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Due Tomorrow Midnight
Get In Tonight Or Try
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10 Lines
Due Tomorrow Midnight
Get In Tonight Or Try
yo both drop this shit in 45 mins aight?
Word, Checking In.....................Try To Get It In Earliest Possible Tho
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Dogg, Dont State The Obivious, Cuz I Already..
..Know..
No Need To Tell Me That I'llIm Blowing Away Lust, As If My Punches Were Winds Of..Quote:
Originally Posted by Lust
..Gust..
Cuz He Has Sexual Desire, You Getting Stomped On Like Earths..
..Crust!..
Punches Hittin You Hard, Nother' Knock Out, Thats Right, Im..
..Correct..
Dont Battle Me, Jus Duck, You Can Post When Your Punches..
..Connect!..
I Woulda Had This Up As A 2 Minute Key, But RB Went..
..Down..
Im Shattering This Kid, His Punches Keep Missing..
..Around And Around..
This Is A Half Assed Verse, Wouldnt Be Surprised If You..
..Won..
Your Not Worth 3 Credits, So I'll Lie To Make Happy..
..This Was Only For Fun!..
Actually It Wasnt But Lie Happy, Get IT?
your the replica nigga on the block who claims he tight but really hes herendous
im distinct you'll never find a MC more tremendous
i gotta fetish for herbin nitches like you
ur the old testament , IM THE NEW
im hear to try and exstinct u like they did wit the jews
you aint gunna beat me with ur played out remarks
i'll put a mussel on ur ass like they do with dogs who barks
put ur ass on the hush, dont pout
i flow like a water spout, ill shread your ass wit out a doubt
the lines i spit are nothing shy of perfect fuck this im out
nitches = bitches my bad
Dogg, Dont State The Obivious, Cuz I Already..
..Know..
No Need To Tell Me That I'll
*Quote:
Originally Posted by Lust
Im Blowing Away Lust, As If My Punches Were Winds Of..
..Gust..
Cuz He Has Sexual Desire*, You Getting Stomped On Like Earths..
..Crust!..
Punches Hittin You Hard, Nother' Knock Out, Thats Right, Im..
..Correct..
Dont Battle Me, Jus Duck, You Can Post When Your Punches..
..Connect!..
I Woulda Had This Up As A 2 Minute Key, But RB Went..
..Down..
Im Shattering This Kid, His Punches Keep Going*..
..Around And Around..
This Is A Half Assed Verse, Wouldnt Be Surprised If You..
..Won..
Your Not Worth 3 Credits**, So I'll Lie To Make Happy..
..This Was Only For Fun!..
Actually It Wasnt But Lie Happy, Get IT?
* = Corrections
*= Lust= Sexual Desire
**= 3 Credits A Battle
Correction Completed And I Fixed The Quote Thing
uppin for votes
Uppin For Win.............................................
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half-assed battle lmao. Even tho both of ya came crappy...my vote goes to Ill Testament.
why? Better punches and better verse overall. I like dat structure too...really highlights the punchlines. But anyways...even tho both had sum played concepts for their punchlines...atleast Ill Testament's were more creative and did hit harder. Lust...you came ok...but no disses that really made me go "dammm" tho. Anyways...
v/ - Ill Testament
oh i forgot...vote here. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113306
aight this was pretty simple even though both verses were half-assed...
Flow-IT
Multis-IT
Vocab-lust
Punches-IT
Wordplay-IT
Structure-tie (both choppy)
Personals-IT
aight so both can improved their structure...Lust you just need more better personals as well as multis...put them in whenever you can you know...definately learn how to use wordplay....you used like 2 "big" words...haha n they werent the greatest vocab...werent the greatest spelled either...plus hit hikm with punches period...i saw no punches that could touch anyone anytime...both elevate...aight...half-assed battle... vote- IT
alright, well, ill, kinda weak verse for you, but not awful, some pretty good lines in there, good wordplay and creativity.
lust at first you came harder that ill, but then you lost it and your verses just got bad
--ur the old testament , IM THE NEW pretty-- good line there but after that it got pretty terrible.
vote-testament
weak battle....testament blew him away with his punches...they were much harder....lust you should work on throwing some punches....testament structure was different...but it fowed ok...lust you neet to lern better structure....wasnt many mutlies....personals they werent many for either side....some attempts...but nothin special....vocab was decent from both....lust just needs to elevate....testament takes this easy...much better wordplay and everything else....
overall - vote testament....
Alright this battke was ok....but I think Testament took it.....
Why?
His flow was better, his punches hit harder, and his sturcture was good.......Lust It seemed a couple of your lines were forced but I mean people only get better with time.....know what I mean? Good shit you guys keep it up.