.ill. vs havok

10 linez
5 votez win
3-0 is a tko
anyone wit 30 post and more can vote
u spit first

Yo spit already

dawg, i have another battle (LyriCali Girfted) who accepted before you. Lemme spit in his, and i hit you up here..k? You can choose to cancel, wait, or even spit first..dont matter to me..but give me a bit if you still wanna battle.

iight i'll wait "ill" till ur done wit ya other battle

im back...gimme 30-40min?

Sorry bout the wait, thanks for the patience..

-\Opener/-
No Matter How Hard This Fuck Tries, the Battle Voters Pick Sides - You Think You Trick My Quick Eyes?/
You A Sick Guy Cause All Your Voters Un-Zip-Flys And "Rip-Thighs" - You Win By Dick Rides!/

-\Sick Spittin fo' This Kitten/-
Flows 'Christen-More-Mentals' but I'll Piss-On-Ya-Rhymes Cuz 'URINE'(your in) Heat/
Son My Gun Shells 'Visit-More-Temples' Than A Fuckin Buddhist Priest/

I Topple Havok With My Wordplay and the Debacle Spreads As My Verbs Spray/
This Flawless Verse 'Got You Shakin' Worse Than 'Bobble Heads In An Earthquake'/

After This Knife Im Intersecting, I'll Spread You Around Like Dinner Dressing/
Or Maybe I'll Bury Havok Alive, Making Things More Inter-Resting*/

-\Lets Leave Him Confused.../-
My Pinnacle of Lyrical Miracles Are Generally Fearable/
And Battlin a Clinical an Synical Pickle Is Always Amuseable/

* = buried alive, resting underground

blah, not my best..spit dawg..

Ur weak as fuck, yo u should know it before u blow it/
The only reason I'm "scared" of u is becuz I'm "homophobic"/
Yo kid u iz ill, "ill" wit lyrical cancer/
wen sum1 callz u out u wont answer/
uz a faggot, I bring havoke, u'll get y ass kicked/
Im a pit bull I'll kick ya ass while I go rammpent/
Now listen, u bitch u got no dick Mr. Want-a-dick-son/
Now listen, Im winnin, u wishin ur in my position, while my rhymez is killin/
U aint gonna show me how to be in thiz rap game, ur rhymez are lame/
I know u been in da “rape” game fuckin many men and now ur in jail for u iz to blame/
Ima fuck u up and leave u in a ditch, my rhymez is like a fast ball pitch/
Uz da illest lil bitch/
u cant get ladies/
so da only time u touch legz and thighz waz at KFC/
Don’t talk about gunz u cant shoot, so u post up/
Wen u against me u hav no luck/
I'll cap ya ass wit my spit like my mouth's a beretta/
Instead a losin the hard way, I suggest ya betta surrenda/
So u could envy-jay-fam,but when they desy-spray-damm/
and u suck u couldn't set da "NET" on "FIRE" playin "NBA JAM"/
Come 2 ya hood strap down da knee's,let da black pound just squeeze/
u a "HAPPY" faggot datz scared of "BEEF" like da "MADD-COW-DISEASE"/
U think ur “ILL” but I’m like a doctor I’ll give u “SHOTZ” for comin to me//
Wen sayz who beat u say itz goin to be me//

11...12......15...16..

dude, how many lines the rules say? the ones that you enforced?


I should d/q your ass but ima let it slide dogg, no use in fighting over stpid shit..


UPPIN!

uppin

iight we ready to get votez

my vote goes to ill purely cos his rhyme had more flow and some personals. havoc, u need to practise but keep it up both of you.

vote ill

plz return da fava http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112522

yo dont kno how to vote it structure punchlinez, multiez, creativity, and respect bitch
learn how to vote and if ya wanna battle, battle me...or uz scuured

yup itz tru

both ryhmes were pretty good, ima go withg ill only becuz i liked is ending, pretty kool, havok had sum pretty good syt to, overall my vote goes to.......

vote: ill

mad skillz vote dont count hez only 5 postz

yo ill uz lil bitch u can tell dat mad skillz is u cuz hez only haz 5 postz

iight itz like dis
structure: tie
Punchlinez havok
personalz: Havok
Respect Haok
Vote: Havok

Itz 1-1 Now Cuz Mad Skillz Isnt Past 30 Post U Should Be Dq Cuz U Probly Iz Mad Skillz Anewayz Itz 1-1

i vote ill.both were good but his puches hit harder.....both were good at most aspects but ill jst took it.....keep it up both of u
v/ill
PLZ RETURN DA FAVA :http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110860

2-1

good battle havok took it it breaks down like this:
Punchs havok
personal: Havok
originality tie
flow havok
opener havok

good battle both of yall need to elevate tho my vote goes to havok

plz hit this battle up dont sleep on this shit

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112213

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token

iight iz 2-2 and at da poll itz 1-0 winnin thnx b.b

yo itz 5 winz up can onlon da poll 100 and up can only vote becuz to it to be official u hav to vote by replyin and by votin on da poll

so itz actually 1-0 and no newb can vote cuz thiz iz an officall match u hav to be 100 and up

itz 2-2 but officially itz 1-0 anditz by officially so itz 1-0

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opener havok ill's was phat 2 i was just fiilin havoks more
punches ill havoks were gay none really hit
personals didnt see any
structure ill havoks lines were all fucked up they need to be more equal
closer both weren't very good but havoks was really gay so i guess ill
both need to work on vocab and personals
havok need to work on evening ur lines out

havok u need to stop all the freepostin or u'll get dq'd ive seen it happen

iight thnx for tellin me yte grl and itz 1-1 so far uppin

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come on pplz vote

nice battle, lets see...

ill = didnt feel the flow at all, and structure was off, punches i thought didnt really hit very hard but some did ok. vocab was alright.

hav = flow a lil cleaner then ills and structure was worse, but i thought you had some nice clever punches in that spit. vocab was also ok.

ok tight battle heres the break down.

flow = hav
structure=ill
punches=hav
personals=none
vocab=tie

vote=havok , but only just

iight 2-1 so far up 4 more votez pplz

I liked this battle a lot.
I give the opener and punches to havok, otherwise i think he needs to rhyme more and have better structure next time.
I loved .ill's originality though and I felt his rap flowed better. Thus, .ill receives my vote because I liked his rap. v=.iLL

Yo sumtinz wrong wit da pollz cuz if u click da 1 next to me it sayz blackguy and timless votes so itz 2-2. I want a mod to check diz out cuz itz bullshit datz it 2-1