Oakley Vs. Diverse

1. Rules
2. 10-12 Lines
3. House Rules
4. Thats It...

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Hmmm...How should I hurt Diverse?
Should I start wit da fact that he's elite's worste?/1
Seriously...Elite? How is that possible?
Oh wait....You only got in there for Topicals...:D/2
Stick wit the text Diverse..Stay outta the booth..
We all know ur just a girl..who can't handle the truth!(avi)/3
I fill this wannabe vet wit verbular lead...
Come on!..You actually lost to that herb CarsonJet!/4
I came lookin for talent an I found this Antonym..
After this, U can add 1 less win..along wit reppin Acro Nim(sig)/5
Bitch...Ima end it, hook the IV's an give ya anesthetics...
And no...I dont even wanna know which boyfreind is Poetic.(avi)/6

Oakley's just another knock off version of a name brand
I'm already hot and this kid just got my flames fanned
You ain't UV resistant, my Unique Verse causes melignoma
Change from shades to eye covers b/c your sleeping...in a coma
Fuck Maryland, even the state you live in is named after a girl
Surrounded by femininity so you feel comfortable in this world
You call that an Avi? I call it a Powerpoint failed attempt
Have to tax all the wack herbs, don't think that your exempt
Never saw my side to the story, your straight ahead like tunnel vision
In theory your not bad, but accidents can happen like NASA missions
This kids needs help but I doubt Feeble would tutor you at all
So know you've hit a dead end, banging your head against the wall :banghead:

good battle...are you an alias?

let the voting begin on this battle as well.......

oakely
Hmmm...How should I hurt Diverse?
Should I start wit da fact that he's elite's worste?/1
nice personal, 7/10

Seriously...Elite? How is that possible?
Oh wait....You only got in there for Topicals.../2
lol, simple but effective, 7/10

Stick wit the text Diverse..Stay outta the booth..
We all know ur just a girl..who can't handle the truth!(avi)/3
not hard hitting, 4/

I fill this wannabe vet wit verbular lead...
Come on!..You actually lost to that herb CarsonJet!/4
bad wording lets u donw, not hard hitting, 4/10

I came lookin for talent an I found this Antonym..
After this, U can add 1 less win..along wit reppin Acro Nim(sig)/5
nice, 6/10

Bitch...Ima end it, hook the IV's an give ya anesthetics...
And no...I dont even wanna know which boyfreind is Poetic.(avi)/6
lol, made me laugh, 7/10


simple but effective, punches, nice overall verse!!

overall 36/60



Diverse
Oakley's just another knock off version of a name brand
I'm already hot and this kid just got my flames fanned
not too bad, 5/10

You ain't UV resistant, my Unique Verse causes melignoma
Change from shades to eye covers b/c your sleeping...in a coma
creative, 7/10

Fuck Maryland, even the state you live in is named after a girl
Surrounded by femininity so you feel comfortable in this world
lol, again nice punch, 7/10

You call that an Avi? I call it a Powerpoint failed attempt
Have to tax all the wack herbs, don't think that your exempt
nice personal, 7/10

Never saw my side to the story, your straight ahead like tunnel vision
In theory your not bad, but accidents can happen like NASA missions
good punch, 5/10

This kids needs help but I doubt Feeble would tutor you at all
So know you've hit a dead end, banging your head against the wall
bad wording let u down, 5/10


overall 35/60

I'll be damnned...

Diverse got hornswaggled!

This cat Oakley is definately a vet.

Merked Diverse with the personals...
Alot of them and all hard hitting.

Diverse tried in vain to fight back...
But he just didn't have the personal ammo for one...
And secondly, he didn't match the wit.

(The closer by Oakley was hilarious)

Straight merk...

Sorry, Diverse...no hate at all, but ya got gotten!

Peace

iight...

Oakley...

Hmmm...How should I hurt Diverse?
Should I start wit da fact that he's elite's worste?/1
Nice enough... 6/10
Seriously...Elite? How is that possible?
Oh wait....You only got in there for Topicals.../2
His topicals are dope... Not as dope as mine... But yea... 6/10
Stick wit the text Diverse..Stay outta the booth..
We all know ur just a girl..who can't handle the truth!(avi)/3
No... 4/10
I fill this wannabe vet wit verbular lead...
Come on!..You actually lost to that herb CarsonJet!/4
No... Did you misspell 'lead' cuz <--- that... Doesnt rhyme... Bad... 4/10
I came lookin for talent an I found this Antonym..
After this, U can add 1 less win..along wit reppin Acro Nim(sig)/5
Hmm... Badly worded... 5/10
Bitch...Ima end it, hook the IV's an give ya anesthetics...
And no...I dont even wanna know which boyfreind is Poetic.(avi)/6
Sort of a weak closer... Good vocabulary though... 6/10

Overall... 31/60

Diverse...

Oakley's just another knock off version of a name brand
I'm already hot and this kid just got my flames fanned
Personal... 7/10
You ain't UV resistant, my Unique Verse causes melignoma
Change from shades to eye covers b/c your sleeping...in a coma
Good... Personal... Punch... Good... 6/10
Fuck Maryland, even the state you live in is named after a girl
Surrounded by femininity so you feel comfortable in this world
Nah... Not good... 4/10
You call that an Avi? I call it a Powerpoint failed attempt
Have to tax all the wack herbs, don't think that your exempt
[b]Nice... Vocabulary was good... First line let it down... 6/10
Never saw my side to the story, your straight ahead like tunnel vision
In theory your not bad, but accidents can happen like NASA missions
Good enough... 5/10
This kids needs help but I doubt Feeble would tutor you at all
So know you've hit a dead end, banging your head against the wall
Stretched... Not bad... 5/10

Overall... 33/60

v/ Diverse

Pz...[/i]

Oakley ur rhymes is whack, go back to Kindergarden wit that Dr. Seuess shit! Holaa @ cha Gurl

I'm going with oakley on this one....its clear that he is an alias or a vet that has done this before.....Nice personals......the only line i didn't like was the line about which boyfriend he was gonna wax.....that was a bad play off the avy because sex jokes are played and that although not a direct sex joke still classifies in my book as a sexual punch......Diverse you had personals they just weren't as effective...Props on the bridge personal and the paying the toll punch though those were both very nice.....Your punches were clearly there and you presented well i think in this case you just didn't know the potential of the opponent and therefore didn't come with the blaze....which is what you needed to take this battle........vote goes to Oakley pz out ..

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Well I think you both prove here that shorter punches are more effective than them long ass ones.

v/ - Oakley

Sorry Diverse...I like your verse and all but your standing in the shadow here. This battle can be compared to the average strength kid vs the class bully. The average strengthed kid can put up a fight...but in the end...all of those shots that the bully got on him just gives him the victory. Which is exactly what happens here...you hit hard and put up a good fight...But Oakley hit you a lot more times...he hit you harder...and he hit where it hurts.

Return the favour and vote on my battle against KyroFaggot in frontlines please. Thank you.

oakley won this shit, but im racist against him so im not gon give an explanation or vote

oakley took this by making distinct punches. although....i already used those concepts on my battle. so besides the played factor...they hit decently and connected well. come could of reworded but over all hit effectively.
diverse make sure u come on the attact with definitely distinguishable punches. make sure each bar hits. i guess it all depends on the voters (ie our battle)

vote: O