flash |VS| :)

no feeding
no hate/dr/crew votes
spit 20mins afta check in

10-15 lines

you spit first

iight i called out anyone and you answerd so lets see what you got

hahahahahaha.. wait man let me type some shit up homie

iight i gotta spit first cause i dont got time to wait...so this is my check in and flow


i know that you or your boy dont need to be talkin trash
both you play your skin flutes so much you got milk mustashes
you call yourself the best but you aint numba 1 or even the best
there just aint no way you gonna be winning this rap contest
and the fact remains wen i pull out da glock,ya'll betta dash
ya motha should a left u wen she found u in da trash
You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines
Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time
Fuck the vocab. before I burst like a bubble
You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble
My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure
Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips
You wouldn't hold hot rhymes if you grabbed-my-lips

and yeah i know that my structure is fucked up but i dont got time to waste...but im out...ill be back lata to see what happend...and people betta vote on this shit

listen kid

everytime your voice gets SPOKE IN TRACKS, people just break out in OPEN LAUGHS,
your the biggest JOKE IN RAP
a verse of yours is bout as advanced as lyrics written by mc hammer after SMOKIN CRACK
your brain must have BROKE AN SMASHED,
or either as a child you got dropped on your MIND PLATE
cuz your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT
you could obtain a higher IQ than yours by testing a PRIME APE
youll never FIND PAPES (dollars)
matter of fact youll always BE WACK
kid couldnt get a "buzz" of your raps by stickin your lyrics in a den of BEESWAX

you cant COMPETE, and you've never battled a respectable rapper and had them BEAT
your WEAK, your lyrics written on SHEETS are like "ice cream cones" cuz they melt when in the contact of HEAT

beating me is something you dont have a SAFE CHANCE IN
your should follow your avy and just stick to BREAK DANCING

yo man you gonna spit anytime soon...i aint got much time!

wtf? i just spit dumbass lol.. are you alright man.............................

uppin for votes.. just drop your links and we will return the favor.

upping............................................ ....

aight yo :) wins this one for better punches multis and flow
the other guy had the better structure though

:) fix up ur structure and dont cap everything

but a good verse and for bnetter punches harder hitting punches and more direct punches...my vote goes to :)

v/:)

hit up my battles in the sig please
thanks

:) -took this one, his rhyme structure and punches were on,nice personals and flow
flash-your punches were kinda weak i didnt like the mustache line too much...the vocab was pretty basic...i've seen alot better from you man......good job...

vote: :) (smiley)

return some votes

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113431

wud up yall been awhile since ive been on this site, but imll drop a vote on yalls battle, not bad both of u....... i was feelin :) verse a lil more than flash, dawg u need to work on the structure and punches

:) took this with better punches and flow, nice drop playa................ one

dang man i should have made this open for anyone with anypost amount to be able to vote.. cuz if so i would be up 3 to 0 already.. uppin for more votes

my bad :) i aint gotta enuf posts to poll, when i get em ill poll my vote sorry bout that hollllllllaaaaaaaaa

uppin.............................................

uppin for votes.........................................

damn how many times i got to up this for you fucks to vote?

:-) took this with his opening 4 bars.. his flow and multi structure was far superb.. as far as disses.. flash had some nice original disses, without much content or punch power behind them.. as to where :-) had some witty lines.. a few kool ones but mostly a steady flow to help them along.. a little more advanced and he hit a little harder.. so vote-:-) return an honest vote plz no hate or beef

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113774

This was an aight battle

Smiley had a gud flow with a gud wordplay, need more variation tho, your punches were also gud with nice multis, you need to work a bit on your personals, structure was aight

flash: your flow was a little bit of cuz I didn't felt your rhymes, you had sum ok punches but they didn't came hard as smiley's, you also need to elevate on your personals cuz I hardly saw any, you had a ok structure, you also need to work on voc.

Vote: smiley
Vote on this thx
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113596

i know that you or your boy dont need to be talkin trash
both you play your skin flutes so much you got milk mustashes
heh, alright opening...the concept was decent i suppose. punch wasnt that bad
you call yourself the best but you aint numba 1 or even the best
there just aint no way you gonna be winning this rap contest
eh, not hard at all.. lacks punchs and good metaphors
and the fact remains wen i pull out da glock,ya'll betta dash
ya motha should a left u wen she found u in da trash
weak.. lacks strength and metaphors..
You cant handle my metafives or duck my punch lines
Ill eat this cat up like big pun at lunch time
concept was alright. couldhave had more direction and strength
Fuck the vocab. before I burst like a bubble
You know if you start to mess with me there is gonna be trouble
weak. You need to diss your opponent, you need strength in your punchs
My lyrics are like AIDS cuz they spread for sure
Don’t try 2 mess wit me cuz there wont be any cure
weak. concept is played
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips
Metaphor was alright.. needed more of a punch though
You wouldn't hold hot rhymes if you grabbed-my-lips
endign was alright but for a battle it could have been more. metaphor and concept was good. other than that, it lacked alot for a battle



everytime your voice gets SPOKE IN TRACKS, people just break out in OPEN LAUGHS,
your the biggest JOKE IN RAP
alright opening.. straight punchs.. but could have been alot harder
a verse of yours is bout as advanced as lyrics written by mc hammer after SMOKIN CRACK
your brain must have BROKE AN SMASHED,
not that good of a bar... the punch is alright i suppose.. metaphor is eh, jsut needed a litle more in it
or either as a child you got dropped on your MIND PLATE
cuz your logic just doesnt LINE STRAIGHT
punchs could have been better. metaphor is alright.. lacks direction
you could obtain a higher IQ than yours by testing a PRIME APE
youll never FIND PAPES (dollars)
alright punch.. concept is good but needed a little more with strength in your bar, yea mean?
matter of fact youll always BE WACK
kid couldnt get a "buzz" of your raps by stickin your lyrics in a den of BEESWAX
follow through is to streched, needed to cut that down and better your follow for it. metaphor was alright i suppose
you cant COMPETE, and you've never battled a respectable rapper and had them BEAT
your WEAK, your lyrics written on SHEETS are like "ice cream cones" cuz they melt when in the contact of HEAT
needed to have a better flow here to make this dope.. multi is alright except the punch lacked strength
beating me is something you dont have a SAFE CHANCE IN
your should follow your avy and just stick to BREAK DANCING
ok ending,the personal was an alright shot. could have been slightly better

Over all your verse had some alright multis, and metaphors strength and direction of punchs though needed more in them i thought.


Vote- :)

Took itwith better punchs more consistant and alright metaphors.

2 more votes and i get the win.. uppin for more votes

2 more votes for the ko...................................

i voted on 2 of your battles.. u think u can peep the one i got up..?

uppin so this shit can get closed...........................

vote dickheads......................................... ....

Smilie takes this battle...

He had nice multis... Good hard hitting punches... And a quite nice personal closer which hit hard...

Your structure was fucked though as usual... Lol...

Thats the only thing flash takes... Structure...

Not close... Not a merk... Somewhere between there...

v/ Smilie

Hit this up or a wont be happy with you...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113832

Thanks...

Pz...

Here it is.

Flow=Flash, his flow was better because of :) messed up structure.

Punches= :) he had more punches that were harder hitting. Flash you should work on developing your punches.

Personals= :) he had more personals than Flash and they were just better.

Vocab=Tie, neither of you really had great vocab in this battle, you should both work on it, good vocab can help you out a lot.

Over all= :) , you had some good punches in this battle, your structure was a bit messed up but that never wins a battle unless it's very close, but you should still work on it, keep working at it and it'll all come around.

Flash, your structure was much better in this battle but you need to work on your punches and personals, they are the key to winning battles, just work on developing those and I think you'd have a better chance at winning, keep it up and you should get there.

Vote= :)

Can you two give honest votes on my battles thanks.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625