10 lines.
no hate, dickrydin, crew votes. and no BULLSHIT..
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10 lines.
no hate, dickrydin, crew votes. and no BULLSHIT..
:gfy:
oh and the verses are due within 40 minutes from your check in..
dont duck on me..lets do this shit qiuk..and get some evenin Votes..LoLoLoLo
i here i had get rid some otha nicca no longa breathe
u go first casuse u wanted ta battle me itz only fair
Its ova man ima murda dis nicca
Anit this some shit how this rookie gon go up against a vet//
hold on ...... i tell yo lines wack azz fuck an i anit even seen them yet//
im tha type of pimp that ah just walk pass ya chick and make her blush//
then five mins later im like jay-z all up in that funk that sweet that nasty that gushy stuff//( THINK ABOUT IT)
me and my niggaz own tha street so we stay committed//
wit glock tha will pop off like small bras on some big tities// (OH NO)
and tha hoes u roll wit they anit my type//
i only use them chick azz taste tester for my pipe// (DAMN)
I got somethin on my waist and i call it my buscit//
quick tha ditch it//
when i hit u wit somethin exsplizit//
im done spittin at this bitch//
i hope yo style not ice cold, cause i spit heat that will melt it ta liquid//(itz ova)
holla at cha boy itz ova u fucca
aight..i juss seen this..
im postin here within 15..late..
Im Still Here Lil Nicca Tha Win Iz All Me So Drop It Now
I Have Ta Go Battle 2morrow >>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>>
[QUOTE=KiLLa_CaLi]aight..i juss seen this..
:laugh2:
your a Baby Like Huey I'm playin your Game.. So getta Clue See
I could be Known as the Wackest Rapper, and still be better then You G
I'm Curly so Sue Me and when i ask if your Wack.. your answeres Usually
Beat your Face Redder then a Ruby..Like a Bee Reproducin your the New-b
Un-CLEAR your Flows Misty Better yet described as the Word Mystical..
Your Blind to what Rap really is..so you cover it up with the name Lyrical
before i even posted your Swaying Just Like my Nuts Above You..
T-bag you suck dude..Have a Baby with Youself cuz i Said Fuck You..
Your verse makes Me Honeslty Laugh On..your whole Concepts Rap Wrong
Your justa whore for R.b to Gain Wins like a Bitch that Players Pass On..
Merked..
Hopefully we get Vet Votes damn-it..
uppin nuber one...
come on kids let get some VETS in here to vote..
im sick of some of these fuckers...
wtf..when i merk a kid theres no votes..
this site isa bitch...Lol
uPpIn #2
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Originally Posted by KiLLa_CaLi
well if it isn't kyle lol anyways you got this hands down with the punches nuff said.
well, if it isnt anthony..
wuz crack-in, besides Mike...LoL...
P'm me Dawg..got sum shit ta talk bout...aight..
hey DECEPTION..POLL VOTE FOR ME..YOU VOTED BUT FORGOT TO POLL VOTE..
UPPIN, THIS IS MY 4TH...
LYRICAL..YOU NEED TO START UPPIN THIS ISH...AIGHT...
Shitty battle becuz its so lobsided...... Killa Cali obviously took this...
Best lines:
"Beat your Face Redder then a Ruby..Like a Bee Reproducin your the New-b"
"Your Blind to what Rap really is..so you cover it up with the name Lyrical"
ya flow was a bit stretched but u had a couple decent punches n some wordplay...
First dude Lyrikal needs to work on everything... couldnt read his shitty ass spelling n grammar... but flow was stretched n punches were shitty... everything was basic and worst of all you a net thug...
take a trip to wackness emergency center
shit definetly not lopsided dis shits close,
killa kali
your a Baby Like Huey I'm playin your Game.. So getta Clue See
I could be Known as the Wackest Rapper, and still be better then You G
````good multi, but didn't tie in the baby huey thang wit the punch
I'm Curly so Sue Me and when i ask if your Wack.. your answeres Usually
Beat your Face Redder then a Ruby..Like a Bee Reproducin your the New-b
````good muliti, good wordplay wit the Curly sue, but agian weak punch
Un-CLEAR your Flows Misty Better yet described as the Word Mystical..
Your Blind to what Rap really is..so you cover it up with the name Lyrical
````not very good, wordplay didnt make up for the weak punch in this one
before i even posted your Swaying Just Like my Nuts Above You..
T-bag you suck dude..Have a Baby with Youself cuz i Said Fuck You..
````nice simily, i get it how he was talkin before u spit, so decent punch. and alright word play wit the fuck u have a baby part
Your verse makes Me Honeslty Laugh On..your whole Concepts Rap Wrong
Your justa whore for R.b to Gain Wins like a Bitch that Players Pass On..
```good punch decent finisher
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Anit this some shit how this rookie gon go up against a vet//
hold on ...... i tell yo lines wack azz fuck an i anit even seen them yet//
````good word play and multi, nice punch, but u a newb so obvious untrue
im tha type of pimp that ah just walk pass ya chick and make her blush//
then five mins later im like jay-z all up in that funk that sweet that nasty that gushy stuff//( THINK ABOUT IT)
`````good self exalt, smooth, no multi, but good
me and my niggaz own tha street so we stay committed//
wit glock tha will pop off like small bras on some big tities// (OH NO)
````nice original simily, funny, could rhyme good if said correctly so i'll give it ta ya
and tha hoes u roll wit they anit my type//
i only use them chick azz taste tester for my pipe// (DAMN)
````weak, didnt like this punch, and controdicted earlier punch
I got somethin on my waist and i call it my buscit//
quick tha ditch it//<<<when i hit u wit somethin exsplizit//
im done spittin at this bitch//
i hope yo style not ice cold, cause i spit heat that will melt it ta liquid//(itz ova)
decent finisher, good multi, work on the flow tho
vote- Lyrical, had better punches, could work on flow and muti's killa kali beat u on, but punches one this and that blush, gooshy stuff, exatlin line.
someone hit this up who can poll vote- drop a link i got chu, das how i voted on this one so hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107529
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killa kali:your opener was ayite, the last line made it good, and just a little humorous.
your punches were pretty good for the most part, a few were played , but they all hit pretty hard...your use of multiples could've been a little stronger, but they flowed ayite, no metaphors....you had some wordplay..nice touch with the curly" line ....your closer was structure nice, it flowed wel, and the punch hit prety hard as well..you can still improve though.....
lyrikal03:your opener wasn't bad, the structure was decent, but misspelling words is a no-no, also the punch was a little played..try being more creative. your punches weren't all there, they were played simple, and hit really soft, its like you weren't taking this battle seriously....you tried using multiples, but it didn't work out so well, you had no metaphors or wordplay...so on to the closer.......was just bad, it was so played, you need to build your vocab, and just battle a lot more....
vote:killa kali
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