Center Sight V Till Eye Die

10-16 lines
no d/r
no crew
unexplained
bull
votes

Check..
due in 20 minutes

Here It Comes Er'ybody Center Sight's In For A Fight
He Challenged Me Wonder If He's Feeling Alright
Ima Smoke His Ass Faster The Cheech And Chong
Wait A Second.. Center You Cant Drag Along
Even If Ya Had Chopsticks You Couldnt Serve This Asian
1..2..3.. *Snap Snap* Knock Out You Lookin Dazed Man
Jeez..... Why Do You Bother Even Trying To Step Up
Like Coming Out Of The Closet This Fag's Tryna Fess Up
Fuck It Jeez Why Did I Accept This So-Called Battle
I Coulda Bit Off Dr. Suess ' Doodles And Daddles'
He Got Merked By 13 Year Olds..
..................To Scare Them Changed His Age To 19
Like Tampa Bay I 'Struck' down Ya Hope Like Lightning
Dont Front Man Burn 'Mesh' Like Jerzee His Hometown
Finding Sluts? Look Center Sight Ya Hoes Found
I'll Put This Bitch To A Mirror He's In The Crosshairs
Bang.. Down On The Ground.. Torn Like Strong Tears
Curiousity... I Kill This 'Catt' Like ...... Lost Dares

:: Cricket :: :: Cricket ::
W..T..F..?
Umm.. Spit Ya Verse

OK.. you pulled a newbie move..
Postin ya verse, before your opponet checked in
::SMH::

i'll post tonight when i come in................................................ ....................

my bad, i didnt know you wanted to post last night..


14 should do it..


this kid's wack.. played punches, no flow its sad to see
its like his loss scored a 84.. ya just know it had to B (%)
no grip when ya grab at me im too quick for slow shit
one punch'l crunch his face & leave this bitch wit no lip
so you see its a fact.. i wont leave this whore alive
so hes jap? then im bout to bomb this bitch like its 1945
locked in scope.. my aim gets the best of this kool guy
look under his name..
..his chest is already dressed like a bulls eye
i aint homophobic, he's gay.. but i'll admit this guy is sick..
only when he's flirtin with other men, biting.. and riding dick
the kids a shrimp.. he knew how big i'd come in this bout
hes never tried diets.. he loses weight by running his mouth
i mean for real.. your not all that bad, but well.. yes you are
cuz even short of the camera coverage.. i press you hard

Pretty Even Battle. .

Till Eye Die. . You Had Some Decent Punches, But None Really Hit Like They Should've. . Flow Was Good Though. . Chopsticks Line Was Nice, But It Seemed Like Everyone Would Use It. . Opener Was Bad. . Closer Was Ok, Could've Came Alot Stronger. . Overall Though, You Lacked The Punches To Win This Battle. .

Center Sight. . . Your Punches Definately Hit Harder Than Till's Did. . You Seemed To Have A Better Grasp Of The Battle Concept And It Showed With Your Verse. . Every Line A Punch Which Results In More On-Point Punches. . I'm Not aying Yours Was Perfect Though. . The Homophobic Line Was Played. . Overall. . Your Verse Just Hit Harder Than Eye's. .

Till Eye Die's Best Line :

Even If Ya Had Chopsticks You Couldnt Serve This Asian

Center Sight's Best Line :

locked in scope.. my aim gets the best of this kool guy
look under his name..
..his chest is already dressed like a bulls eye

That Punch Alone From Center Took This Battle. . So Vote = Center For Better Punches. . PUnches Are The Key To Battles. . Pz.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show....php?p=1158116
^^^ hit that up with an honest vote.

up, will return an honest vote if u leave a link.............................................. ...........

the kids a shrimp.. he knew how big i'd come in this bout
hes never tried diets.. he loses weight by running his mouth" good meta by center

To Scare Them Changed His Age To 19
Like Tampa Bay I 'Struck' down Ya Hope Like Lightning" good rhyme by jap. but aint really a punch

if it was a free style i'd give it to the jap cus he had a better flow but punches win battles and center had the jap on that, so
vote- center sight

uppppppppppppppp.................................. ..................................................

Till' I die:

Here It Comes Er'ybody Center Sight's In For A Fight
He Challenged Me Wonder If He's Feeling Alright
Alright opener, feels a little played though
Ima Smoke His Ass Faster The Cheech And Chong
Wait A Second.. Center You Cant Drag Along
Cheech & Chong... That line is definitly played and the
second line, is weak
Even If Ya Had Chopsticks You Couldnt Serve This Asian
1..2..3.. *Snap Snap* Knock Out You Lookin Dazed Man
Liked the chopsticks line but the second line isn't much of a punch
Jeez..... Why Do You Bother Even Trying To Step Up
Like Coming Out Of The Closet This Fag's Tryna Fess Up
Decent line, not very strong though
Fuck It Jeez Why Did I Accept This So-Called Battle
I Coulda Bit Off Dr. Suess ' Doodles And Daddles'
I get it but, punch needs to be directed more at Center Sight
doesn't hit very hard
He Got Merked By 13 Year Olds..
..................To Scare Them Changed His Age To 19
Like Tampa Bay I 'Struck' down Ya Hope Like Lightning
first two lines are weak attempt at a personal, third line
is creative though.
Dont Front Man Burn 'Mesh' Like Jerzee His Hometown
Finding Sluts? Look Center Sight Ya Hoes Found
weak, second line is played
I'll Put This Bitch To A Mirror He's In The Crosshairs
Bang.. Down On The Ground.. Torn Like Strong Tears
Curiousity... I Kill This 'Catt' Like ...... Lost Dares
okay closer, the last line though 'curiosity'... I kill this 'Catt"
is way too played

Center Sight:

this kid's wack.. played punches, no flow its sad to see
its like his loss scored a 84.. ya just know it had to B (%)
Alright opener, second line is good, and creative
no grip when ya grab at me im too quick for slow shit
one punch'l crunch his face & leave this bitch wit no lip
Decent punch, again second line is nice
so you see its a fact.. i wont leave this whore alive
so hes jap? then im bout to bomb this bitch like its 1945
A little racist... but okay since its in his avatar, decent line
feels a little played though
locked in scope.. my aim gets the best of this kool guy
look under his name..
..his chest is already dressed like a bulls eye
Nice personal, flipped his name
i aint homophobic, he's gay.. but i'll admit this guy is sick..
only when he's flirtin with other men, biting.. and riding dick
weak, line is played
the kids a shrimp.. he knew how big i'd come in this bout
hes never tried diets.. he loses weight by running his mouth
I liked it, might be played, but still pretty good.
i mean for real.. your not all that bad, but well.. yes you are
cuz even short of the camera coverage.. i press you hard
Not a badcloser, doesn't hit that hard, but nice creativity

Overall I would have to say that this was a pretty close battle. I think Centersight though , did a better job w/ his punches and personals. They were more creative and seemed to hit harder. He also flowed better than Eye's which seemed forced in a few spots. I cant officially vote but my vote
goes to: Center Sight, due to the fact his punches and personals were
better and were also more creative.

Vote on these fuckin' battles:

apathy vs. Gravity
apathy vs. jamie

up348127562348975687923465987234658976234985762347 89562348975632497856238974659782346589723465879346 57893465

Fuck You Nonvoting Assholes Up Again............................................. ......................

j'/;l;'hk;lhuiouyiopu9l;uoi;lhijo;lpbiouplguioppliop

ayo, this was pretty much an even battle like someone up there said, the structure and flows were the same, creativity bout the same, i enjoyed both of them, but on punches i think center sight hit harder especially on the opener and finisher, he just hit harder in most lines

vote - center sight

ayo, vote on my battle wit rappin master plz, safe

Ok this is how i see this.

Center sight you flow was tight and you ripped a lot of the jap kids lyrics up.
So if it was based on skill and flow alone u would win it.

But..............................................

I aint gonna diss the Jap kid, his shit was also tight and his was a freestyle that took, what 30 mins or sum shit. Where as Centre sight took like 8 hrs, a battle isn't jus about tight flows and shit, cos till eye die was tight, but he took less time and went first, giving you an unfair advantage.

So....................... My vote goes to ................. Till eye die :thefinger

up it

you voted for him cuz u think he posted in 30 minutes.. lmao what a fuckin newb.. i did my verse in 10 minutes if you learned how to read you would see that i WENT TO SLEEP and posted the next day.. fucker

good match-up.....Tilleyedie, you had some pretty good rhymes, but the punches were a little weak, i like the content but come a little harder....ok closer
Center-sight....i liked your opener....
"so you see its a fact.. i wont leave this whore alive
so hes jap? then im bout to bomb this bitch like its 1945"
^^^ i like this line..creative...
it's true that your punches came harder but both were nice to read


vote-center sight....sorry i can't vote officially....

up it

TillEyeDie-good flow/structure pretty basic...
ok punches the serve this asian wus really good,
that pnch still couldnt win this tho...

Center-I think you took punches and personals
along with metafors... your opener wus hott
and i liked the closer also... and the line about
target on the chest Hott... i say you took it...

MyV/Center Sight...return favor wit honest votes on both battles in my sig \v/S assassin and Diverse

haha my last up, this battle is like a year old, it never finished, so if u dont get the bulls eye line its cuz his avy has changed since then it was a japanese flag

aight, well this battle was pretty even....

til i die-well your verse wasnt bad.........you had good punches and personals. you also had some good flow, structure and rhymes.

center sight-your verse was decent as well....you had good structure, some alright punches and personals, but ithink you lacked in the vocab department.

so, no hate...but i vote for...

v/till i die for better vocab throughout the rhyme, otherwise the rest was even. good battle.

check this out
V

http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthre...0&page=2&pp=15