..Syck.. vs. Bruise Banner

Here's the rules........
10 lines...
3-0 is a KO...
No d/r votes...
No hate votes...
No biting..... etc
drop in an hour...starting when you check in......

Check........

after this battle, Battle banter owes me a battle.

check............................................. .......

Keeeeeeeeeeeey..



yo this cat sucks.. in fact, he probly dont rap much
so i'll have him C-D-L.. like he was driving a Mac truck
dont gotta try for this wack fuck.. the dude is played
plus he wont be here long.. cuz we know Bruises fade
hes got a flow with no punches.. u see his shit plummet
so i'll shove my..
words down ya throat, to make u 'Syck to ya stomach'
no way to beat Syck, u can try but son thats weak shit
we could talk wit skillz but you'd have, none to speak wit
see ya speechless & its no wonder, ya just badly repped
so now this kid just felt a loss.. like he had a family death

*CDL- truck driver's liscense

Ahhheemmm........

Leave and never come back...and I say this with sincerity....
Yer' wack... actually being 'syck' would just be a parody...
Apparently you think you can battle...which is kinda' insulting....
cause the only time you drop bars...is when yer' polevaulting...
Simular to butterknifes...your spit's pointless and wont cut it'
just like your Rap Battles career started ... it will end that sudden'
No girth... your worth is measured on micrometers...
Drops not even hot enough... to register on thermometers....
Yer' right you are syck.... but only because I cant stomach you...
Consider me the Big Brother program... cause ya just got sonned' fool
Blah...........kinnda weak......oh well............

up................................................ ..................

up up and away..............................................

good battle for 2 newb's.....
Syck.. ur verse was ok....needs a lota work tho...punches came week...and there was no flow realy.....no personals...and structure....USE personals coz they win battles bro...aaiiigght...overall 5/10
Bruise Banter...ur verse was cool 4 a newb....dat line bout pollvoltin was good....punches were ok,some week....flow very basic...and not realy much structure,once again no personals......overall:6.5/10(not bad)...keep it up both of u.
v/Bruise Banter(beta alround)

are you kidding.. read what you just said.. i had a punch and personal in just about every bar IDIOT.. i hate newbies

up................................................ ..........................................

up.. i'll hit up links with an honest vote.............................................. ..............

this is rediculous.. and i voted on like 5-6 battles........... *sigh* up for vottttttttttteeeeeeeeeeeeeessssssssssssss

Bruise took this.

Had the wordplay edge.

And the originality/creativity.

But Syck wasn't bad at all, man.

Real impressive.

Great wordplay and punch on the "mac truck" line.
Real nice personal on his name ("fade" line)...

But ya "shove down throat" line has been played over and over.
So's the "skill" one...
And the closer was weak.

Bruise had the better vocab, and spit shit I hadn't seen before.
(well, hadn't seen as often)

Just a bit better, Bruise.

Peace

am i missing something here............................... HELLLLOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO someone who knows what a punch and personal is plz vote.. save me from a robbery

lol at born to kills vote.. hey word of advice syck if you want to battle on here dont bring anyskills to the table because people will vote against you

heres a real vote

syck- i liked your wordplay in this battle you came creative with your disses

"dont gotta try for this wack fuck.. the dude is played
plus he wont be here long.. cuz we know Bruises fade"

i liked that shit also "no way to beat Syck, u can try but son thats weak shit
we could talk wit skillz but you'd have, none to speak wit"

bruise banner- you came with elementary wordplay.. your verse didnt have any creative disses that i saw.. also you had some played out lines like this "cause the only time you drop bars...is when yer' polevaulting"

i felt like your disses were basic

vote- syck

^ agreed......
both had nice punches...but syk's came across much harder, and i disagree with btk....
syk's wordplay was better than bruise.....both had good structures....metas were better from syk... ...bruise....that parady line just wasnt hard enuff.....good polevolting line liked that....butter knife line/carreer line...was ehh...okay...but i was losin your flow and i think the disses/punches fell off toward the end....
syck's mac truck line was nasty ....his closer was much better then bruises....the speak with line BTL says is played i havent herd to many versions of it....and overall syck's multies were to good...cuz they came with punches too....so i think he easily wins this battle even tho banner did drop nicely...
and p.s.
i doubt your newbs! ;)

up # 3................................... or 4.......................... one of em............ leave a link.................

god damn will you fucks vote, yall put up battles and bitch about not getting votes then u sit there and dont wanna give to get.. i voted on like 10 battles and got one vote from one of them.. thats 9 assholes who expect to get votes when they aint giving any.. no wonder it takes a week and 10 ups to finish a battle

guess this is my last up.. .................................................. ..............

Yeah I got to go with Born on this one....
Syck...no dount you got that hot shit...but it seemed like you didn't have that edge in the wordplay department....you had the flow dept...your shit was seamless almost..but you were a little simple and uncreative with the punches..compared to Banter anyway...he ahd a little more wit with his shit..

Bruise...i like the drop...agressive..wordplay was stupid..you came up with some good lines..especially the parody line..i think that your verse was a little more "Grown Up"
the flow was the only thing you lacked in because syck came so clean but that's the only place that he really beat you in...your punches and your wordplay were a lot better....Good battle..I got a sneaking suspicion that you guy's got aliases. ( I may be wrong though...not really a newbish flow from either of you though.)

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113614

i doubt either of you are newbs. Great battle good flow on both prats Structures where almost the same. I think that Sycks multies and punches where amazing nice shit man. Bruise you punches i didint think landed as hard and i though syck had a little more multies but your wordplay made up for that rilly nice, very orignial and creative verse.

Overall - Syck. sycks punches and multies overall took this one. great battle very close one.

up..................................vote.......... ......................................

up.........vote................................... ..............................................

Syck i think pulled this one out i wuz feelin it puches seen to hit right, dont know bout ur structure too much but just keep elevatin.........good shit dowg

bruise ur shit wuz good too just i think u had some played lines for the most part...no hate elevate

vote= syck

yea here ya go i'll break it down....as far as wittiness is concerned syck came better alot of good met4's and wordplay throughout his verse.....alot to work on still though syck your punches didn't hit as hard as you would like them to......the best ones you had were....the bruise faded line and the death in the family line......make your punches short and sweet and that will help them be more affective also make sure you look at what your saying in your punch.....like i leave this kid stuck in the face ...cause he's a disgrace....all you really did was call him a disgrace.....thats not so hardcore despite the line b4 it....

Bruise you have the right idea just need to work on sculpting your style a bit...you said it yourself that you came a little weak which is good so that means you know what weak is....I recommend walkin around in your day to day life and thinking in metaphors and punches it really helps ...overall good battle ..vote syck pz.