yo 10 lines due in 30 mins after check in normal rukles
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yo 10 lines due in 30 mins after check in normal rukles
aight checking in
check in foo............................................... ....................................
checking in ..........................
Yo Lust I want to battle u u spit first and I'll make up da rest ofa rules
aight yo
tear u into pieces cause I conclude~fakers of my species since i'ma weak~mc predator
There are no excuses for u denying that u fill up more lines than a news~paper editor (u have alot of fillers)
I'll leave~ur~knees~weak...couldnt spit clean if u freshend up ur teeth~with~floss
Ur careers like walkin thru iraqs roads cos u headin down defeats~street n just reached~another~loss
Ur like priests busted for child pornography cause what u preach~is~wrong
Battlin me? This geeks~disturbed...I'm leavin~this~herb 'up in smoke' like cheech~n~chong
Im raw~spittin, n im not talkin ozzie bitin off bats necks...im sayin bar~dissin
Start jaw~splittin n leave this 'pussy inoffensive' like 'declawed~kittens'
The games~over...i got~skill n keep bumpin~flavor at fruits, is that why u cant taste~wut~I~say
He could play~poker on a uphill runnin~escalator n still coulndnt 'elevate~his~game'
letz go :laugh: :cussing:
little streached but i said 10 - 16 lines so whateva........................................... ...............
ur a cum guzzler, thats the only thing u chuggen
r u serious u steeping to me , u must be buggen
ur a faggot ass-nigga, only dicks u be tuggin
ur shit is whack it didnt even rhyme
u being able to rap should be a crime
i dont have to say anything, i could beat u if i was a mime
ur lines are fillers, ur just wasting time
chugs4life?? be a short one when i end it with a knife
the only bitch i be tappin is ur horny ass wife
do me a favor hop off my dick and get a life
my bad on it being late, i was fuckign around
uppin fo votes
Iight Look chug u were better.....
Structure: Lust
Flow: Tie
Respect CHugs
Multiez: nOne
Punchlinez: NOne
wordplay: Chug
Vote~Chugs
OOO yEa Lust I wanna go against ya and I'll set it up if u agree
yea ill go but tommrow i gotta peace ill pm u tommorow
wat I didnt get u .............................kid
wat yo why dont u have respect for me? was ur vote a hate vote cuz chugs shit didnt even rhymes, who the fuck talks about fucken kittens
1 he shit did rhyme(sum of it) and da respect is respect 4 da rhymez not da person u dick and Im settin up our shit afta u respond to me.
ok .................................................. ..............................................
Chugs - your structure is annoying... but you're skills are there... develop them and get a better structure. Overall OK verse, much better than Lust. Work on your punches and personals
Lust - quit rap... or do some serious studying on this site... visit Elevated and Elite and learn what a punch is... you had ONE - it was the mime punch. Weak at best
vote = chugs
actually, both of you should visit elevated and elite frontlines to learn.... that is all.
opener lust
punches tie
flow lust
closer tie
vote im gonna go with lust i think he just barely beat u
chug u need to work on vocab, structure, and personals. urr good at multis
lust vocab and personals ur structure and flow is nice
basically im voting for lust because just about every line in chug's verse was
played or it didnt make sense and what do u c tight about rhymin about kittens
uppin and about the kittens i was just makin a rhyme wo ho there guys...................
sum of it????? most of it................................................ .... uppin
uppin fo votes hook me up illl return the favor
stop bitching if yah wannah bitch do it on your pms not on our battle thread .................... uppin
ill poll vote after i get off aol
ok, chugs took it, for obvious reasons, lust your verse sounded like one of those verses people post as jokes, your obviously very new to the game, and untill you figure out what the hell is goin on, i would suggest you stick to the cypher, and open mic. chugs, work on your structure kid
tear u into pieces cause I conclude~fakers of my species since i'ma weak~mc predator
There are no excuses for u denying that u fill up more lines than a news~paper editor (u have alot of fillers)
Dun explain your punches...it fucks with the flow and is newbish..ok bar..try and shorten them tho
I'll leave~ur~knees~weak...couldnt spit clean if u freshend up ur teeth~with~floss
Ur careers like walkin thru iraqs roads cos u headin down defeats~street n just reached~another~loss
lines are mad stretched...get rid of the ~~~ shit...ok bar
Ur like priests busted for child pornography cause what u preach~is~wrong
Battlin me? This geeks~disturbed...I'm leavin~this~herb 'up in smoke' like cheech~n~chong
nah...played bar
Im raw~spittin, n im not talkin ozzie bitin off bats necks...im sayin bar~dissin
Start jaw~splittin n leave this 'pussy inoffensive' like 'declawed~kittens'
ok
The games~over...i got~skill n keep bumpin~flavor at fruits, is that why u cant taste~wut~I~say
He could play~poker on a uphill runnin~escalator n still coulndnt 'elevate~his~game'
ok...lil played
ur a cum guzzler, thats the only thing u chuggen
r u serious u steeping to me , u must be buggen
ur a faggot ass-nigga, only dicks u be tuggin
whack...staya way from gay lines..."cun guzzler
ur shit is whack it didnt even rhyme
u being able to rap should be a crime
i dont have to say anything, i could beat u if i was a mime
weak..dun feed
ur lines are fillers, ur just wasting time
chugs4life?? be a short one when i end it with a knife
played...
the only bitch i be tappin is ur horny ass wife
do me a favor hop off my dick and get a life
played
Chugs took this easy...Jus a better verse...Good punches/metas/personals... Lust came with too much played gay jokes.
Please drop an honest vote here guys...shits been open forever.,.thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112459 versus freeza pop
Chugs took this...
I liked most of ya lines but the flow was really stretched... that really hert ya....
the punches were good tho and so were the metahz ... pretty decent opener n closer...
But HOLY FUCK, Lust u need to check out wackness emergency center... ya shit flow better than Chugs, i'll give u that... but ya whole verse sucked ass. the best line u had was ya first one and it was still pathetic. Your shit is so basic, you really need to expand ya mind and start figuring out how to write rhymes... not try'n to be mean but u really need to elevate any way you can ... good luck, pz
my vote - Chugs
tear u into pieces cause I conclude~fakers of my species since i'ma weak~mc predator
There are no excuses for u denying that u fill up more lines than a news~paper editor (u have alot of fillers)
dont throw in the explanation, if you have to explain, than its not good, but it was aight, could've been a better bar for an opening
I'll leave~ur~knees~weak...couldnt spit clean if u freshend up ur teeth~with~floss
Ur careers like walkin thru iraqs roads cos u headin down defeats~street n just reached~another~loss
Ok, that was aight
Ur like priests busted for child pornography cause what u preach~is~wrong
Battlin me? This geeks~disturbed...I'm leavin~this~herb 'up in smoke' like cheech~n~chong
plizzayed
Im raw~spittin, n im not talkin ozzie bitin off bats necks...im sayin bar~dissin
Start jaw~splittin n leave this 'pussy inoffensive' like 'declawed~kittens'
nice nice
The games~over...i got~skill n keep bumpin~flavor at fruits, is that why u cant taste~wut~I~say
He could play~poker on an uphill runnin~escalator n still coulndnt 'elevate~his~game'
played n not good enough to close
ur a cum guzzler, thats the only thing u chuggen
r u serious u stepping to me , u must be buggen
ur a faggot ass-nigga, only dicks u be tuggin
He aint black fuck head (I think)
whack...staya way from gay lines..."cun guzzler
ur shit is whack it didnt even rhyme
u being able to rap should be a crime
so fuckin played, actually, it probably isn't, cuz its jus so simple
i dont have to say anything, i could beat u if i was a mime
ur lines are fillers, ur just wasting time
[B]Aight punch, but played rhyme[B]
chugs4life?? be a short one when i end it with a knife
the only bitch i be tappin is ur horny ass wife
do me a favor hop off my dick and get a life
too simple
This was obvious, Chugs4Life. You battled a lot betta here than against me. Where you drund? :spit: