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No KO RULE actually, 5 votes = win
I'm up first, 1 round or two? You chose wordplay. :gfy:
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Normal Rules:
No KO RULE actually, 5 votes = win
I'm up first, 1 round or two? You chose wordplay. :gfy:
Aite here it is, like a 15 min key, let me now how many rounds you want word..
Ya call yaself wordplay, you n’ a million others,
But ya rhymes worth bout as much as a Ryan Leaf autograph forged by Jake Plummer,
It’s Friday the 13th, n’ I’ll make sure ya ass gone til November,
‘Cuz I’ll ‘fuck’ this kid ‘up’ like ‘mile high’ club members,
I know you wanna be hard, but don’t think it or speak it,
‘Cuz I’m stickin’ a grenade in ya ‘armpit’ to blow out ya ‘secret’,
Besides bein weak kid, you lie bout ya rhymes,
Sayin’ you only lose battles when ya get disqualified,
You must be some kinda bad ass, ‘cuz you got THREE losses,
And not ONE muthafuckin’ W to floss bitch,
Now get it right, my shit’s hot son, I never flopped once,
Yours isn’t, you may have a nice car though, I leave ya brains ridin’ shotgun,
Also my rhymes dumb hot, ya simple ass is just plenty dumb,
This kid wanna battle me, but he download my music more than anyone,
Look dawg, ya name’s all wrong, I bet you babble man,
Calls himself ‘wordplay’ but he aint no ‘Scrabble’ champ,
He’ll read this key then draw a firm blank,
But I want you to die happy word, so I’ll drown you in a sperm bank,
I’ll take a stab in the ‘dark’ to make ‘light’ of a fucked up situation,
And say wordplay won’t ‘come back’ like a testicular cancer patient..
Ryan Leaf and Jake Plummer are two quaterbacks who were thought to be the next best QB's outta college, but they ended up sucking..
You're up wordplay, haha.. peace
sorry bout the delay......you recycled yourself so hard, you might as well've restarted/
you went fourteen lines, then ran away, faster than your real father/
congratulations, on the personals, they were real original/
look at this herb's avatar, his fuckin' thong is visible/
unlike my status, a second round, word wont have it/
my minds more disturbed, than this cats download habit's/
you got more kiddie porn, than micheal jackson's laptop/
sharing files with r. kelly, at a pastors prayer spot/
this battles hardly, worth the effort put into words/
the tightest rhyme in your post, was in your fuckin' signature/
never mind, that was a quote, the illest rhymes you got, some other rapper wrote/
you rhymes sound minor, this child needs a chaperone/
act your age, wait..if you did, you'd need permission to come play/
your wack as fuck here, but I bet your the dopest in third grade/
yeah your real tight, trying to blow up on a website/
the only show you did was with your sis on karaoke night/
I lose a lot, so what ,fuck what this rookie thinks/
I got close to his avitar, and realized his pussy stinks/
if you want another round..let me know...ha
ya know what..this don't need another round.....
uppin for votes.............................................
uppin' again.............vote on this..and drop a link to yours..I will come vote on it.
back to the top..................your ignoring me stop
get in here and vote............ummmfuck rhyming
vote............
ya'll are just being pricks...get over here...vote...........
last up I'm aloud to do.....drop a vote...critism..shit talk
I dont' care just say something.....
Cmon people leys get some votes on this battle, don't sleep on it!! First to 5 wins, peace..
7one got this easy....
his verse was fillledd with punches and personals....his was pretty funny too
i enjoyed it
wordplay- ur verse was good....but 2 serious and not many DECENT punches.....good shyt tho....but 70ne took this
punches: 7one- hit harder.......nice
flow: 70ne- good shyt with that........had nice rhythm
structure- tie.....both wayyy offff
vote: 7one....very nice......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114144
hit that up wit an opinion or vote plze......
in my opinion WORDPLAY had more punches and harder hittin ones at that .. 7one came aigh but i felt wordplay ... in real life battles whateva emcee can get the crowd to laugh more usually gets the W ... in this case i felt both skillz were evenly matched and it came down to humor wit me ... WORDPLAY had me laughin wit the father line and the download habits ... good shit ...
overall-WORDPLAY
Aite 1-1, uppin.. don't sleep people this battles been done for a while..
Fuckin Uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!
Break Down
7one..
U kept flow and ok wordplay cool punches…Ur fav line was
“Cuz I’m stickin’ a grenade in ya ‘armpit’ to blow out ya ‘secret’,”
That was pretty clever..
Overall decent flow nothing spotacular however good..
Break down
Wordplay..
Was really simplistic nothing great at all…U kept flow
However lacked punches…wordplay was bleh…and
Personals you did try.…
Ur fav line was
“the tightest rhyme in your post, was in your fuckin' signature/”
Just my opinion
My vote goes to 7one
Please return the fav and vote here honest vote…
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post1184727
2-1 uppity uppin...................................
Uppppppppppppppppppppppppppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!
yo 7one i want to battle you want do you say you up for it
aiight, an aiight battle
WORDPLAY...you kept a good flow all da way through and your structure was pretty poor. you tried to do some punches but they didnt really hit that hard, but your personals were aiight. Your wordplay was pretty good in my opinion.
Keep it up...
7ONE...again you kept an aiight flow but your structure was poor as well. Your punches were better then WORDPLAY'S but they still didnt hit that hard. your personals were aiight but Iwould have liked to see some more from you.
Keep it up..
vote WORDPLAY
WTF STOP SLEEPIN PEOPLE, ADMIN, SOMEBODY PLEASE VOTE THIS BATTLE HAS BEEN WAY OVER.. 2-2 last uppin
7one's shotgun line was hot and a few other lines were kool, and he had a nice flow some kool mutlis at times.. but the 'come back' and 'fuck you up' lines are mad played.. the scrabble champ line was nice.. from wordplay.. the closer.. chaperone.. and signature lines were nice, good personals.. specially the finisher.. this was close, flow was about even.. personals about even.. and punches too.. but creativity and consistancy goes to wordplay.. he edged this match with a few wittier lines.. it was close, you both have similar styles, i just feel word was more to the point, vote-wordplay.. peep this and return an honest vote plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114402
needs votes............................................. ...
fareal............................................ ......
put a fucking vote in here..I'll hit you back imediately...
votes..............votes.......................... ....
this was never closed......i'll hit anybody back that votes on this...drop your links....
in my opinion WORDPLAY had more punches and harder hittin ones at that .. 7one came aigh but i felt wordplay ... in real life battles whateva emcee can get the crowd to laugh more usually gets the W ... in this case i felt both skillz were evenly matched and it came down to humor wit me ... WORDPLAY had me laughin wit the father line and the download habits ... good shit ...
overall-WORDPLAY
messy structures from both..but few wordplay and punches was hot from both but especialy wordplay was hard from "wordplay" ironicaly... so i gave word the edge on this..both was nice apart from structure...both work on that yeah
vote-word
harder punch n play
pz
this battles hardly, worth the effort put into words/
the tightest rhyme in your post, was in your fuckin' signature/
&
never mind, that was a quote, the illest rhymes you got, some other rapper wrote/
you rhymes sound minor, this child needs a chaperone/
&
I lose a lot, so what ,fuck what this rookie thinks/
I got close to his avitar, and realized his pussy stinks/
versus
I know you wanna be hard, but don’t think it or speak it,
‘Cuz I’m stickin’ a grenade in ya ‘armpit’ to blow out ya ‘secret’,
&
I’ll take a stab in the ‘dark’ to make ‘light’ of a fucked up situation,
And say wordplay won’t ‘come back’ like a testicular cancer patient..
Overall/=Str8 Battle for sumthan last year.almost 2 years ago...But I gotta give it 2 wordplay for having harder punches or may I say more punches,cuz That comeback line was nice....But overall word got it...Throwback battles!!!
V=Wordplay