B,mouse v Rappin' master

checkin in. ok wit da rulz. u spit first bro.............

b,mouse, dont bother writing threads if u aint gunna bother turning up

ayo, i was out and i said that if you accept you spit first dog, so spit

This Guy Is A Wannabe Rapper, He Finks Dat Hes The Best,
hes finks dat he can beat me just like the rest,
He's The Best Of His Time? Well Then He Would Be Sitting On His Coach,
wen I have finished with you, you will be running bac into ur mumma's pouch,
This Guy Running From Me, But He Ain't Getting No Where Like Tred Mills,
u couldnt stimulate yourself, even if you had all of the pills,
This Guys First Class? Well He's Getting Stamped The Quickest,
this place aint for the types of you, its survival of the fittest,
Im Like A Cereal Killer, Wen People See Me They Go Snap, Crackle And Pop,
stop talkin dat street shit, wen im king of hip-hop,
afta reading this u will stop harassing me, ull never doubt thee,
u come near me again, and ill beat ur ass legailly

haha

i know you a "pussy" but i'll make you have a "hole"~for~real,
this guys so "fake" i don't even know if his nose~is~real,
i'll give you more "claps" than a shakespeare opera,
you were on a roll but b.mouse is here ta stop~ya,
please dont battle again i dont like~your~lyrics,
and like tyson dog please, bite~my~ear~quick!,
you bump~the~truck, then i'll fuck~you~up,
you chump~you~suck, either jump~or~duck,
cuz i'm b.mouse but i'ma still exterminate~ya,
and i''ve got guns wit "red eyes on it" like the terminator!

voets in now

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Ehh? Not nice from either.. but.. it came down to least played punches.. cos each line from each of u was played as fukk.. but mouse had the best bar wiv his opener.. it was slightly original but still lacked any force.. plus ur structure made for the beginnings of a flow.. but u both really need to work on some new metas an concepts.. peep some battles in Elite, LLL or Elevated.. or jus continue bein wack..

VoTe = b, mouse

thanx for the vote dog i'll take the advice, 1-0 uppin (2)

ya they both were pretty close but b mouse had that first line and that made the diffrence vote- b,mouse

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yo master jst takes dis....both week but master came with beta puches....b mouse verse was ok but needs a bit of work...both had no flow..elmentery structure...
v/rappin' master(jst)

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aight then, uuuuuupppppiiiiinnnnnnnnnnnnn....................2-1

thats obviously a dickridin vote because you barely explained it and i saw master vote on yours barely explainin it either, but i'ma allow it

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I cant officially vote ( not enough posts) but here's what I thought:

Flow: Both did a pretty decent job. I'd have to say though, that
B. Mouse flowed a little better. He had good structure, which
helped his shit flow. Also had some multis. Rappin's verse
had alright flow, but I felt that the structure let him
down, cause' a few lines seemed stretched.

Punches/Personals: Rappin' had a few good punches, like the treadmill
line and the first class line, but the rest came
off too weak/played. B,mouse also didn't have that
great of punches. A few lines were played like the
Tyson line and the Terminator line but the first line
I liked. Neither had any personals. All in all
kinnda average for both, but I'd say Rappin'
edged him out slightly by being a bit more creative

Vocab/Creativity: Basic vocab on both parts, creatively speaking
Rappin' took it. Mouse's punches were a little simple
and a few lines were played. Rappin's lines
also seemed a little bland and played, but had a few
that stood out more than Mouse's.

Overall: Not a great battle, but decent. Both had good flow but battles
are won with punches. This is where I felt Rappin' did
slightly better, due to creativity. Both need to use personals
which were absent from this battle. Punches also need work
they were played and didn't hit that hard. Close one but
If I could vote I would have to say Rappin' Master
barely edged him out.

close battle, wasnt very good but some of it made me laugh
b mouse had some funny shit and a good flow
r.m your flow was ok but ur punches were elementary( ull get better)
vote-r.m

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1166316

sorry bout that
vote-b. mouse ( was what i meant)

aite his is how this happend,

rappin masta = good flow in your piece tho the structure waz a bit off, your punches hit hard in some places and ya vocab was ok.

b-mouse = flow was ok, punches didnt hit as hard as masta, vocab was ok.

flow = masta
vocab=b-mouse
punches=masta
vote = masta

PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR SINCE I VOTED IN THIS BATTLE, THE LINK IS UNDER MY SIG. THANKS

come on ppl. we need more votes....................

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the votes need to be on da poll dick..................

fine then, 2-1 dick, this site is shit anyway, maybe i'll come back another time and rip everybody

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...02#post1169602 vote here please

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=113159

Aiight I peeped ya's, could you return the favor