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No feeding
Blind Spits
No crew voting
Due in less than 2 hours from time of both checkins
This my checkin.. Are you ready, my verse is done..
Holy shit - its osoma bin laden
im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin
pulled up by the back, show you to the world
Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl?
West london huh? never been there, dont care to
To bad theres no talent look they sent you
In my first two lines i left you crippled
Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls
Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit"
Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight
Ill give you portriats to make this timeless
Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless
The definition is, no one to bite, define this?
If im right your battle will be lineless
I decide to research, and came across your openmic
What the hell was that shit, you were high right?
Im not expecting much really im not..
In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop
Lmao, thank you for making those last lines really count!!!
Upping for you ass, man at least drop.
LOL...ignorant fawk..
Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system..
Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace..
'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality..
Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities..
Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?..
You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam..
Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars..
putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars..
Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin..
Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff)
Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second..
God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence..
Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock..
Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''..
Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries..
Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die..
I DID THIS TO YOU...
Remember my name...
lets get some votes in..
peace
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jihad check yo pm box and reply
HOLY SHIT this is the best battle of the whole fuckin week....in my opinion jihad takes dis cuz his flow was better his punches were stronger and his punches made me laugh outcome u hade sum ill lines dere too but jihad made me laugh...i cant poll but if i could jihad u'd get my vote...no hate
OUTCOME =
Holy shit - its osoma bin laden
im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin
OK
pulled up by the back, show you to the world
Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl?
BLAH
West london huh? never been there, dont care to
To bad theres no talent look they sent you
NICE PERSONAL
In my first two lines i left you crippled
Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls
NICE
Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit"
Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight
HARSH, BUT OK
Ill give you portriats to make this timeless
Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless
NA
The definition is, no one to bite, define this?
If im right your battle will be lineless
LOL, NICE
I decide to research, and came across your openmic
What the hell was that shit, you were high right?
UMMM NO
Im not expecting much really im not..
In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop
OK FINISH
JIHAD =
Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system..
Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace..
DIDNT RHYME
'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality..
Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities..
NA NO PUNCH
Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?..
You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam..
NICE LINE
Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars..
putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars..
UMM OK FIRST LINE
Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin..
Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff)
LOL, LOL
Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second..
God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence..
NICE
Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock..
Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''..
BLAH
Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries..
Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die..
NA AND PLAYED
VERY CLOSE BATTLE, I'M GIVIN THE FLOW TO OUTCOME BUT THE STRUCTURE TO J, PUNCHES I THOUGHT OUTCOME CAME THE STRONGER, JUST AND HAD MORE PERSONALS. VOCAB GOES TO J ALSO. THIS IS A TIGHT BATTLE.
VOTE = OUTCOME < ONLY ON THE FACT I FELT YOUR PUNCHES HITHARDER.
PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR AND VOTE ON THE BATTLE UNDER MY SIG. THANKS
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1-1 keep em coming
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Out had the better punches, more personal and direct. I also liked the flow better,the structure helped.
Ji u beat Out on creativity but ur structure wasn't as good which kinda ruined ur flow.
Vote=OutCome
Jihad peep my battle wiv Baz187 an drop an honest vote, appretiate it
Quote:
Originally Posted by {Jihad}
^^^
OutCome Hadda Verse I aint Never Seen Really..
his stylz Different then Alotta Peeps Here..Read it Twice, then You'll Understand His Flow Better..
Ji-had..i like your avvy First..Second, your Flow was Boring..Punches were Ok, But Kinda Played..Dont givva Fuck what you say or think about this..my Post says 3 or 4, but i know iv'e been flowin longer then you, Especially on R.b..
Over-all.. Not bad of a Battle..Ji-had, your not bad, but your stylz Old..
cant Poll yet
Vote - OutCome
any1 with a bit of experience and knowledge wanna vote?
Be quiet, first you post a day late then you feed off my verse when the rules say not to... LoL
Upping For More Votes
OUTCOME =
Holy shit - its osoma bin laden
im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin
Not bad thought u cud of dun better
pulled up by the back, show you to the world
Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl?
Naaa didnt like this line horrible
West london huh? never been there, dont care to
To bad theres no talent look they sent you
Nice line....this 1 made me laugh
In my first two lines i left you crippled
Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls
didnt get this 1
Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit"
Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight
Nice liked this
Ill give you portriats to make this timeless
Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless
Get rid of this line
The definition is, no one to bite, define this?
If im right your battle will be lineless
Lol made me laugh agen nice line
I decide to research, and came across your openmic
What the hell was that shit, you were high right?
not bad but ok
Im not expecting much really im not..
In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop
nice finisha
JIHAD
Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system..
Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace..
Wack line cum betta than this
'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality..
Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities..
NAAAA dont like this eitha
Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?..
You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam..
lol nice
Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars..
putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars..
ok ish
Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin..
Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff)
lol but u fed off his verse
Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second..
God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence..
nice
Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock..
Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''..
Get Rid
Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries..
Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die..
Naaaaa
ok battle but im givin this 1 2 outcome y?his flow and structure was better and had the better personals and punches also jihad fed of his verse in 1 of the lines so outcome gets this
outcome go poll vote on this now plz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113153
once u poll voted imma cum bk hit this up wit a poll.......
Jihad cud u also hit ^^^ it up wit a vote plz
Upping
outcome go poll vote on my battle and leave a lmsg 2 say u have then i will cum bk here and drop my poll vote the link 2 me battle is on the 1st page
up.
poll voted
Upping
You newbie fucks. Outcome....your verse was garbage...nothing more, possibly less. Virtually everything about it was shit. What little punches you did have were weak as fuck. Jihad...used wordplay...had some nice concepts...much harder punches then outcome. There were a couple lines that were too extended...and a couple played. It wasn't a bad verse...with some polish and some work, you could be dope. Just keep the creativity up. Try and get in elevated front lines...get away from these newbie sluts.
Vote ~ Jihad
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Out:
Holy shit - its osoma bin laden
im ill..snap ya neck n leave ya head bobin
laden's old...coulda picked a betta word than bobin, maybe hangin? my opinion
pulled up by the back, show you to the world
Everyone stares like whats happen to that girl?
punch i guess, kinda weak
West london huh? never been there, dont care to
To bad theres no talent look they sent you
first line's fillin, nex is aight
In my first two lines i left you crippled
Leave you pist, like pugs traded for pitbulls
aight, you didnt really leave him crippled
Thinking to himself, "what i godda strong bit"
Jihad? didnt that nigga die in a 9/11 flight
i don't know where the rhyme is here
Ill give you portriats to make this timeless
Battled you cause of poor taste, your rhymeless
aight punch
The definition is, no one to bite, define this?
If im right your battle will be lineless
aight
I decide to research, and came across your openmic
What the hell was that shit, you were high right?
didn't go into his openmic, but the puch was aight
Im not expecting much really im not..
In all accuallality im not expecting you to drop
K, you already kinda said this
J:
Smokin this victim, Ji's puttin a choke hold on your system..
Your past-gay, acting like ash tray from don't be a menace..
Started aight, then didn't rhyme...
'The outcome'..im winning it Valiantly with a killa mentality..
Hard? in Mortal kombat you chose freindships over fatalities..
aight
Im pissed off with the ya flow -no groom- how are you the best-man?..
You rock MICS in shows? lol only when rapping on your web-cam..
ok ok
Left dead fam serving martini's the only time your controling bars..
putting fire to dude, theres no title for you like stolen cars..
alright rhyme, didn't really hit tho
Faggot ass cryin bout Holy war and laden and the way my fists sparkin..
Leavin the Outcome confused like blind lesbians in fish markets. lol (sniff)
You shoulda said "..fists spark it", that woulda flowed betta, nice punch tho
Takin your pride, hold it for ransom, leavin it ripped in a second..
God really stumbled upon talent, when he tripped in my presence..
I dunno
Out's like cattle with a sense of humor the laughing stock..
Ji blasting off, Outcome?..''He dont Bling, He be bangin-cocks''..
aight punch, good play
Bitch, I'll have the crowd rollin...ova ya grave in laughter and cries..
Like fairy tales, I'll proceed to live happily ever...after you die..
Aight ending
punches, goes to J, he had more, both kinda weak tho.
flow, goes to J, Out, you had a couple non rhymers, really broke the flow.
Aight, Ima say this is J's. When I have 100 posts, I'll vote, aight? Check out my battles.
And Outcome, about that line you didnt understand:
"I'll have you wining like you be crushin grapes;"
I can't believe you didnt get it. Its a pun. Whining, like boo hoo, and wining like making wine? You crush grapes to make wine? get he? Joke joke ha ha???
aight, here's my battles, dont be pricks, hit em up, I took some time here:
KayOhh vs Chugs4Life
KayOhh vs Kuniva
Thx for the experienced peepz...
these newbies suck..
uppin
well, to correct oliver, this is not one of the best battles this week, but it was decent for frontlines..both had decent structure,and everything else was about even, flow was on point for both, but I have to give this one to Jihod because in my opinion, he had harder hitting punches that really connected harder and was better.
so my vote goes to Jihod
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962
cool...
poll votes aswell plz...
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damn, I just have to post again, Jihod had some good ass wordplay, not that I read some shit over again..he should be winnin this shit 5-0..anyway..that lesiban line was hard,..that god line was tight also..this was just an continue of my last vote, so it wont get disqaulified..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112962