10-16 lines? im only going 10,
usual rules
say we spit in an hour or less??
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10-16 lines? im only going 10,
usual rules
say we spit in an hour or less??
:nono: You aint gonna get very far in this battle at all, No one understands what ya saying just like Sean Paul.
Ima capitally punish you hitting you with big letters, Im taking this serious while your playing def jam vendetta.
Ima pick you up and drop you like charges, Why you spitting so slow is your style lathargic.
Your wack as fuck but you actin all pro, even if I was Potato Head this is no skin of my nose.
You couldnt give me beef presenting cows by the heard, your lyrically retarded with ya broken words.
10 lines man!!!!
not being funny but dont you have to spit b4 people can vote?
i probably owe you a thanks, for your crew acceptin me*,
but you've never elevated....lightweight before september 03'
26, i gotta play on the fact........ that i find you old,
this guy held down contagious....**
............shit, that crew couldn't even pass on a cold,
before marvel, you was XL4real, almost 100 losses or near*,
you get beat around the calander, 365 losses a year,
you's reppin the UK.... you sure you never imigratred??
because wackness so rare.. in uk its not usually imitated,
man....... you dopest line of this battle, in you sig,
you quite out of place here... like a blind mans wig!
*his alias is XL4real, has 80-100 losses?
**his old crew was called contagious
Oh yer who you be then? and how do you know if thats true?
im double-0 seven
an your the only person that sways like a bitch!!!
after the amount of battle you've had, i thought you would of elevated, plus your 26 an should be able to come up with better things than that peice of shit rap you just dropped!!!
no more frreposting!!
no more swaying!!
P.S i know your xl4real, because in your battle with LM, you dropped your verse as marvel, then posted with xl4real, saying your wordplay was well better (plus IP's were same at top roght hand corner of screen)
:) consider yourself sonned and merked!!
ok ok I was only joking............................................ .................................................. .............................
[I]cant believe I got brought into this...LOL
Anyway...
Marvel~Arm - I didnt like your structure....looked too much like paragraphs. Some punches were Ok but were'nt very hard hittin. Your best one was the def jam vendetta one and that was very average. Flow and vocab were your best areas.
Menolin - You came more creative and with better punches and personals. Plus I prefered your structure. Flow was tied. Overall you got this
v/ Menolin
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vote menolin..............the marvel arm you fucking ducked,
are battle man pussy..lol........neway men takes this one easy,
t-m-a your structure was none exsistent and there,
were no hard punches man alround wak i seen you come better dawg,
007 nice spit clear punches flow was abit of man,
but a nice verse,
vote-007
plz hit this now man http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111886 thx.......pz
2cnd up
3rd up, drop honest votes, an links an i will drop a vote on ur battle!!
damn this my 4th uppin.....
drop an hinest vote an a link!!
iight...
Marvel
You aint gonna get very far in this battle at all, No one understands what ya saying just like Sean Paul.
Hmm... Weak opener... Sort of a punch... Blah... 5/10
Ima capitally punish you hitting you with big letters, Im taking this serious while your playing def jam vendetta.
What the fuck was that... Maybe the worst bar ive ever read... harsh... but it really wasnt very good... You should be able to think of better shit than this... 1/10
Ima pick you up and drop you like charges, Why you spitting so slow is your style lathargic.
Forced... Blah... once again... Blah... 4/10
Your wack as fuck but you actin all pro, even if I was Potato Head this is no skin of my nose.
Where are the punches... Its all mainly self-glorification... 4/10
You couldnt give me beef presenting cows by the heard, your lyrically retarded with ya broken words.
Weak closer... Suited the verse... Weak... 5/10
Overall... 19/50... Weak... Some nasty structure... And youve had like over 100 battles {old alias}... and your still wack? Elevate... please... pz
menolin
i probably owe you a thanks, for your crew acceptin me*,
but you've never elevated....lightweight before september 03'
peronal... decent opener... 7/10
26, i gotta play on the fact........ that i find you old,
this guy held down contagious....**
............shit, that crew couldn't even pass on a cold,
good personal again... good... 7/10
before marvel, you was XL4real, almost 100 losses or near*,
you get beat around the calander, 365 losses a year,
Dope... liked this personal... again... lol... 8/10
you's reppin the UK.... you sure you never imigratred??
because wackness so rare.. in uk its not usually imitated,
Stickin up for the UK... Patriotic... nice... 7/10
man....... you dopest line of this battle, in you sig,
you quite out of place here... like a blind mans wig!
Loved that line... Made me laugh for a minute solid... haha... 9/10
Overall... 38/50... A liked this verse... Personal nearly every bar... all the punches hit hard... good structure... nice flow... keep it up... pz
v/ menolin...
OUT
my last up
honest vote, an a link i will hit ur battle(s) up
Flow: menolin way better than Marvel cuz he had some good rhymes in there and Marvel wasn't gud at all
punchlines: Menolin had more and better punchlines than Marvel
Structure: Marvel hadn't a gud structure
Personals: I didn't saw any personals in Marvels so.....
Vote menolin
Aight....
Menolin was the better in this battle. He has some nice wordplay on that and some of it was pretty damn funny. Anyways he had a shaky struckture but thats just my opinion. Also, some good punches from both. The Marvel came out weak but finished alot stronger. I felt his flow and his structure was good.
It was definately dominated by Menolin.
Sorry The Marvel.... Keep writin'.
VOTE: Menolin