5-10 bars (10-20 lines)
30 minute time limit
blind spit
check in when u see this
ill check in when u do
no crew votes
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5-10 bars (10-20 lines)
30 minute time limit
blind spit
check in when u see this
ill check in when u do
no crew votes
Aight, I'm checkin in...time ta through this beef on tha bbq, n spark the shit up
i dont really know what ur tryin to say, but anyway heres my check in, both our verses due at 6:10
"fuckin you up with hit afta hit"
"stickin you up with clip afta clip"
fuck you and the name that you bit
Comon, I'm dun, put ur lame ass shit up, les go!!!
i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato
this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes
i was like aight, but not my best stuff
he was like, thats fine but i messed up
i said, i know dawg, dont be mad, ur from BC
so when i battle u, ill be sure to go easy
maybe when ur nineteen ur get really lonely
but when im that age ill be drinken wit homies
hey dawg, because ur older than me doesnt mean u can compete
the only way this mothafucka could even compare is ta cheat
and hes a lier to, says hes a mothafuckin engineer
between me and u, everyone knows whos the henchman here
u cant compare with my lyrics, its suicide to even try
gods on my side, and hates u, haha, only heathens die
if he even goes the maximum twenty lines ill be suprised
his only goal in this battle, is ta try not ta die
this bitch is maken a silk coat, look like a damn stone
i crushed through his jello, wait, that was a handbone!?!?
Despite, you pre-write, what you type, Im hop’in you can resite, somethin tight, I like,
I’d ask you to suck on this here hairy cock, but you seem like, the type, ta bite,
Posin as a D12 member, tisk tisk, didn’t wanna battle a celebrity, but you insist
I carefully calculate this, creating a collaboration like a chemist,
Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o
la, Fuck the front lines, I belong on center stage, cuz my inner rage,
holds greater weight, turnin this thick paper to a thinner page;
You should go back to resite refine, your ragitty rhyme so its like mine,
So when it comes fight time, youre able to rock a tight chime;
Cuz right now, its like a loose hoe, its sad how you refuse to go,
Despite all my intimidation, I enjoy your determination,
Its cute how little you, is fuckin wit big me,
Lines so powerful, they jus snapped you like a twig gee,
I don’t care what y’all say, this dudes rap belongs in a ballet,
I’m done with this wannabe gangsta, where’s my vallet...
what the fuck was that, hey can an op give me the win, he spit only 3 lines
never mind, i guess that was just a lameass joke
n jus ta let you know, im workin right the fuck now mutha fucka, as an engineer, hahha
hahaah...ouch....u jus got rocked! Can I get some votes up in here???
haha, keep swayin votes nigga, thats how u lose them
I don't think I need to, but technically, thats what you be doin there ^^^
what the fuck are you talkin about, did u hear me go, haha, i ripped his ass, its over, now can i get some votes up in here?
no.
u didnt.
cause i dont try to sway.
aight chill son... uppin for voter here, not swayin...
Uppin for some fuckin votes, comon, wheres all the 100 posts peepz at???
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I know you cant vote massacre, but atleast give an opinion....
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uppin for some feedback here, comon, it would mean a lot
i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato
^^alrite.....
this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes
^^wak
i was like aight, but not my best stuff
he was like, thats fine but i messed up
^^wak-er
i said, i know dawg, dont be mad, ur from BC
so when i battle u, ill be sure to go easy
^^revise....but ok
maybe when ur nineteen ur get really lonely
but when im that age ill be drinken wit homies
who carez bout u?
hey dawg, because ur older than me doesnt mean u can compete
the only way this mothafucka could even compare is ta cheat
ok.....
and hes a lier to, says hes a mothafuckin engineer
between me and u, everyone knows whos the henchman here
^^finally a nice punch.....lol
u cant compare with my lyrics, its suicide to even try
gods on my side, and hates u, haha, only heathens die
^^gettin betterr
if he even goes the maximum twenty lines ill be suprised
his only goal in this battle, is ta try not ta die
^^weak
this bitch is maken a silk coat, look like a damn stone
i crushed through his jello, wait, that was a handbone!?!?
niceee clozer
total- 5/6-10
Despite, you pre-write, what you type, Im hop?in you can resite, somethin tight, I like,
I?d ask you to suck on this here hairy cock, but you seem like, the type, ta bite,
wtf.....
Posin as a D12 member, tisk tisk, didn?t wanna battle a celebrity, but you insist
I carefully calculate this, creating a collaboration like a chemist,
ok...
Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o
wak
la, Fuck the front lines, I belong on center stage, cuz my inner rage,
holds greater weight, turnin this thick paper to a thinner page;
nice...good shyt with that
You should go back to resite refine, your ragitty rhyme so its like mine,
So when it comes fight time, youre able to rock a tight chime;
oki dokie......
Cuz right now, its like a loose hoe, its sad how you refuse to go,
Despite all my intimidation, I enjoy your determination,
nice.....
Its cute how little you, is fuckin wit big me,
Lines so powerful, they jus snapped you like a twig gee,
nice.......
I don?t care what y?all say, this dudes rap belongs in a ballet,
I?m done with this wannabe gangsta, where?s my vallet...
ok.....
total=7/10...
u started out weak....but ended stronger
punches: ko....in the end his hit harder.....n had a few in da begginin
flow: tie.....both work on it
structure:both gotta work on it......
creativity: ko.....took time on hiz punches
vote: ko.....weak battle....but he took this
Thx for the input, i'll work on it all,
uppin for some more input here?
kuniva takes dis shyt cuz he had better punches and his flow wus much better he won this battle with lines like "this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes" thats a personal and a punch......
Kayooh lost the battle with lines like this "Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o"
ok i dont know if that was punch/personal or anything but it sucked, it was very poorly written also you need to elevate alot before you win a battle if you really spit like this...
vote=kuniva
Aight, thx, I think I had betta lines than
"this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes"
but, thx for the feedback
i would say that ko took this/ he had better flow, and then later on in his vere had better punches
kuniva was on and off/ sometimes he had nice punches, but at others they were wack
punches:" ko
flo: ko
structure: none
creativity: none
both elevate........
vote: ko....sorry i cant poll vote....but can u plze hit this battle up...thnx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113450
kuniva, not the best
kinda simple flow and not really the best punches
kayohh, i seen a different kayoh before and he was dope as hell,
your verse was aight,
the flow was good but the punches didnt conncet
so i gotta give this to kuniva
uppin for votes (1)
kuniva
i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato
-played,punch,metiphore = 3
this nigga probly gonna spit the minimum ten lines
he sent me a pm, askin me to lend rhymes
personal = 5
i was like aight, but not my best stuff
he was like, thats fine but i messed up
filler = 1
i said, i know dawg, dont be mad, ur from BC
so when i battle u, ill be sure to go easy
personal = 2
maybe when ur nineteen ur get really lonely
but when im that age ill be drinken wit homies
filler = 1
hey dawg, because ur older than me doesnt mean u can compete
the only way this mothafucka could even compare is ta cheat
-stretch,personal = 1
and hes a lier to, says hes a mothafuckin engineer
between me and u, everyone knows whos the henchman here
personal,metiphore = 3
u cant compare with my lyrics, its suicide to even try
gods on my side, and hates u, haha, only heathens die
punch,self hype = 3
if he even goes the maximum twenty lines ill be suprised
his only goal in this battle, is ta try not ta die
filler = 1
this bitch is maken a silk coat, look like a damn stone
i crushed through his jello, wait, that was a handbone!?!?
metiphore,punch = 5
I've only seen one worste so far on this site and that was retard101, don't worry tho his was alot worste. But yours was very bad, way too much filler you need to focus more on your punches than tryna tell a story. Basicly say one subject in each bar, dont carry one subject through 2 bars. Work on that.
Overall = 25
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KayOhh
Despite, you pre-write, what you type, Im hop’in you can resite, somethin tight, I like,
I’d ask you to suck on this here hairy cock, but you seem like, the type, ta bite,
-streched,personal,-multi,wordplay = 5
Posin as a D12 member, tisk tisk, didn’t wanna battle a celebrity, but you insist
I carefully calculate this, creating a collaboration like a chemist,
-stretched,multi,metiphore,vocab = 5
Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o
-filler,metiphore = 4
la, Fuck the front lines, I belong on center stage, cuz my inner rage,
holds greater weight, turnin this thick paper to a thinner page;
-multi,-self hype = 0
You should go back to resite refine, your ragitty rhyme so its like mine,
So when it comes fight time, youre able to rock a tight chime;
-multi,metiphore = 3
Cuz right now, its like a loose hoe, its sad how you refuse to go,
Despite all my intimidation, I enjoy your determination,
metiphore,-filler = 3
Its cute how little you, is fuckin wit big me,
Lines so powerful, they jus snapped you like a twig gee,
-self hype,metiphore = 3
I don’t care what y’all say, this dudes rap belongs in a ballet,
I’m done with this wannabe gangsta, where’s my vallet...
punch,metiphore = 5
My opinion way to many multi's. You focused way too much on the multi's creating alot of filler's and not enough punches. Quite honestly your a close third behind Kuniva and retard101 as the worste I have veiwed so far. Work on balancing you verse more, making it shorter by line and less multi more punch. Work on that.
Overall = 28
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Vote = KayOhh
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?t=112426\
yo i need one more vote on my battle hit that up
but this battle
vote- Kayohh
str8 took this one
muti's-kay took it wit these, both had over played rhymes but
vocab-kay, he da only one who had words rhymin other than line and rhyme
punches- both weak neither get it, kay was talkin bout him slef alot but cus of that
flow- kay, other guy had no multi's to flow to so there ya go
vote- kay
both need ta get some vocab and get some harder punches on the real
agian hit this battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426
i'd apreciate it i won so it dont need much explainin just get dat last vote in peace
anyone else wanna battle me drop me a message
oakley, ughh, damn son, well i just voted on a battle so im not gonna do it again right now, i might hit this on up tomorrow, but i wish i could vote oakley off this site, sayin how, Your only punches are KayOhh, is a gay hoe, whatever you say bro,
Your lines are too immature, they even be soundin like they written with cray-o, is a 4, but i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato, was only a 3, even though it was a good, and much better line, whatever i think this was a close battle and i might vote on it tomorrow, Peace.
Hey kuniva or PROOF you see those number's up in the right hand corner?...
yeh they match. So don't sway for yourself.
And I dont recomend you comin back tomorrow and voting for youself
you can thank menolin for informing me about these IP's.
There for people like you apearantly
Thx Oak, I never saw that shit, good fuckin eye...
hey stupid shit, maybe more than one person uses this computer, did u think of that, umm... lets think. if i wanted to vote for "myself" i think i would have done it already.
and if i was tryin to make it seem like i was two totaly different people, why would i use two names from D12 members, and use the same location (arvada is a suburb of denver)
Kuniva is my brother stupid fuck, and i wouldnt have voted for him in this anyway, i would have done it already
If your not the same person, then who would you vote for?
Punches-KayOhh
Personals-Kuniva
Multies-KayOhh
Flow-KayOhh
Structure-kunica
Filler-kuniva
id give a long explanation of what kuniva did wrong, but i live with him so fuck it
KayOhh, u had really good multies and some good punches, but u did have some wack lines like the one i mentioned earlier, kuniva also had about half filler, which was the main reason i didnt vote for him, but KayOhh, try and make ur lines smaller so they dont just seem to keep goin
v/KayOhh
Aight dog, we coo, im believin ya, didnt before...
Kayohh took this one with ease, he had great punches and a good verse in all areas..
nice opener and closer..
kuniva you had an aiight verse with some good punches but some punches were pointless which didnt hit,your opener and closer was aiight..
Vote.:Kayohh:.
Upp this battle please seen as i did your battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113483
Kayohh please poll vote when you get 100posts!.......
fuck this
kayohh i felt came with better punchlines and wordplay in this battle.. kuniva your verse lacked any hard disses.. these lines ruined the battle for you
"i think its about time to murder this mothafucka kayohh
when u die no one with mourn u like they do Kato"
kayohh had some pretty creative disses in his battle so i vote for him.. peace