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-Technician- dissed Formula Formula diss part 1
ILLunatic diss forumula
Formula diss part 2
Checkin In..........
I'll drop tomorrow afternoon
Check. . Verse Up When I Get Home From School. Pz.
Aiight. . .
Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .
I will be droppin soon...
I gotta do some work for the 1-2 tourney
::...........:: I AM
..::Yawn::.. GOING EASY ON HIM
::...........:: Kilt him bad enough in open mic
Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack
Punches....ILL (more complex hit harder)
flow....ILL (some of form shit didnt rhyme just hard 2 follow)
multies...agh? tie
wordplay...ILL
structure...Tie
vocab..neither was way out there TIE
overal..ILL took this wit an OVERALL better spit..
good spit from both..just ILL came harder
good luck in the future..
peace
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Token
Hmmmmm.......
......Votes.....
!.....UPPPIN......!
hmm..
formula's verse had alot of punches..but..some of them got gay..like Illunatic holdin some guy's nuts..he said it like 3 times and it's lost it effect..but those were the highlights of his verse..all solid lines..not much filler at all..but..all of his wasnt great punches..like the venom line..that was "ewww"..and numerous other lines..so..I'll just say..Formula wasnt consistent..thats the word..I will give it a 7/10
Illunatic's verse was okay also..he had alot of personals ..and that what was killin him..but..he also had some weak ass lines..like the second one..it was wack..but..over..this was a well rounded verse..I will give it A..UMMM...ERRRR...let me see..let me re-read..*reads*..okay..I will also give him a 7/10..
and since I cvant vote for both in an event of a tie..Im goin' with..err..Illunatic..yeah..Ima go with him..
v/Ill
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...t=dirtyendzone
hit that up^^
^ ^ Gay Lines ? They Were Personals. . 2-0 Ill, Uppin'
Hmm....
Maybe i shoulda actually tried
Lol......i was to tired to actually go hard
But yea... i guess i didn't need too
Damn.... Battle dead
....UPPIN THIS Shit....
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aight this was a good battle
punches-ill
closure-ill
personals-ill
flow-both
metaphors-ill
multies-both
vote- ill
return the favor:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111056
Fucking CHaracter Limit. . Up Up Up. . 50 Characters.
I repeatQuote:
Originally Posted by ILLunatic
Quote:
Originally Posted by ILLunatic
i seriously do not understand what verse yall read from ILLunatic, but it must not have been the one i read. there was ONE punch in there that was DECENT,
"Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line"
and even that's not that great. i wasn't really impressed with that verse, and don't come with that, 'yeah i was tired, couldnt drop my hardest shit,' because nobody gives a fuck, that's your fault, not ours.
Formula came WAY more consistant with the punches, and this punch alone beat "ILL"
"Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. ."
Neither one of you had a great flow throughout, so that isn't even a factor in my vote.
Honestly, people on Rapbattles.com are stupid as fuck.
Vote - Formula.
Thanks ^^ Upping. . .Upping. . Votes. . Drop Links. . kthnx.
God Damn. . Hit This. . Drop Links. . This'll Be The Fourth Battle That Hasn't Gotten Adequate Votes. . I'm Gonna Hit Up Battles, But Some Of You Heads Who Are Around 24/7, Vote On This, I Can't Be On All The Time. . Pz.
::Tisk:: ::Tisk:: ::Tisk:: ::Tisk::
This damn battle still open.... geez
Form
Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
decent opening... if u had worded it better it woulda hit harder
Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
good punch..very creative the way u used the concept and i was feelin it alot
You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
no rhyme...1st line was a shit personal and 2nd line had no punch
I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
so-so punch...not that great
Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
not feelin the rhyme again.. and the not a good punch either
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
again..not a good punch...played concept and wasnt good
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .
stretched last line...it was just an ok ending
Ill
Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
not really a hard punch...just an ok opening
Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
decent personal in the first line and 2nd line was good
Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
not bad wordplay here...punch wasnt bad either
Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
good punch...
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
me 2 Ill, me 2, u wanna be my friend Form? :)
"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
another decent personal and hitting punch
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack
good closer to finish it off
overall - ILL took this battle..he was more consistent with hard punches... Form u had that one dope punch wit father and son, and that was basically it..ill kept decent and good punches through out...looks like another easy no effort win for ill
V/ Ill
3-0......
Ugh Oh....
VOTE PEOPLE
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LMFAO at Celestials vote
Quote:
Piece of Celestials vote
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
me 2 Ill, me 2, u wanna be my friend Form?
punches -simply go to iLLuna cuz had mad potencial in them
they were easily directed more efficiantly than formula`s punches were
personals -also go to iLL cuz he was bringing up his past merks and it was clever
For .. ..MC had some nice persons butt came sort of choppy if you dont mind me saying
werdplay -id say that both werdplay in this was pretty much tie
accept for the fact that iLL`s was a lil better approached
multis stricly goes to iLL,for .. ..MC had lacked multis
creativity has to go in favor of iLL cuz his multis speak for themselves,witty
other goes to iLL .. ..for .. ..MC had everything else at hand but didnt hold on hard enough,as for the rest of the catagories iLL domanated
vote iLLunatic
hit my battles in my sig in return
Hmmm.. since Token DQ'd a vote
Its 3-0 again.......................
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^Thats all i see here^
uppin for the homie....................................
Oops, that must be a typo ..Quote:
Originally Posted by ILLunatic
All I see here is Dickriding.
Word ^ Lots Of Sleeping. . Half Of RB Owns Sleeping Bags. . Gah Damn.
Ok, This Fuck Tryna Play Hero For Credz. . .
No Balls, So He Has To Hold His Boy's Instead. . .
*NOT REAL IMPRESSED WITH NE THING HERE*
Before This Shit Even Started, Shoulda Known You Was Done
I Dissed, Then You Dissed, Hey. . Like Father, Like Son. . .
* AN OK ATTEMPT AT SOMETHIN COMPLEXT..NOT BAD
You Were Never Ill, So You Put It In Ya Name To Feel Special
Can't Read, You're Not Cred, Even Wacker, Lemme Help You
*AGH...STARTED OK THEN...AGH..I D K WAT HAPPENED*
I'll Attack You Dude, Just Like The Crew, I'ma Get Um. .
Ya Punches Are Pussy N Passed Over Like A Snake W/ No Venom
*NOT A BAD PUNCH LINES..NEED 2 ELEVATE MORE
Serious, I Have A Tougher Time Lightin' Ciggs In The Wind. .
Then Battlin A Tick Who Goes, Nuts. . Literally. . For His Friend. .
*GETTIN BETTER...NICE PUNCH FLOW..
You Think Big Words'll Win You Brownie Points ? . . . Please. . .
Get Ya Boy Credz N Ya Can Both Down My Joint, Then Hop Off My Nuts N Ya Knees
*NICE PUNCH*
You Insist On Gettin' Pissed, Stickin' Ya Nose Where It Don't Belong. .
Well After This Verse, This Lunatic Who Think He Dope. . .
. . . . Will Be Clowned On RB More Than A Mainstream Song. . .
*NOT A BAD LITTLE PUNCH...OVERALL OK*
OVERALL: 6/10 (NEED TO ELEVATE..PLAIN AND SIMPLE*)
Time to break down this formula, cuz he's chemically twisted
???FormulaMC??? its more like that bitch has never existed
*PUNCH AND FLOW WHERE OK..NOTHIN SPEC* (FROM U)
Look, you made the line limit, and you couldn't even follow
Thinkin you throwin packed punches? them bitches is hollow
*IVE SEEN BETTER FROM U..NOT THAT IMPRESSED*
Peep ya crew, ya'll suck and ready for an 'instant' clowning
.:K:., LM, Phsyik, Freeman..justa roster got ya'll instant downing
*PUNCH WAS LIL OFF..BUT THE CREW PERSONAL WAS TAKEN*
Its an embarassment, My name next to yours on the headline?
Kids lonely, his only conversations of life have been on a dead-line
*NICE PUNCH*
Served him in Open mic, and i kno he's seen it, just scared to reply
*Sigh* oh my, CredZ dislikes him, i feel sad for this wack lonely guy
*AGH..OK NUTTA SPECIAL
"Can't I eat just one more mc?" this hoecake must love to eat splean
Lemme just improvise quickly,He likes to eat textcee's disease clean?
*OK PUNCH..DECIENT FLOW...*
Ya nersurry rhymes are to childish to win you this battle, so step back
Ya rep's wack, battlin? why attempt that, when ya flows are that wack
*NICE FLOW...OK PUNCH*
OVERALL: 8/10
PUNCHES...ILL
FLOW..ILL
STRUCTURE...tie
VOCAB..TIE
WORDPLAY..ILL
OVERALL..ILL
ILL JUST HAD THE BETTER VERSE
GOOD JOB 2 BOTH MC'S..
AND GOOD LUCK
*HOPE THATS LONG ENOUGH 4 ALL YALL*
ILLUNATIC
PUNCHES:8/10
FLOW:7/10
PERSONALS:6/10
STRUCTURE:7/10
TOTAL SCORE FOR ILL IS 28/40
ILL CAME PRETTY HARD U DID PRETTY GOOD IN EVERY CATEGORY WHAT CAN I SAY.......
FORMULA
PUNCHES:5/10
FLOW:6/10
PERSOANALS:5/10
STRUCTURE:6/10
UR TOTAL SCORE IS 22/40
NOT BAD FORMULA THE ONLY THING THAT REALLY HURT YA WAS UR VOCAB WAS KIND BASIC BUT EVERY THING ELSE WAS PRETTY GOOD
BUT THE TOTALS SAY IT ALL ILL GOT THIS
VOTE :ILLUNATIC
NO BEEF BUT CAN YALL VOTE ON THIS THANX
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112614
Lmao At This Kid ^ Vocab Doesn't Matter. . wtf Kid. . It's About Punches. . Vocab Didn't Hurt. . You Have No Clue What You're Talking About. . Anyway, Big Surprise, 4-0 ILLunatic. . Can Someone Please Finish This Shit ?