D.liver.E VS wtf r u doin

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10 linez min
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well just the person i wanted to c
actually, i not bovered who i beat
you have come just on the right day
just right now i gota lot 2 say
u realy do think u gota chance in hell
i think ull b lucky if u cud find uve got a braincell
i bet wiv that weird name u think u rule this land
i just think u sound like a postman
if u dont no wot im sayin, n think im talkin balls
quite simply im tellin u, u no f*** all

ok I'm gonna feel guilty over takin' this one but fuck it... yeah I said fuck, no need for censorship :thefinger: :shoot:

ok then didnt know about that before, oh well, spit then

"What the fuck am I doin"? Stupid itz called battlin'
"what the fuck r u doin"? Guezz they call it ratlin'
I know ya type, actin' all hard but know u can't rhyme
I lost track of time but u clearly lost track of mind
u act sweet but know sweetness doesn't survive
u only actin' wild but battlin' aint all about the mime
gonna diss me now knowin' my skillz r higher ?
ur that shake titz 'n make hitz type like mariah
fear when I rhyme, I'll leave ALL u faggotz numb
your azz iz done, I juzt blew it up like a bubble gum
fuck doin' a battle, make this shit my rap anthem
my rhyme skill iz major while yourz iz juzt bantam...

not a very good battle
wtf was straight up wack, his rymes were just too simple and he didnt have any good puches
d.liver came with better punches and flow
vote d.liver

peep my battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112516

so u think u r battlin, n ureally canbattle
n im rattlin, well y wernt u given the baby rattle
im never actin hard, n never hevedreamt of it in the day
not like u gettin hard wiv boyz, coz ur secrets ur really gay
how cud i fear, sum1 that cudnt rhyme
u might aswelll go into the business of mime
u may hav more experience and more skills
but the 1 thing against u, is im the 1 wiv the balls
ub really hav pulled it off this time, n really hav shocked me
uve come up wiv rhymes that are hgher than the mentality age of 3

itz over... let it go... and u were bitin' so fuck off rookie :thefinger

code, up it on the pollz plz.......................

well its hands up to d.liver.e....its true..he does have better skillz and obviously a little more experience....D.Liver.E- nice flow...i like the mariah line...good wordplay too..metas were ok....it was good if anything maybe work on some vocab.
WTF ru doin-what the fuck are you doing??? j/k.....you're lines were really short and didn't really flow well you're vocab could use some work.....you need harder punches that actually hit....keep at it man!

vote:D.liver.E....sorry i can't vote officially....return the favor

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426

Here's how it is.

Flow=D, he had a better flow to his piece which made it an easier read and more enjoyable. WTF, you should work on your flow a bit, it was a little messed up.

Punches=D, his punches were over all harder. WTF, you should work on punching straight at someone, it seemed like you had a lot of filler in your piece.

Personals=WTF, I have to give this one to WTF just because I didn't really see any personals from D, and only one from WTF so it has to go to WTF. You should both work on developing personals, good personals are a very good tool.

Vocab=D, he had a better range of vocab in his drop, WTF, you should work on your vocab, it can help win a battle.

Over all=D, you had an okay drop here, you had some good punches and a good flow, but you need to work on personals and some on your vocab, it was better in this battle but it could be improved, keep at it and you'll keep getting better.
WTF, you had one good personal in this battle, but you need to work on your punches, your vocab, and your flow, it will really help you get better if you do some work on improving those areas, other than that just keep at it.

Vote=D

I forgot to ask for votes on my battles, sorry about this. Here's the links.
I took time on your battle, just asking for the same.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112136
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108625

D.liver.E took this 1 easy,even though the battle was wack he had a better flow and sum quite good punches...............
wtf r u doin...... wtf were u doin???that was some weak shit son.. u had no good punches at all,and ur flow was all wrong(very patchy)..ur lines were 2simple and shud of been stretched abit more..............
V.. D.liver.E

My bad heres the link 2my battle.......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112376

all im askin for is u 2 return the favour seen as itook the time on urs...........

for my 1st time, i aint that arsed about it at all

flow- wtf, his flowed better jus cus he didnt have any vocab and was real short
vocab- liver, wasn't very good, but the other guy just didnt have one "wtf" u really need ta just think of less used words and go from there to rhyme wit them it'll get u on different topics and not make u look like such a newbie, and throw sum multi's in there
punches- liver, cus he didn't bite off the other doo's
originality-liver cus wtf jus fed
multis- neither, ya'll need ta put them in so your flows are better

vote- liver bothe real weak tho work on dat shit

yo liver u said u voted for me but chu didnt up in the real thing.... do dat and anyone else get at my battle agianst tactixx drop a link and i'll return the favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112426

vote
d.liver.e
wtf? wtf
ya flo is mad basic
improve on flo and vocab
d.liver.e
won
dis one
(you need some work too d)

well just the person i wanted to c
actually, i not bovered who i beat
what the fuck...this shit is wack

you have come just on the right day
just right now i gota lot 2 say
damn hell no

u realy do think u gota chance in hell
i think ull b lucky if u cud find uve got a braincell
no it coulda been flipped but no

i bet wiv that weird name u think u rule this land
i just think u sound like a postman
so so personal but its a weak punch

if u dont no wot im sayin, n think im talkin balls
quite simply im tellin u, u no f*** all
aww thats cute...he blanked out fuck...bad punch



"What the fuck am I doin"? Stupid itz called battlin'
"what the fuck r u doin"? Guezz they call it ratlin'
its aight a so so punch

I know ya type, actin' all hard but know u can't rhyme
I lost track of time but u clearly lost track of mind
second part is aight so so

u act sweet but know sweetness doesn't survive
u only actin' wild but battlin' aint all about the mime
aint feeling this

gonna diss me now knowin' my skillz r higher ?
ur that shake titz 'n make hitz type like mariah
lmao wtf was this...hmmm....no

fear when I rhyme, I'll leave ALL u faggotz numb
your azz iz done, I juzt blew it up like a bubble gum
ahhh its aight so so punch

fuck doin' a battle, make this shit my rap anthem
my rhyme skill iz major while yourz iz juzt bantam..
its aight nothing too good

overall i gotta go with d liver

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