You know da rules 30-45 minutes after both check inn 10-16 lines
no hate
no crew
no dr
no feedin
no bitin
no recylin
check in so i can start keyin dis is my check as wellll :evilgrin:
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You know da rules 30-45 minutes after both check inn 10-16 lines
no hate
no crew
no dr
no feedin
no bitin
no recylin
check in so i can start keyin dis is my check as wellll :evilgrin:
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Originally Posted by OliverClohsoff
Aight.. Im in.. 30 to 45.. g'luck
aight u too immma start keyin now....................
My spits are like art hence mah nick name Mister Vincent Van Gough
Too bad i didnt invent glasses cuz i still cant seem to find Cali's flow
Killa Cali ur ass aint nutin more den a fag who is still learning how to spit
Can sum1 plz hook killa up wit sum accuracy cuz his punches dont seem 2 hit
But the sperm does cuz he always has stains left on his double chin
Bitch da only thing ur ever killed was ur flow and chance to win
Please help us all out by makin an actual flow by goin to rhymezone.com
Beacuse ur punches are more used den da condoms u used on ur own mom
I saw ur last battle, and i'd like to say please enough with the quotation marks
Forget about ur mom, bitch u couldn't even get laid by a blind bitch in da dark
:shoot:
I'm Reversing the Normal Just by Serving The Chef..
everything Straight all but his Sex..Twist Oliver's Text..
Torn Like Wet Paper this faker gets Cut like shick Razor's..
Im sick of Bitch Haters..they Smashed Like Mashed Taters..
Re-arange Ya Features By taking you A-part
And still thinkin you Smart when your Looking Like Potatoe Head..
Im callin the Plays Im'a Hit N' run..Just Like Jose Cansacoe Did..
Similar to Whites in College Hill..Kid your Getting Left Out..
Drama's too Intense for you..so Mommies Tit Just Popped Out!
Played Pre-writ boring Flow..This reminds me of your's Son
Your Just a UseLess Presence Like a Kid left outta Four-Sum..
I'ts an OxiMoron your Lyrics a Raging BoreSome..
I know this Kid and he's White..So it's Easy To Snort' Em..
aight im not white so i dont know where u got that from ..........uppin numba 1
good battle boyz real close but i was feelin olivers shit...........hey oliver when i get a opening i wanna battle u let me know holla..........1
yo dis was honestly a pretty good battle... hard to choose who actually won.. but im gonna vote fo ~Oliver~!!
I feel like he had wittier and well structured punches... his flo seemed to be about the same as ~killa~ but just came across harder. ~killa~ u had some pretty decent lines an i liked ur but i think u coulda came a lot harder. sorry man, based on flow, punched, wit, an overall good vocab~ i vote for Oliver
thanks for da two votes guys and 1 i will battle u later....uppin number 2
blah....weak battle mayne....
oliver took this basically...Killa_cali you got potential kid but you need to work on better punches...you had him in everything but punches..and we all know punches win battle..go to WEC and look at punch formats and ish...you could be very dope...in ths battle you were not...neither was he though....just less wack ish...therefore..
v/oliver
I think daz said it best when he said very weak battle, I think OliverClohsoff(very good name) lol took this battle because he had the better punches. Killa had some good shyt but not as strong i think the best line you must of had was ur opener but still Oliver came with a better closer, so therefor my vote goes to Oliver.
oooo.......weak battle......very one sided.......oliver took this eazillllyyyyy
1) moma jokes r played
2) killa- werk on ya flowwww
punhces: oliver
flow: oliver
structure: tie....both were good
creativity: oliver
strength in punches: oliver
vote: oliver
Killa's verse
I'm Reversing the Normal Just by Serving The Chef..
everything Straight all but his Sex..Twist Oliver's Text..
Nice opener good play on his name..
Torn Like Wet Paper this faker gets Cut like shick Razor's..
Im sick of Bitch Haters..they Smashed Like Mashed Taters..
another decent punch..it connected in my opinion..
Re-arange Ya Features By taking you A-part
And still thinkin you Smart when your Looking Like Potatoe Head..
ehh..this was a weak punch, next time dont rhyme the last word of your set up line with a word in the middle of your punchline..
Im callin the Plays Im'a Hit N' run..Just Like Jose Cansacoe Did..
err..Im thinkin did was suppose to rhyume with head..but..the meta 4 in this line was decent..
Similar to Whites in College Hill..Kid your Getting Left Out..
Drama's too Intense for you..so Mommies Tit Just Popped Out!
I liked the set up, but the punchline was..err..:wtf:<-----that explains it..
Played Pre-writ boring Flow..This reminds me of your's Son
Your Just a UseLess Presence Like a Kid left outta Four-Sum..
good, you finally redeemed yourself in this punch..good job, you were starting to fall-off for a sec..
I'ts an OxiMoron your Lyrics a Raging BoreSome..
I know this Kid and he's White..So it's Easy To Snort' Em
uhh..fake personal..weak closer...
Oliver's verse
My spits are like art hence mah nick name Mister Vincent Van Gough
Too bad i didnt invent glasses cuz i still cant seem to find Cali's flow
ehh,..weak ass opener, semi-weak punchline..
Killa Cali ur ass aint nutin more den a fag who is still learning how to spit
Can sum1 plz hook killa up wit sum accuracy cuz his punches dont seem 2 hit
weak set up.. decent punchline..
But the sperm does cuz he always has stains left on his double chin
Bitch da only thing ur ever killed was ur flow and chance to win
one of the best punches in your verse..kinda gay though..
Please help us all out by makin an actual flow by goin to rhymezone.com
Beacuse ur punches are more used den da condoms u used on ur own mom
somemore played shit..but average punch..Ive seen better from you..
I saw ur last battle, and i'd like to say please enough with the quotation marks
Forget about ur mom, bitch u couldn't even get laid by a blind bitch in da dark
nice closer..better than Killa's..so..you get points there..
overall..I will have to give this shit to Killa, more consistent punches..but...since Oliver is my crew I cant vote..but all I got to say is keep elevating..both of yall..and Killa..come try-out for my crew..peace..
oliver you recked his bitch ass hard
like when a train hits a car hes all crunched up and flyin to pieces
lol^^ thanks to every one who voted and fuck u dixe i mean krogenicx...lol jk'in uppin number 3
your Own Crew Voted against you..thats Funny..no hate tho..
Honestly i thionk i won in this battle...oliverclothesoff, you hadda good punches..
but i seriously think i got this..these voters are bullshittin..even tho they might not have a reason too..
i aint swayin, but Kryolgenics had the best OVERALL explanation in this battle, then thought i won..whether it was barely or NOT..
HOPEFULLY VOTERS TAKE A SECOND LOOK BEFORE DROPPIN A CLUELESS VOTE....
UppIn
yes boss!!!!! im still winnin though 3-0 upppiin number 3
^^ I wish you would stop sayin the word boss..seriously...it gets annoying enough over aim..
boss calm down.....lol........yo upppin dis bitch mother fuckersss uppin number 4
Here it is.
Flow=Oliver, he had just a bit better flow on his drop, Killa a lot of your lines didn't really rhyme which threw off your flow, but keep working on that.
Punches=Killa, I liked some of his punches and they hit a bit harder than Olivers did, Oliver used a lot of mom punches that are just so played.
Personals=Killa, he had more personals some of which I thought were pretty funny, Oliver you had a couple personals but they weren't really that good, you should work on developing personals.
Vocab=Tie, I didn't really see much vocab that wasn't basic in this battle, both of you should work on improving your vocab, it should help a bit.
Over all=Killa, you had a pretty good drop here, you had some good personals and punches, you should work on your flow it got kind of choppy in the middle of your verse, but over all I liked your drop, it had some funny lines in it, just keep it up.
Oliver, you had an okay drop here, I just didn't really feel your punches hit hard enough and you didn't really have any good personals either, you should work on developing both your personals and punches a bit more, just keep at it and you'll get where you want to go.
Vote=Killa
aiight no doubt^^^ uppin number mother fuckin 5 mah last one
uppin..
mah 2 or 3 ...
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I can't vote on this shit yet cuz of my posts... got to say this is close though...Quote:
Originally Posted by KiLLa_CaLi
killa cali... is this the real killa cali or what?! californigga? that you?! lmao
...^^Vote..Pleez..Uppin mah 4rth..
should be 2-3 OR 3-3..But some cant POLL or EVEN forgot To..
POLL VOTE..^^plus crew votez...blah..
and for ya Question..maybe..LoL..Watch Out..LoL
aight yo im just postin to get this back on 1st page...holla
aight this page is on da second page now and i know no one will scroll all the way here so imma post this to get it back on the first page
oo man....pretty one sided....i wuld have to say that da chef took this one mainly for harder hitting punches.....hiz punches had a lot of impact on them....good shyt
killa- not that urz was bad...ur was good and all.....but i think dat the chef pretty much took this
punches: da chef.....easily
flow: chef....good shyt with the rhythm
structure:chef...and thats easily visible
vote: chef.....both need 2 elevate....one
oliver - structure was ok........flow fell off a lil........vocab was pretty good........some of the multis were good.........ok wordplay........most of the punches connected........pretty good personals........
killa - structure was good........flow was on target.......vocab was ok........nice multis........wordplay was aight.......some of the punches were ok.........ok personals.......
breakdown -
structure - killa
flow - killa
vocab - tie
multis - killa
wordplay - tie
punches- oliver
personals - oliver
creativity - oliver
conclusion - oliver takes this in punches, personals, and creativity so he gets my vote......
VOTE - OLIVER
yo since i took the time to leave my honest feedback id appreciate if u two did the same.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=114227
thanx.......