ok man,
12 lines max,
both spit within 30 mins,
no dr,hat or crew votes,
no feeding,
no freeposting.
....good luck.......pz
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ok man,
12 lines max,
both spit within 30 mins,
no dr,hat or crew votes,
no feeding,
no freeposting.
....good luck.......pz
..........checking in man good luck 1's again....................pz
Checkin in good luck to you too...................
yo who the fuck are you?,fuck it,
yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you
........stick your keyboard in the electric.........
looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing,
......well that definetly aint telekinetic.........
little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you,
fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you,
the only reason you're calling out a vet.............
.............is cause your a pet in need.........
cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace,
but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory,
pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me,
im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me.
im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked,
......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif).....
but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk,
i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work.
.....................pz
Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked*
This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook
Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel
Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul
You stay fowl......
Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek
Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck
A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check?"
K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises
Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices
Ya lines bite.....
Your design mite-a had a shot in the dark but lost ya rhymes light
Wits collide an minds ignite but ya fight is tiny like ya lines might
* "Hook" is under his name
^uppin(1)......................................... .not bad man nice battle.....................pz
yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you
........stick your keyboard in the electric.........
looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing,
......well that definetly aint telekinetic.........
dope personal
little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you,
fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you,
weak
the only reason you're calling out a vet.............
.............is cause your a pet in need.........
cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace,
ok..nothin really hard
but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory,
pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me,
why would a PM mean sumthin to you. And jeez man you said poo
im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me.
im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked,
......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif).....
kinda played, but alright
but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk,
i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work.
ehhh kinda whack
Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked*
This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook
ok, but played
Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel
Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul
kinda played but ok punch
You stay fowl......
Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek
creative...but you refrenced startreck ina battle man
Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck
A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check?"
weak
K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises
Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices
dope
Ya lines bite.....
Your design mite-a had a shot in the dark but lost ya rhymes light
Wits collide an minds ignite but ya fight is tiny like ya lines might
ehh, useless multis cause they dun make any kind of good punch or personal
Yhis was a real close battle hard to call...K takes the personals catergorie..his opener was sick...Metas is a tie...Tele takes punches.....K takes flow and structure...and the Win. Tele your bars were a lil too stretched. Try and clean some shit out. Peace
Need honest votes here from both of ya please! I took the time for yall. Remember to poll! Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110074
Uppin for votes....
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Just so you know this lines supposed to be like it is "Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek" hince the stretched bars remark
Vote- Telekinetic
punches- Tele(much harder and funnier....more also)
flo- Tele(basic...normal...K's tryna implement the vet structure n killed it)
multi's- Tie
Meti4's- Tele(not as many but a better quality)
Personal's- Tele(The hooked line was nice)
K tried I think but failed to bring a vet quality verse...it may have looked like one...
But the content matter's u kno...
Telekinetic was alot funnier an wittier....
He gets my vote//
-1
Oh an your opener telekinetic means clairvoyant or psychic not phissically moveing
well i looked it up and it meens phisically moving with your head...so....................................let pll vote man.................pz
yo this battle was really close.. hot shit by both.. k came with straight hotness.. however telekenetik outedged him with better wordplay.. telkenetik was more witty in his verse.. lines like this sealed the deal
"Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek"
"K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises
Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices"
k your shit was pretty hot.. but some of your punchlines didnt hit that hard
vote :telekenetik
Tele takes this one..
K your verse had played shit (herb/spliff wordplay, mean shit-to-me)
didnt hit hard....and just didnt come straight....it was so fucking iffy the whole time and ntohing hit direct and really punched well. seems you used the ... structure in innapropriate places as well.
Tele u came straight....i liked the cling on punch... u punched harder and used original disses and creative rhymes....also used the correct structure.
vote Tele
both of you please hit up my tag battle. its real good, just gettin mad slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111240
yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you
........stick your keyboard in the electric.........
looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing,
......well that definetly aint telekinetic.........
nice play on his name
little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you,
fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you,
filler, not the worst punch ever, but pretty bad
the only reason you're calling out a vet.............
.............is cause your a pet in need.........
cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace,
wordplay let you down here
but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory,
pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me,
pretty wack, nice idea though
im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me.
im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked,
......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif).....
played
but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk,
i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work.
not the best of closers
Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked*
This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook
haha, nice
Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel
Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul
i heard something like this before, wordplay let you down
You stay fowl......
Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek
too stretched, flow was off, wack punch
Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck
A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check?
not your best, not your worst
K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises
Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices
nice punch, hit pretty hard
Ya lines bite.....
Your design mite-a had a shot in the dark but lost ya rhymes light
Wits collide an minds ignite but ya fight is tiny like ya lines might
wat the fuck, you lost me
punche tie both had some good, bad an aiight ones
personals tele nice play on the hooked
strucutre k nice structure
flow k
metas tie
my vote tele
his personal hit hard, an he got a few good shots,
.:K:. i aint seen you come this weak for quite a few battles now!!
both y'all try an hit, one or two of the battles in my sig up, thanks peace
K
yo the only time you got lyrics to shock..is if you
........stick your keyboard in the electric.........
looked up the definition of your name phissically moveing,
......well that definetly aint telekinetic.........
nice personal 3/5
little bitch you takeing the piss man?..i aint never even heard of-you,
fuck splitting this newb in half..i'd rather take a third of-you,
whack 1/5
the only reason you're calling out a vet.............
.............is cause your a pet in need.........
cause to be honest man....ive seen better looking deseace,
poor..no wordplay 1/5[/b[
but anyway congratulations on being my 45th vic-tory,
pm'ing me a picture of poo...is the only way you'll ever meen shit-to-me,
good lyrics but u aint set it up good 2/5
im solid as a rock with my text..so just try and move-me.
im embarissed of merking this prick..cause ive smoked,
......better herbs in a doo-bee(splif).....
really played...bad flow 1/5
but like i said in the line above..really its a easy merk,
i wished you luck twice before this^..and it still didn't work.
[ ok..kinda whack 2/5
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Tel
Your lyrics aren't raw they're overrated translated to overcooked*
This guy was fishin for the win............ but never baited the hook
good opener 5/5
Now ya booked as a spectacle now one line you throw in the towel
Try to front but ya wackness is more flagrant than a technical foul
nice 3/5
You stay fowl......
Even with bars stretched ya prospect of winning seems farfetched Bring ya dick riders, I know ya got more "cling ons" than star trek
really strenched flow was off 1/5
Your a pain in the neck, small in my world your just a plain speck
A train wreck for structure an outta talent "you need a rain check?
bad flow 1/5
K's UK style is hopeless a mess broke like electronic glass devises
Guy's skills on a downward spiral an flaws risin like US gas prices
nice good punch 3/5
k= 10/30
tele=13/30
Vote:TELE
vote will u both please drop honest votes on my battles in my sig