We got beef na man...........
10 lines,
25 mins atm,
no D/R,
no crew,
no feeding,
no freeposting.
.................................................. ....pz
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We got beef na man...........
10 lines,
25 mins atm,
no D/R,
no crew,
no feeding,
no freeposting.
.................................................. ....pz
check............waste of time.............................................. .................pz
checkin in........................................
Fuck this beef man,
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
...now stop beefing man............................pz
already 5 mins over............................................pz
Yo I Never Agreed To 25 Mins In The Bitch Slapped, I'll Drop At 6:30 7:00 PM EST, Juss Started To Key
I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
*=**= Replay The Words Is His Crew MottoQuote:
nah fuck that why you need 24 hours to rite 10 lines?........wak...................pm me in the week and ill set it up.............................pz
***= Feebs Said Get Better, When K Applied For Elite
****= Mad Cow Disease Related
*****= Mad Cow Disease Related
******= Its Backwards, Get It, Replay, Rewind.. So..Creativity Comes INto Play: He Asked Physik In The Sigs For Newbies Thread For A Sig So, He In My verse He Asked If He Can Make A Pic Of Him Winning Against Me On Adobe Get It? If Not, Ask IN Thread..Its A Hard Hitting Punch If You Get IT
sick shit.:k.: you are the illest hommie u take this in every catigorie................
sorry bout that free post but its true............................:k.:............DA bomb nigga
Yo get off his dick man.. there's barely room fa his own hand.. smh.
lmfao^..........ill you wak man...i said id pm you in a week so we could set it up and spit within 30 mins...........who the fuck needs 24 hours to spit 10 lines man............well you but w/ever..votes plz...........................pz
.:K:.
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
punch = 4
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
punch,personal = 4
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
metiphore,punch,wordplay = 6
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
-self hype,wordplay,punch = 6
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
-self hype,metiphore = 4
OK nuttin great. Was expecting more to be honest. You did have some creativity tho and 2 fairly decent bars. The mirror wordplay was you best line. It was good. Other than that a very average if not a little less. Also please kill the ....... I know I've heard it's a so called vet style, but you don't utilize it with your flo correctly and it hurt your verse.
Overall = 24
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Ill Testament
I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
personal,personal,punch = 7
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
personal,multi,wordplay = 7
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
metiphore,wordplay,metiphore,-filler = 6
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
wordplay,punch = 5
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
-flo,punch,personal = 5
It's a good thing you had some explanations. However, don't tell me what's a hard punch. Ironicly it isn't, it doesnt even ryhme. You did have a nice verse tho. Nice combination of blows as far as wordplay,personal's, and punches. You did some good research and I think it payed off here. Good Job.
Overall = 30
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Vote = Ill Testament
uppin(2).......................................... ..............pz
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
LOL LIKED THIS OPENER MADE ME LAUGH AND GOOD PUNCH
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
GD PUNCH AND PERSONAL
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
LMFAO LUVED THIS LINE GD PUNCH AND WORLDPLAY
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
BOASTIN BUT STILL I GD LINE
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
DOPE FINISHER 10 OUTA 10 CUMIN FROM DA UK AS HE SHOWED HIS ROOTS BY TLKIN BOUT DA UK KELLOGS CEREAL DOPE FINISHA
I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
NICE OPENER LIKED IT GD PUNCH AND PERSONAL
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
DIDNT LIKE THIS SO WOT IF FEEBLE SED GET BETTA 2 BE ELITE..
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
OK BUT A FILLER
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
DIDNT LIKE THIS EITHER CUDDA CUM BETTER HERE
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
GD PUNCH
OVERALL I SAY .:K:. TAKES THIS AS I TINK HE HAD THE HARDER HITTING PUNCHES AND I LIKED HIS FLOW.....
ILL TESTAMENT UR SHIT WAS IGHT BUT I THOUGHT U HAD A FEW FILLERS WEN U CUD OF CUM HARDER....... .:K:. FINISHER KILLED IT 4 ME AS HE SHOWED HIS ENGLISH ROOTS WHICH I ALWAYS LIKE 2 C IN BATTLES.........
OVERALL MY VOTE GOES 2 .:K:.
ILL TESTAMENT CUD U HIT THIS UP PLZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113858
thx alot man.............................uppin(3).......... ..............................pz
oakley thanks for voting FAIRLY! LOL jp, uppin come on/
........ok
k-uh i wasnt really feelin your verse...i have seen u come harder.....it seemed like u just didnt care and it showed.......your punches were not very creative and your punches didnt land very well.....i wasnt impressed wit ya verse.....4/10
ill testament-nice verse...u had some nice personals and punches...i felt ya verse was very creative.....this was a nice verse.......the only thing i didnt like was the fact that u explained ya punches....stay away from that cuz it is newbish....other than that decent verse.......6/10
v/ill........no hate
Thanks E.Coli, Upppin For Honest Votes, Following Links
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.:K:.
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
first line is pretty good.......wasnt feelin the punch in the second line.....
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
ok frist line.......wasn't feelin the punch in the second line..........coulda been worded better also......
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
pretty tight wordplay in the second line..........pretty good punch......first line was aight........
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
first line is played..........as well as the second line.........
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
i liked the first line.........second line was an ok closer.........coulda been worded better also.......
CONCLUSION - structure was ok........didnt like the whole line wit periods, then the rest of the text.......flow was a lil hard to catch on to........vocab was pretty good.........multis were good........some of the wordplay was tight........ok punches..........didnt see any good personals......
OVERALL - 6.5/10
ILL TESTAMENT
I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..
pretty good opener.......first line was nice.......second line was a lil played but still pretty good.....
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
tight first line......feelin this personal..........second line was pretty good......
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
good wordplay and punch on the first line...........ok wordplay on the second.....
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
ok first line.....wasnt feelin the second line.......
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"
tight ass closer.........nice punch........ill personal..........good wordplay......shit was fire..........
CONCLUSION - ill had good structure........flow was on target.........vocab was good.......the multis were ok........wordplay was tight.........punches hit hard.........ill personals.....
OVERALL - 8/10
VOTE - ILL TESTAMENT
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Gud battle, here is how I saw it
Ill Testament: You had a nice flow with sum gud wordplay and a lot of variation; your punches came thru hard and they were nice formulated; you has a cuople of personals but too many, I would like to see more personals from you; you also did great in multis; your structure was aight, but nothin special
I give it 7/10
.:k:. : Your flow was a little off cuz I din't saw a gud wordplay, there wasn't a lot of variation; you had sum ok punches but they din't came so hard as Ill; you had played personals with no originality, You need to work on this man; your structure was whack cuz it just din't felt right
I give it 4/10
Vote: Ill Testament
iight...
K
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
Nice... Good wordplay... Inner multi... Nice opener... 8/10
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
Decent punch and personal... 6/10
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
Nice bar here... 7/10
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
Lol... Decent... 6/10
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler
Nice... Loked the wordplay... Concepts... So on... 7/10
Overall... 34/50
Ill
I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
Decent punch and opener... 6/10
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
Personal... Wasnt feeling the second line... 6/10
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
Played... And played... 5/10
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
Played filler... 5/10
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
Not bad closer... 7/10
Overall... 29/50
v/ K
More creative verse and less played shit... Whats going on with all the votes so far... :nono: ...
Pz...
Ill..
I Wanted This Due In 24 Hours, But .:K:. Needs A Week..*
Replaying My Words, Is The Closest Way Youd B Unique..**
Ok..pretty personal.. alright opener
Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite..***
Punches Bruise Ya Cheek, Yous A Dog, The Way He Bites Treats..
..The first line is a fact, not a punch..2d played & wack..
Like Fat Customers At McDonalds, .:K:. Really Wanted This Beef..****
Beat U With 6 Lines ^, Couldnt Steal This Win If You Were A Thief..
Umm no, 2d line is exceptionally played & 1d?...far from..
Told Him That I Didnt Want Beef, But He Really Wanted To Be Sick..*****
Thinking That You Hard? Please, Im Giving You This Loss Quick..
Not really either.. get more creative
He Knew That I'd Beat Him, So He Posted In The Guided Mode..
"Thats Impossible Sorry" "Can You Image Me Winning On Adobe?"******
..That is actually pretty nice, with some rewordin' this could've been,
A funny & good punch.. not bad
K
Fuck this coward smash you till your devoured…and leave him seeping,
Fuck wordplay cause that^ had more than your whole verse…
……………......…so kid keep dreaming……….
..The dreamin' part should've been somethin associated w. wordplay,
Or somewhat like that.. for a more direct & connectin punch
merk this kid for beefing...everything's against you..nothing for..
lyrical joker..your just pissing about...read the shit in bold..
.....................over to state wat you are......
The concept was ok.. but truth is..he is a kid lol, not a real punch
I guess it was your mum who first told you…………
…………………..that you were really special…………,
But to be honest man ive seen straighter fucking….. comeing from a homosexual,
Nothin fancy..but got a giggle none the less..slightly funny
K spitting into a mirror is the only way i’ll ever meet my match,
Me turning on you to face away..was the best ive seen you spit back,
Wordplay in 2d line is ok..other then that self glorification
Its special K…..kelloggs brand but im not that type of cereal killer,
I own this battle with the outline..and leave this bitch to add all filler,
Yup..self glorification
Overall
I expected more from K to be quite honest..
& Ill testament kind of surprised me..not as herbish as most ppl in Fl..
But fact to the matter is.. all those supposed personals you had,
& tried to indicate & explain with all these stars (****)
Didnt work..
Also in a line u say:
"Got A Straight Answer From Feeble..Get Better To Be Elite"
..Then u go to explain.. that he was declined by Feeble..
Like we are to stupid to see that.. you explain the obvious.
Also your punches where far to simplistic & that whole play on mad cow disease is ridiculous.. & on top of that... played.
K didnt had a real good verse either..
A pretty nice structure.. though your flow was a bit choppy at points.
You came pretty consistant with some ok punches..right down to the last bar..
Where u kind of slowed it down.
But still, You get my vote for nothin explainin' all these useless facts..
& actually havin some punches..
vote K
..thx alot yall...........................uppin for real votes..................(5).thx...........pz
wow tough battle to vote on
i really cant make a desicion
but i think that the punches were about the same and so was the flow structure and wordplay
so it comes down to personals and ill testament had alot of personals that hit hard
k also had some but they didnt hit as hard
for a better overall verse and more personals
v/ill
dont explain ur shit next time though