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usual rules
you spit 1st
gud luck
i like mcdonalds and u'll see that in the battle:
Only way out now is SUICIDE, to beat you again is a SUPER HIGH,
So when I hand you this "L" ya can TELL, that it was SUPERSIZED!~
So SHUT IT!- I pull strings like a PUPPET, only bitches DUCK IT,
Yo- you're BUSTED!- I eat ya THUGNESS like I eat mcNUGGETS!~
Whoa!- blare TRUMPETS or SOMETHIN', cuz I'm FUCKIN' ERUPTIN',
The party's down in ya mouth, and Young Mic's CUMIN' & BUSTIN'!~
'Til there's NOTHIN' left but DUST &, ya ghetto mic that's RUSTED,
I'm servin' you JUSTICE, FUCK IT- "cry me a river"- like JUSTIN!~
Not MANY LOSSES?- ya record's the color SPAGHETTI SAUCE IS,
I drop PAYLOADS on RAINBOWS (fags), & leave ya girl PREGO*!~
Eat my HARD RHYMES!- I told the mod on you--- it's NARK TIME,
(Breaking glass like in a BAR FIGHT)- & I KNOW you STARSHINE!~
If ya ask me--- ya more than a BIT DARING, cuz SHIT CARRIES,
Ya BARELY D1, get BURIED!- let's change ya name to MCFAIRY!~
Inside & OUTSIDE ya WHINE, quick to grab a few dicks & RIDE,
Ya got more "no shows" than years GEORGE BURNS was ALIVE!~
All the "dick riders" look ALIKE, battle on the net to SURVIVE,
But your TYPE is as played, as kids' mimickin' COLUMBINE (lol)!~
But COMBINED- against 1 of my CREW, we'd kill like 90 of YOU,
You're as OVERDUE, as the gay pornos that ya rented in JUNE!~
:shoot: g'luck to u though and i hope i did it right this is really foreign to me and all but all should be right...hopefully i was a challenge :shoot:
You say you gonna beat me again but you didn't battled me b4
You ain't got 1 single friend and you exspect me to rap hardcore?
I lay ya ass down like you get payed from a whore, you want sum more?
What r u waitin for? That shit was so prewrittin
Cuz you ain't got the skills to start spittin, let's say hittin
Me killin myself? Don't start trippin
Countdown from twelve and when it hits zero you be death
Wishin you had time left to give your dad sum head
You know I'm hard to get, but your the one that loves to lick
And I don't mean on bitch asses, but on your own dick
Your rap was shit, don't even know why you typed it
But you're just a newbie so i cut you sum slack
This is to easy cuz your versa was whack, betta watch your back
And i see you love mcdonalds, how much is it for a Big Mac?
gud battle let's get sum votes in
i was saying if i battle u i would beat u again, therefore sayin i'm confident that ican beat u this time...damn i gotta break shit down for these cats too?Quote:
Originally Posted by Daffer22
take off ur vest :shoot:
i'm glad u see it that way...i'm glad u don't take battles to the head...i've into some sensitive cats on my way here... :laugh:
10 in the clip and one in the hole/when the first one get out the next goes :shoot:
Yo don't even mind, let's get the votes startin
ok daffer u killed em
u had mad punches it flowed really good
multies were ok but definatly helped in the flow
as for young 5 it probaly took 5 ppl to rite that rhyme it sounded pre written half the shit dint rhyme u dont talk about mc donalds it wasnt topical but ne how u sorta dissed ur self casue if he is so easy to kill y would it b a super high u had no hard punches u use hardly ne rap lingo merk herb nubie ect... um no multies n when u did multie it didnt make sense that deducted from flow or it didnt ryhme that de ducted alot of flow also elevate
my vote daffer
I NEED VOTES IN THE BATTLES IN MY SIG SO GO VOTE ON THEM P1CK HONESTLY ON WHO WON SO GO VOTE PEECE I WOULD LIKE A VOTE ON FREEZA POP
i'm glad u feel that way b/c that was my bullshit rhyme i wasn' tryingbut if i'll go for real in my next battle....
uppiinng votessss (1)
daffter 22 i was feelin your shit alittle more u had good structuer and had a beter vocab you had some nice punches on this one too.....good job you have elevated sence the last time i beat you.......
young just shut the fuck up u got beat u prolly gave that your all.......you had bad structuer i could barley read it and couldnt tell where a line would end and why rap about something so stupid...the whole object is to diss the hell out of the person your are VSing....1 word 4 ya ELEVATE............
v/DAFFTER22
ok thx 4 the vote, but when did you beat me again?
upppinngg votes (2) Come on ppl
young mic took this battle.. i like your style you have a different style than most of the people ive seen on this board.. daffer you had some elementary wordplay.. that line bout given your dad head was weak.. and i didnt see any creative disses in your verse
young 5 mics you had alot of mulites in your verse.. and you tied them in well with your disses.. i like that line bout you have more no shows than years than george burns was alive
ultimately- i judged this battle based on creativty of the disses and impact of the disses.. therefore my vote goes to young 5 mics on this one
Least someone caught my flow...hardhitter wants to take his vote back but i don't think u can do it but that's life...i just can't play around with anyone no more and go hard everytime...Quote:
Originally Posted by :)
Yo Young he wants his vote removed on your battle with Oakley he says not on this battle.....
this was very one sided battle..
Daffer22 ur verse was good...punches came hard and flow was there...struture was basic... work on dat...needed some personals tho...overalll: 7/10
Young 5 Mic(s)
Ur verse was basic...punches came very week...no flow and structure well there was none was there....evaluate plaese.....overall: 3/10
v/Daffer22(simply killed him)
upppinggg votessss (3)
ok I think da vote goes to Young, he had better metaphors, wordplay.
Daffer had a basic structure and vocabulary, work on ya vocabulary...
Daffer, try to hit harder and more personal with ya punches...
Flow was decent on both sides, young, just don't use that many caps and shit.
vote - Young
uppppping votesssss(4)
fuck it i'm UPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNNN VVVVVVVVOOOOOOOOTTTTTTTEEEEEESSSSSSSS(3)
Daffer= Winner
Daffer= Ok Punches, Hit HIm Soso, Vocab Wasnt Too Good, Structure Was Ok, You Can Shorten You Lines To Make It More Enjoyable Feel Me? Your Wordplay Was Good And Creativity Was OK. Flow Was Decent
Young= Ok Punches, Lot OF Them Missed, Same As Him With Vocab, Didnt Do Soo Good Wit Wordplay. Your Creativity Was Good, And Your Structure Was Long Too And Dont CAPS The PUnch or Rhyming Word In Your Verse. Flow Was Decent
Young
Punches= C+
Flow= B
Wordplay- A-
Vocab- C
Creativity- A-
Overall Grade= B-/C+
Daffer
Punches- B-
Flow= B
Creativity- C
Structure- B
Vocab- B
Wordplay- B+
Overall Grade- B
Hit This Up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113660
Yo Ill Testament you forgot to poll it, so it's 4-2 for me
Alright i think daffer killed the comp here...just overall better flow better style and structure...just overall seemed like you understand how to write more.young i didnt feel your style to much but it wasnt horrible your on the right track...some eghhh alright disses nice work...
please return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113957
so I win 5-2, mod can you close this battle?
just to play safe, I need one more vote so upiiingg votes (5)
yo daffer u came real weak in this battle, bad vocab, and no wordplay, u cant jus win a battle cus u goin agianst a newbie, elevate and maybe bring sumin to the table instead of jus gettin served
young 5 mic, good word play, even tho it was pretty gay wit the leadin back to mcdonalds but that was good wordplay anyway. u really need ta work on your structure and topics but your punches and multi's and wordply win this.
vote-young 5 mic