Auspicious vs. ILLunatic

12-16 lines
Im spittin first
no feeding
no bullshit
you should know the rules by now
spit when your on

Aight....
I'm bout ta be out so..
I'll drop around 12c
Good luck

This kid sux ...* like.. DAMN*...

aight..
Ya styles gay, punches aint good, n' niether are you
made every thread in the execs forum....
...................n' hes not even the leader of that crew
ya thru, you can play n' whine, try to play off my rhymes
but how you gon' be a lunatic? you cant even drop crazy lines
im quick to withstand, hes retarded, n' this bitch is my fan?
talk about fat..
he ate to many doughboys, n' transformed in the michelan man !
damn.. i got this to stop his constant responses
but to be honest.. blah blah, im gay, wack-
- why read his verse ^^ thats the whole synopsis..
you cant top this.. write sum shit? naw, he aint even on my margin
Retarded, stupid, illiterate <--- he was guilty on all charges
i got more personals on him, n' i know nuthin about this queer
Elite dont want you,
n' i personally dont know why frontlines allowed u here
thats weird, hes persistant, i mean shit he's lost every match he's spit in
dont get it twisted, He aint ILL, nor a luntatic..
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So that pretty much sums up his existance

This bitch droppin personals, like they actually hurt my feelings
As i drop a punch..........
......its like steppin on a rat, cuz you hear Thug Whyte squeeling
"Fucka user title"?.............. why cuz you got nothin witty to say
Ya rhymes flow in the shittiest way........
....Ya sad cuz no one shows love to you, not even on valentines day
Auspicous... he's not favorable, hes like a ghost, he hasn't been seen
He hasn't been straight up and clean............
.......bitch looks back to the days, see's conflict and has a liquid dream
Bitch wanna IM me, challange me to a battle, like he believes he dope
I believe it??? nope, his popularity fallin downhill like an avalanch slope
Shit, this kids fallin faster then the twin towers, and no one bothers to care
Not even worth the stare, his natural flows hideous enough to give a scare
No time to prevent, just regret, the time ya spent writtin just ta get bent
Its like an eviction, you forgot to pay ya rent, now you homless in a tent
^Wack i kno, i'm not scared to admit it, but kid ya style and image dont fit it
Only way it would flow is if i shit it, ya not a rapper...so stop the game and quit it
Bitch you gonna end up like your father, locked up and behind some unhealthy bars
You jealous over wealthy stars.........
....................... shouldn't of challenged me, its your fault that i delt the cards

ILLunatic...... why u gonna be a bitch an not drop on our battle from like 3 weeks ago...... cuz u know i whooped your ass....c'mon don't be a puss find the thread an drop a fuckin verse i want that win.....

aight....

^Who the fuck is you????
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Virtuoso you got a battle with illmatic
Not me... so step the fuck of up off my dick
Get your facts straight....

uppin
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lol my bad.... the names are close...... again my bad..... now im uppin this battle..............
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Blah.. props to auspicious

uhh no votes.. but thanks corn flake
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Breakdown..

Auspicious:
Nice verese In my opinion you started off slow, then you came very good
With personals. Structure was real good. An easy read.

Your best line
“why read his verse ^^ thats the whole synopsis..
you cant top this.. write sum shit? naw, he aint even on my margin
Retarded, stupid, illiterate <--- he was guilty on all charges”

There were some more quotable however this is what caught my eyes
The most.. Nicely done.


Breakdown..
ILLunatic :

Your verse wasn’t hard hitting not really any quotable I think you can
Do better,, I guess you was being lazy. At any rate Your best line
“believe it??? nope, his popularity fallin downhill like an avalanch slope”
That was pare…


Over all Auspicious wins
Due to better personals
Please vote on my battle honest votes..it’s being slept on

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...27#post1184727

Wow! Aus. U couldve came harder But I think u still got this...Ill Dropped some dope shit,
Punches- Both Used played lines nothing really to creative humerous or special, although Aus. Thru More creative punches than ill...Better worded..Just Harder hitting all around
Personals- Aus. Had more shit directed towards Ill Than Ill had towards Aus., But Ill U had a couple of Humerous Lines in there, The Thug Whyte SHit is kinda played on Aus. tho..
Flow- Both Came descent , kept it on track w./ there structure, Tie
Structure- Tie , Both structures Were similar...

Over it came down to Aus. Punches being more creative and humerous and his personals were better directed and nicer.....
Good battle Tho

V/ Auspicious

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107056

Drop an honest vote on that if u would

Aus and Ill came nicely.....seen much better from Aus though...and ILL came good and had a few decent punches here and there..

Quote:

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From Auspicious:
i got more personals on him, n' i know nuthin about this queer
Elite dont want you,
n' i personally dont know why frontlines allowed u here

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lmao...funny...nice punch..your opener was good also

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From ILLunatic:
"Fucka user title"?.............. why cuz you got nothin witty to say
Ya rhymes flow in the shittiest way........
....Ya sad cuz no one shows love to you, not even on valentines day

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^nice hit...and decent personal..

Opener - Auspicious
Closer - Auspicious
Punches - Auspicious (had witty hard hitting ones)
Personals - Tie
Structure - Auspicious
Vocab - Illunatic
Vote - Auspicious, for having a hard hitting verse....nice personals...Ill had good personals....but he had kinda weak attempts at hard punches...

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thanks.. upp'n
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Auspicious: Nice multies. Had good flow and some good punches. You couldve came a lot harder, but your verse was enough to take this match.

Illunatic: Wasnt really feeling your verse. You had some weak punches. You had some flow, but your verse was blah.

V/ Auspicious

last upp..
hit the fuckin thing up
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aight lets see here....

aus-nice opener nice closer
nice pounches
nice personals
structyure was there
flow was ok
better vocab

illunatic-
ok punches
personals were aight
flow was better
strcture was ok
wordplay was aight

so i think that punches and personals made this battle good
for better personals and harder hitiing punches....

v/auspicious

yo hit up the battle in my sig and ill come back and poll
i need one more vote

COMPLETELY ONE SIDED... ... i mea really..... pretty weak battle... but Aus took this hands down... yep... not the greatest verse but good enough for the taken victory son... YEP... keep gettin at it kids... ...

VOTE - Aus

Caesar - On3