a vacuum**...for yall that dont know
ite now letz here ur prewritten verse wen u get "home".......
wwwwwwtttttttttffffffffff.......in da box dat shyt was all aligned!!!!!!!
ite ite.......watch as i rippp this emcee.......MAH FAULT....CHANGED IT
His record has yet zero losses..but in math u alwayz gotta "carry" the "one"
He now gonna hide more dan hiz records,he gonna b covered up like a nun!!!
I neva seen u rap.....but by ya name im juss sayin...plze just "quit!!!!!"
No need to ask any questions...like NIKEZ moto sayz- just do it..............
I didn't go so hard on him......so I think u might actually win ( wink wink)
Now watch as this emcees slowly fades away as if he were invisible ink
This faget's doing more "spitting" onto hiz screen than in hiz own verse...
He ran outta water...hez dehydrating......someone run and get a nurse!
Since itz Valentines Day, ill show luv and sink down to ur level....
In this battle im doing more "sweeping" than a supreme Dirt Devil**
None of your punches can "affect" me...cuz i came in with a vaccination..
" lyricallyabussive easily took this battle hands down"-end of conversation
Hoe, you show no confidence...re-wrote before ya'd even read my verse...
yer from the shallow end of the gene-pool...and it seems you dove head first
not the sharpest tool in the shed...in fact, you can barely 'poke' fun...
this mark is just fifteen...so battlin' me's the epitome of being sonned
your so full of shit, geek...you should go an cop some Amodium...
pimp? you ain't foolin no one... cause yer still rockin' 'Nickelodeon'
gettin' all yer votes from your aliases...but still your ego's swoll...
because face it..real heads wouldn't touch you...with a ten foot 'poll'
lyrically abusive?...this probably couldn't be further from the truth...
no sig, yer wackness is exclusive...hope you got the 'noose'! (news)
*Nickelodeon is a kid's TV channel on cable
*pimp- he lists this as his occupation in his profile
Sorry, the link proving the personal was fucked up....here's the right one....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113450 look at the IP's in the right corner of the posts......
lets get those votes in......Pz.
noooo sonnnnnn.....i do not vote 4 mahself.....i told IR bout this...i had da same ip as many other headz....they said dat many aol users have the same ip....if u want.....dont let them vote....if they do....DQ it.....but im tellin u they aint me
uppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnn............il l b sure 2 return favor.............!!!!!!!!!!1
aight i'm the first person to vote so please hit up the links for my battles below, they've been going on for 3 or 4 weeks and still don't have enough votes, so please.
flow-tie
wordplay- somber
multis-none
creativity-somber
punches-somber
metas-somber
structure-tie
all in all:somber,
but lyrically abusive, i can see some ill material coming from you, keep elevating
upity............................................. .................................................. ..................................please vote............................no sleeping.......................................... .................................................. ..............
wwwwwwaaaaaaaaaaatttttttt????????????.......no vote sway really....but i REALLY think that that ^^^ was a dik ride.....letz get some truu voterz up in dis bitch!
uppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin 4.........leave ya linkzzz........i only need a lil more!!!!!!!!!
aight mother fuckers dis is how dis shyt went down,punches were tied as well as structure and flow, the thing in these types of battles were everything is all equal you have to look for the mistakes, and i think Somber made the biggest mistake by feeding off of lyricalyabbusive.
vote=lyricallyabusive
ite ite ite letz get sum pooooooooollllllllll vottttteezzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!1 (5).....ill return favor
No dickriding Oliverclohsoff...................you didn't explain why you thought it was tied............................anyways, up........................honest votes/feedback appreciated.......
up.........................vote................... ......please
Uppin'.....................last time......................vote assholes....................
uppppppppppppiiiiiiiiiiiiiiin 4.........leave ya linkzzz........i can now vote
lyrically abusive and somber had a pretty good battle considering he's a newb with potential............Lyrically abusive was abusing somber in some parts of da battle while being a little abused himself..........I'm gonna break it down.........Lyrically abusive had better punches dat were direct and less filler which is important........wordplay played a more vital role in dis rap battle.....because somber didn't drop as good as dissing lyrically abusive...................da better dissing drop is da one dat counts and since both verses were equally as good in punches and shit.......I would say dat da only way lyrically abusive gets ma vote is because he had better wordplay...........
vote=lyrically abusive
*vote on ma battle*
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111414
His record has yet zero losses..but in math u alwayz gotta "carry" the "one"
He now gonna hide more dan hiz records,he gonna b covered up like a nun!!!
not hard
I neva seen u rap.....but by ya name im juss sayin...plze just "quit!!!!!"
No need to ask any questions...like NIKEZ moto sayz- just do it..............
second part is played
I didn't go so hard on him......so I think u might actually win ( wink wink)
Now watch as this emcees slowly fades away as if he were invisible ink
weak punch
This faget's doing more "spitting" onto hiz screen than in hiz own verse...
He ran outta water...hez dehydrating......someone run and get a nurse!
not felling it
Since itz Valentines Day, ill show luv and sink down to ur level....
In this battle im doing more "sweeping" than a supreme Dirt Devil**
played
None of your punches can "affect" me...cuz i came in with a vaccination..
" lyricallyabussive easily took this battle hands down"-end of conversation
very weak punch...not a personal
Hoe, you show no confidence...re-wrote before ya'd even read my verse...
yer from the shallow end of the gene-pool...and it seems you dove head first
second part is nice
not the sharpest tool in the shed...in fact, you can barely 'poke' fun...
this mark is just fifteen...so battlin' me's the epitome of being sonned
lmao so so
your so full of shit, geek...you should go an cop some Amodium...
pimp? you ain't foolin no one... cause yer still rockin' 'Nickelodeon
not fellin it
gettin' all yer votes from your aliases...but still your ego's swoll...
because face it..real heads wouldn't touch you...with a ten foot 'poll'
lol so so
lyrically abusive?...this probably couldn't be further from the truth...
no sig, yer wackness is exclusive...hope you got the 'noose'! (news)
dont get it
overall somber took it
His record has yet zero losses..but in math u alwayz gotta "carry" the "one"
He now gonna hide more dan hiz records,he gonna b covered up like a nun!!!
^good meta4 and wordplay with the math thing...nice opener ....
I neva seen u rap.....but by ya name im juss sayin...plze just "quit!!!!!"
No need to ask any questions...like NIKEZ moto sayz- just do it..............
^been done but not a bad punch....no to cap anything bro...
I didn't go so hard on him......so I think u might actually win ( wink wink)
Now watch as this emcees slowly fades away as if he were invisible ink
^done b4 too much borderline played....weak punch...
This faget's doing more "spitting" onto hiz screen than in hiz own verse...
He ran outta water...hez dehydrating......someone run and get a nurse!
^this is a weird punch....its either a sex joke or a compliment either way...no
Since itz Valentines Day, ill show luv and sink down to ur level....
In this battle im doing more "sweeping" than a supreme Dirt Devil**
^aright this is fine wordplay...good punch...creative..
None of your punches can "affect" me...cuz i came in with a vaccination..
" lyricallyabussive easily took this battle hands down"-end of conversation
^last line filler.........not a good thing to make your last line filler dog....overall..played verse..
Hoe, you show no confidence...re-wrote before ya'd even read my verse...
yer from the shallow end of the gene-pool...and it seems you dove head first
^this is mad played...shallow end of any pool and diving in is just blah,...
not the sharpest tool in the shed...in fact, you can barely 'poke' fun...
this mark is just fifteen...so battlin' me's the epitome of being sonned
^aight this is ...an alright bar it had two punches....which is rare in a front line battle.
your so full of shit, geek...you should go an cop some Amodium...
pimp? you ain't foolin no one... cause yer still rockin' 'Nickelodeon'
^Immodium is for diarea..you used it wrong..hehe nice on the nickelodeon..
gettin' all yer votes from your aliases...but still your ego's swoll...
because face it..real heads wouldn't touch you...with a ten foot 'poll'
^good wordplay i'll just assume you were trying for that wordplay..
lyrically abusive?...this probably couldn't be further from the truth...
no sig, yer wackness is exclusive...hope you got the 'noose'! (news)
^this is done but at least its not filler.....overall borderline weak/decent verse..
somber takes this due to the fact he came with less played shit and threw the only good punch in the whole battle...the nicklodeon one....pz oh and lyrically abusive if you vote is taken away i will pm you to replace it....have a good day
physik u will never get 1 vote from me in ur life
yall no i took this battle lets get some votes uppin here
ill return the favor