Yo Spit After Checkin In Ill Spit First Ight
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Yo Spit After Checkin In Ill Spit First Ight
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No Hate,crew,d/r Votes
No Feedin Off My Verse
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ima Krack you over the head, have ur brains hit the floor
ur rhymes are rotten apples, un~edible and nothing at the core
T equals terrible, even when wut u writ is an entire script
this baby throws fits, even when his career is made of ~Bits~
battling me is a no~no, im surprised you werent a no~show
u've hung out with lil~jon 2 much, cuz u could be anymore low
s to the dizzle, listening to this guy sing to the choir
im the king of the rap boards, so bend down to ur sire
krakka t, why u taking shots at me, got my finga on the trigga
pop u in the head, my win will linger, so fuck u nigga
dont like to wait
yo im gonna treat this fool sdizzle like my mic is a pistol/
my punches destroy him like gunshots,im a take flight on ya like a missle//
this a war the battle wont end by just one whisle/
it'll be over when i merk ya and the mods make it official//
u gonna battle me with a name like sdizzle,a fake snoop dogg mann...ima merk this hizzle/<<(herb lol)ur verse will have no comeback it'll be just like rain it will just drizzle//
comeon sdizzle?what were you thinkin ur gonna get sunned/
this will soon tell ya that u a herb and im number one//
keepin ya stunned now i know the reason why ur record states ur 0 and 1/
this battle over your gonna be 0 and 2 now and this battles done krakka t won//
blah ur turn
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upiinn number 3 comeon people vote on this shit yall startin to sleep
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Sdizzle or w/e, haha had some good punches, Krakka or w/e had some good stuff but didn't flow to well, maybe wud sound betta if he worded it ya know? Anyways, my vote : Siddzle? The fake snoop dizzle
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-ILLunatic
haha ok people iguess dont know a good verse these days but ok hahaha
Vote sdizzle.he had better punches and vocab and his structure was good..Krakka T your structure was off and ur flow wasn't good at at all.. you need to elevatel..u nearly got merked in this....
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-ILLunatic
hell naw these fuckin newbs are bustin with some shitty ass votes wtf
read his verse then read mine before you make a shitty ass vote like that the both of you
newb im a flyweight like you dumbass..get ur facts straight, and i did read both verses stop being a lil bitch
sdizzle, nice verse, you through some decent punches
in their, good structure, everything was clean, easy to read,
next time put some personals and multis in their you know.
krakka, your verse was wack dawg, half that shit didnt even
rhyme, you just tried to change a letter on a word to make it rhyme,
(EX: like snoop says, "six fo", although its "six four") i think
that shows no skill at all, and your punches were weak as fuck dawg,
and i dont even wanna talk bout your structure, its embarrasing,
and just like dizzle not one personal, you need to elevate bad.
my vote:sdizzle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111274
hit this up ^ ^ ^
ill merk u punk when i have time later ima merk u just dont come like that tryout u gave for the crew sickness hahahais that why ur mad cus ur shit was terribale and we said u couldnt come in the crew
im repoting u for dick riding
well anyways yea upppin number four
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Full Breakdown
Sdizzles Verse
ima Krack you over the head, have ur brains hit the floor
ur rhymes are rotten apples, un~edible and nothing at the core
( Good opener , nice flow , like the 2nd verse 8/10 )
T equals terrible, even when wut u writ is an entire script
this baby throws fits, even when his career is made of ~Bits~
( decent , little bit of a dropoff from opener , but not bad 6.5/10 )
battling me is a no~no, im surprised you werent a no~show
u've hung out with lil~jon 2 much, cuz u could be anymore low
(LOL , funnyshit dude , basic rythmes , but effective 7/10 )
s to the dizzle, listening to this guy sing to the choir
im the king of the rap boards, so bend down to ur sire
( Like it , nothing great , but the flows there and easy to read 7/10)
krakka t, why u taking shots at me, got my finga on the trigga
pop u in the head, my win will linger, so fuck u nigga
( you came good on the closer , trigga and nigga is a little overplayed but WTF 6.5/10 )
Total Score -35/50 70%
KRAKKA T'S Verse
yo im gonna treat this fool sdizzle like my mic is a pistol/
my punches destroy him like gunshots,im a take flight on ya like a missle//
( you cut out a few words , or reword this and it'll flow better IMO 6/10 )
this a war the battle wont end by just one whisle/
it'll be over when i merk ya and the mods make it official//
( Prolly your best line of battle due to good structure and flow , but thats about it ) 7.5/10
u gonna battle me with a name like sdizzle,a fake snoop dogg mann...ima merk this hizzle/<<(herb lol)ur verse will have no comeback it'll be just like rain it will just drizzle//
( same thing applys here , obviously you just spit and typed , good idea , bad presentation ) 6/10
comeon sdizzle?what were you thinkin ur gonna get sunned/
this will soon tell ya that u a herb and im number one//
( getting personal , but once again ., lacking heavy fire power ) 6.5/10
keepin ya stunned now i know the reason why ur record states ur 0 and 1/
this battle over your gonna be 0 and 2 now and this battles done krakka t won//
( Closer is kind of weak , you just used the same ending word(one) in your last bar , its repetive, and dull ) 6/10
Total Score 32/50 64 %
Yep Sdizzles takes it ..... but close .... I dont thin anything really stood out in either verse , obviously we have two novices working on their craft , And both need some work to elevate more ....
Suggestions for Krakka , try and structure your verse better , get rid of uneccesary words , flow alone is what won it for SD , no hate bro , I call it as I see it ......
Peace out , Hit my battle up with Black guy if you can
CrazyE
no doubt, but how many votes do i need..... no 3-0 ko?
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