Ten lines Max.
No Dickrydin or Bullshit Plz
I'll be droppin 2morrow it's 2 damn late
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Ten lines Max.
No Dickrydin or Bullshit Plz
I'll be droppin 2morrow it's 2 damn late
I'm checkin in and droppin in ten minutes so good luck to Veloci-Rapper
I peeped ya only textstyle that shit was sloppy to me,and you couldn't be ill with madness if you had sex wit bobby lee and caught a std and like a diamond deuce i always beat an ace of spades cuz i command mics wit a "fury" like marvel comics and agent nick must be talkin to nuts or pagin dicks thinkin you could beat me ya prolly yellow like an asian bitch ya just like my former lover who neva took showers ya extinct (ex stink) and i'm neva shook when it comes ta droppin so i won't no show ya like a clumsy pornstar your the only ones ta drop the ball and choke like kevon dyson when he was wit mcnair and'em so just lay down and die son ya prolly could come up with sum hot shit if ya lied down in it during july and quit if ya rap just bite from sumone and you couldn't finish (finnish) me off you came finland and hand me a "dutch" i'm dun 1
GL and i'm waiting
Check it...
This battles like a horror movie, y'all are guessin' whos the killer
Well forget the suspense, cuz even this kat knows that I'm Iller
Your like a 3 year old coloring outside the lines with wut you're sketchin'
I would tell everyone that ur dope, but that'd only be an "Urban" Legend
Switch...
It amazes me to know how you actually think that you have a chance in this thing
Reminds me of that asian guy on American idol who thot he culd dance and sing
Face it son, you're a lost cause striving for nothin
You're a detonator and I'm here holding the button
So guess what, your time is up, go bid farewell to your friends
On second thought its over, The Buttons pressed--Ur life ends
g'luck. sum freestyle.
pz
nice drop. and thanx for the compliment on my OM urban.
nice battle we got here. uppin this...
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don't slp plz. even tho we're fresh on this. shuld be a real easy
read. so uppin this. vote plz..
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cmon peepz. vote plz.
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dammit. lol...................voooooooote kidz....................
..................just cuz we can't.....
...it doesn't mean that you shuld...
i'll gladly hit urs up wen i can.........pz
urban i didnt like your verse it all,
the flow was off and the punches were pretty wack
nothing impressive it was kinda sad
veloci-rapper your shit was decent, not that great but better at least
the americon idol line was funny, prolly the best in the battle
vote- veloci
thanks, its funny how I keep posting to get votes, and when this thread
finally gets one, its not polled. lol. great.
pz.
uppin for some polled votes. i'll be able
to vote soon, so hit this up and i'll glady
vote fairly on ur battles in return.
thanx.
pz
Shit uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin uppin shit if i have say uppin one more fuckin time!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
prolly be uping this shit for life for the rest of my life dumbs sleepin bitchs
damn no votes yet. so sad. haha. i will return a fair vote to your battle
Decent battle...
Good shit from Ace.
Definately enough to win.
(the opener was really,really nice)
Kinda went south from there, you never matched the fire of the first 2 lines...
But you didn't throw anything whack...
Steady attack with wordplay, the personal on the name...nothing great, but the jab was always there.
Flow was there.
Urban, on the other hand...
Used a format that guarantees killing flow.
What's wrong with regular lines, man?
Some good metas (fury, and asain bitch)...
But that was it, man.
His attempt at wordplay (extinct/ex-stink) was horrible...
Basically dissed yaself saying you were fucking a non bathing skank.
Overall, way too much filler, and punches that really missed.
Peace
It amazes me to know how you actually think that you have a chance in this thing
Reminds me of that asian guy on American idol who thot he culd dance and sing
^^hee hee... dub hung is like my hero...but a dope line too... coulda played off of it a bit more in the next line... good structure overall nothing to complex though i was a little dissapointed...
ya just like my former lover who neva took showers ya extinct (ex stink) and i'm neva shook when it comes ta droppin so i won't no show ya like a clumsy pornstar your the only ones ta drop the ball and choke
^^just grabbed a passage that was ok... see i would have grabbed my fav line... if you had lines... this block structure is just annoying and hard to read... besides i slogged through it three times still couldn't find a decent rhyme... work on structure...punchs were good but...personals sucked...
vote = ace
Pretty good from both of you.
Ace that was good i've seen better from you.
U.R. that was good too.
Still, my vote goes to Ace of Aces.
Keep it real
This was a alright battle..
Urban: Didnt like how you structured your verse, it threw the flow off...the vocab was alright.....had some ok punches i thought....you also had some good metas in there, I liked some of those.
Veloci or Ace: You had good structure in your verse, just the second part made it seem stretched out a bit but it was still good...You had the better punches though, Some of those made me laugh....The flow was good as well.
Overall: it was a alright battle...But Veloci/Ace takes this for the better verse overall I thought...He just came harder with the punches. Props to both though.
Vote goes to Veloci/Ace
^thanx for the votes. finish this up.
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k my vote goes to ace for a good strcturea nd good pucnhes and personals
you had the best line in the battle in this one:
that was aightQuote:
Your like a 3 year old coloring outside the lines with wut you're sketchin'
I would tell everyone that ur dope, but that'd only be an "Urban" Legend
urban had an ok flow and shit but it was too elementary and it didnt work with the punches
my vote goes to ace for the better verse and punches
hit up the battle vs mouse b please ...i need one more
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Dis was a very weak battle..urban work on ur structure first..then try to elevate..ace had a descent drop..wid attempts and wordplay and had good flow..had some descent punches..not bad multi's too..Okay battle but Ace got this in my opinion..
V/ Ace
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-ILLunatic
rite this battle would of been nice to be honest.....................but urban killed it with that flow....................wich basically lost himn the battle he had an ite verse.........punches coulda bin harder but his flow was non exsistence along with strucutre....................wich lost him this.ace nice verse flow was good punches ok strucuture a lil rusty in parts but you got the win.........not a bad battle both work on structure and harder punches.
make sure you plkz hit this NOW http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117483 thx alot.
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dogg make sure you hit that plz man i took the time..............................
it was a decent battle but ace gets my vote
structure-ace, i could barly read urbans
flow-ace
personals-ace
punches-ace
opener-ace
closer-ace
my vote goes to ace bc his verse was much bbetter than urbans
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how wasnt that a fair vote Axiom
every 1 else votes like that and they dont get their vote took away bitch
DAMN. please explain your votes so they can count.
honestly i think at least one of those^ are explained well
anough. oh well.
finish this plz.
No Votes. :-(
lol. plz vote. leave a link if you want me to return a fair vote on
a battle of yours. thank you.
pz
damn i explained my vote as much as i could soz ace m8 you did win....................plz do me qa favor and hit this up man leave another link honest shit http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=117659 thx dogg and soz bout the vote.
MY VERDICT
Good shit from both of you and surpriseingly a good drop from urban cause bein a newb and all so pretty good allaround but this has to goto ace of aces cause his drop was better.
URBAN: good drop for your level but ur flow sucked personals were half assed u could of done better and no multies no punches pretty weak all ya had was a little vocab goin and long lines.but they dunt win battles 3/10
my favourite line:
"dicks thinkin you could beat me ya prolly yellow like an asian bitch ya just like my former lover who neva took showers ya extinct (ex stink) and i'm"
ACE: good shit man pretty good flow nice structure coulda been betta but still good nice punches and attacks good work on vocab. i didnt like your "switch" that was the only thing i didnt like bout your drop but all in all still good. 6/10
my favourite line:
"It amazes me to know how you actually think that you have a chance in this thing
Reminds me of that asian guy on American idol who thot he culd dance and sing"
Flow:ace
Structure:ace
humor:ace
vocab:urb
overall:ace
MY VOTE: Ace Of Aces
ok im gonna redo my vote
ace- had giood punches and personals
the flow was good and it made for easy reading which made ur verse better.
the structure was good and it also made ur verse better. the wordplay was also good and it styrethened ur verse....keeo up the good work...i like the way u battle....keep gwettin better
urban- the punches were ok...nothin really special
the personals were bad becuase i didnt see any.....the punches didnt hit hard at all
i didnt like the flow of ur verse....it made me think about the bars and thats not good
.....elevate....try using personals because it makes ur verse better.....flow was ok and the stucture was ok but not better than ace....elevate and ull get better
v/ace
hope thats explained well enough
Sorry. Your original vote was explained well enough by recent standards.
-Axe