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ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey,
cuz i already won this battle shawty okie dokie,
bitch im already tired of battlin im a drive to maryland,
u herd i dont hit women so u got a sex change, now ya name carolen,
ya gon break ya knuckles trin to hit me dat hard quess wut...im still standin,
bitch only wanted to battle i looked like a herb wit 3 posts
trust me my punches n punchlines will break ya nose,
this cat lookin for newbs so he can brag n boast,
get over it u lost i exposed u lyk janet jackson's tit,
shut up bitch look who the herb now i jus finished it
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Oakley's beat?....
You gotta better chance at owning 2 left feet..
For christ's sake! I mean your from St. Pete!/1
Just drop you head, point an click the X button
You with a win is like Ray Charles puttin.../2
Your a gluten for punishment, an I'm dropin moderate..
Az's verse called me up, an asked if i can Father it/3
I like your sig also, It's nice how u reflect on your wins
1 of 50 kin? and Now your rapping? kid you forget your Asian!/4
15 years old? You can't even borrow your Mom's caravan...
Wait..you want a vote?...
You better have more roll-over more than a cingular plan/5
I aint even breakin a gland,dubz..u remind me of that kid Deluxe
Difference being?...he's makin money while u sit here and suck/6
ok, i like some of azn's lines, and then it seemed like he had a few he just threw in there for no reason, and they dont even rhyme.
for oakley, good verse but i didnt understand the sig thing, which probly means that he deleted it when it got dissed, which is pussy.
vote/oakley
hit up my battle with KayOhh please
Azn, dog, you didn't have many complex rhymes, and you were doin a lil fillin...
Oakley, I dunno, the age diss was a lil cheap, but I'd give it to you for tha flow...
Sorry to be an ass, but i can't vote...
Help me n Kuniva out, aight?
there is no sig and no wins....duhQuote:
Originally Posted by kuniva
i dunno whoz waz betta..all u newbs just suckd...nottin waz in dese verses...just cant vote like dis
-S0ySaUCe
uppin
oakley takes this one.
you cant compare this
ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey
to this
like your sig also, It's nice how u reflect on your wins
1 of 50 kin? and Now your rapping? kid you forget your Asian!/4
that other dude's was weak as fuck, not real hard hitting punches, attempts at wordplay, he just had weak or filler!!
oakley also had weak punches but his hit slightly harder, an he attempted wittyness, an he pulled it off slightly better!!
I'm feelin ya, U can spit, but ya mark ass friend Oakley needs to stop it wit all that Asian shit, cuz i know a lot of Asian who can spit!!Nucca Please!!Quote:
Originally Posted by AzNpImPDubZ
Holla @ cha gurl
ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey,
cuz i already won this battle shawty okie dokie,
thats an awful rhyme
bitch im already tired of battlin im a drive to maryland,
u herd i dont hit women so u got a sex change, now ya name carolen,
ya gon break ya knuckles trin to hit me dat hard quess wut...im still standin,
lol....whack...no real punches
bitch only wanted to battle i looked like a herb wit 3 posts
trust me my punches n punchlines will break ya nose,
this cat lookin for newbs so he can brag n boast,
nothing here either
get over it u lost i exposed u lyk janet jackson's tit,
shut up bitch look who the herb now i jus finished it
mad mad mad played line
Oakley's beat?....
You gotta better chance at owning 2 left feet..
For christ's sake! I mean your from St. Pete!/1
Take out the numbers...we know where your lines end..also try and refrain from usiong your own name in ya rhyme...
Just drop you head, point an click the X button
You with a win is like Ray Charles puttin.../2
whhhok...kinda weak tho
Your a gluten for punishment, an I'm dropin moderate..
Az's verse called me up, an asked if i can Father it/3
ok
I like your sig also, It's nice how u reflect on your wins
1 of 50 kin? and Now your rapping? kid you forget your Asian!/4
hey...I'm Asian...so?
15 years old? You can't even borrow your Mom's caravan...
Wait..you want a vote?...
You better have more roll-over more than a cingular plan/5
played..ok
I aint even breakin a gland,dubz..u remind me of that kid Deluxe
Difference being?...he's makin money while u sit here and suck/6
ok
Oakley takes this easy...he's the only one that attempted to throw a decent punch...AzN came with some whack ass ryhmes that had no force...Oakley ahd an ok verse...some lpayed shit too...but also some good punchess
PLease drop an honest vote here...It's honestly a dope battle...wait ya both newbs...well...drop an opinion please..It would be appreciated http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113550
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Here is how I saw the battle
flow/ Oakley had a gud flow goin on with sum nice rhymes in there and gud voc.; Azn didn't had such a gud flow cuz his vocabulairy was whac, there wasn't anything special
punchlines/ Oakley had great punches and they just came harder; Azn that line bout hokey pokey was whack, you need to work on your punches and personals cuz you didn't have any personals at all, Oakley had a cuople of nice personals
Oakley also had multies who were great; Azn you need to elevate
Vote oakley
Hit back on this thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596
Aight, I can vote now, n Oakley definately took this, cuz he had a nice closer, multis, and plays. Both sides were kinda weak, azn your punches were aufle, work on dat shit.
peace
Hit up my battles
uppin
oakley may have won this one but owell im new jus startin out i be bak to get oakley lata
this was a rel good verse had some good personals and had a good flow cant really tell you to elevate good work hommie your a good MC in my books.......Quote:
Originally Posted by Oakley
ok now ima bout to battle a kid name oakley,
turn ur ass around kid lyk u doin the hokey pokey,
cuz i already won this battle shawty okie dokie,
bitch im already tired of battlin im a drive to maryland,
u herd i dont hit women so u got a sex change, now ya name carolen,
ya gon break ya knuckles trin to hit me dat hard quess wut...im still standin,
bitch only wanted to battle i looked like a herb wit 3 posts
trust me my punches n punchlines will break ya nose,
this cat lookin for newbs so he can brag n boast,
get over it u lost i exposed u lyk janet jackson's tit,
shut up bitch look who the herb now i jus finished it
WoW u need to elevate in ever catigoir lets put it this way u got served merked and killed.......got to LL and see how shit is done it can give u some pointers and u can see how to structuer your shit if u need any help just PM me thanx ....................
v/Oakley