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you spit first
no bullshit
no hate/dr/crew votes
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10-15lines
you spit first
no bullshit
no hate/dr/crew votes
spit 20mins afta you checkin...... an yeah since you already got your shit written then it wont be a problem for yah
no feedin, right??
this is my checkinnnnnnnnnnn
yeah sure no feedin...whateva the fuck that is
oh yeah dun worry i aint gonna feed off your lines man...i got my own shit...dont gotta use your shit against you
Gonna make 'flash', crash like he's in the middle of World War II
'Khmerboiz' what the fuck kinda name is that for a crew
Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin
The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson?
Your little brother doesn't know if ur 'black or white'
I guess that doesn't change the fact u like it small and tight
Man, that shits not right, ur brother, are you retarded?
Ur probably the culprit, then looks around the room and asks who farted
U started this shit, and now your getting discarded
Put down the pen & paper, from this u can't be guarded
It's like a lightning strike, except you see no 'flashes'
wake up next morning, with CAMROK spelled on you in gashes
your done, just took this battle and placed it in the ashes
I'm 'diss-interested' in 'dissin' this kid, dismissin his shit
disinterested in lettin him live...
livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs....
only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib
the only 'hard'ness within, is the 'dick' in your ribs
Now I see how you 'rip shit'....I'll rip ya lips from ya chin
distilled my spit, and yet im sick of dis still
sick cuz i'm ill, I've been inflicted wit skill
he tasted 'hate' for a minute as i 'pissed' in his grill
picture per-fect when I have this bitch cuffed to the back of a movin hearse-its
murder in the first
hit high speed, as I watched his eyes bleed, crazed to see his spleen burst
dragged this fag over broken glass till the blood from his inside started to drip from his ass
Stepped out for a second, to teach him lesson, heel to his 'nuts'...now whos 'cummin' in last?
yeah an jus tah let you know...khmerboiz that is the name of mi underground group....if you got aol ill send you the song...
uppin for votes.....
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both flows were aight, flash u'r structure is alil messed up, but not that bad that it can't be fixed. work on that, and the punches, seemed like u was just dissin him with hate disses, no good punches or personals. cam u'r flow was pretty good, and u had more personals that hit, just try to be more creative. vote-cam
fav lines cam-uhh ok flow, and wordplay, good imagery i guess, punch was weakQuote:
Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin
The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson?
flash-good flow, nice wrdplay, ok punch.Quote:
livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs....
only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib
flash try to keep ya couplets seperated, also use less vocab and more punches. verse was coo, just didn't have the personals.
peep my battle with ghost
and vote
peace
uppin 2
flash wrecked this. he was just too much. complex rhyme scheme. i write poetry so i appreciate that. its hard to do with no beat. but good job. punches were there vocab and all was tight.
camrok used a lot of gay and mj meta's so it took away. cam look around rb and most rappers who lose use on ro two of those things. bad idea. been tried like too much.
vote=flash
vote on these
me versus saltshaka
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111132
me versus physik
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111138
yo cutastraphe when you wanna battle me lets do it...you voted on my battles and shit...we battle but i wanna make it a 2 style battle so we switch the shit up
haha.. michealcor gotta be kidding me.. look on rb??? i've been here longer then you. Calling them gay.. pretty sad.. u know called a sense of humor..... maybe? I loosen shit up a little bit. and I have never seen a mj line on this site. but of course u have. u post 36 times a day for 3 days.
uppin (1).. i respect opinions.. but don't be a dipshit, that vote wasn't even done right
boy niggas hate when they dont get the vote. mike j lines played like gay jokes. for real. 36 posts a day. i do more here than just battle niggas. cypher and vote. things you should do. it don'y matter how long you been here you aint done shit since you have. but don't take it personal. you in ya feelings like these hoes
I don't care about the vote against me... but u dont know how to vote. Sorry. And stop freepostin in my battle uppin (2)
yo micheal...you wanna battle me....we do it with two different styles?
CAMROK:
Gonna make 'flash', crash like he's in the middle of World War II
'Khmerboiz' what the fuck kinda name is that for a crew
Not a bad opener, good imagery of the WWII
Produce rhymes so sick, like bird droppings on ur head passin
The shit slides down ur face, flash.. are you Micheal Jackson?
lol, nice punch
Your little brother doesn't know if ur 'black or white'
I guess that doesn't change the fact u like it small and tight
Came off a good punch, made this one look played out and weak
Man, that shits not right, ur brother, are you retarded?
Ur probably the culprit, then looks around the room and asks who farted
Kinda a dry humor, ok nonetheless
U started this shit, and now your getting discarded
Put down the pen & paper, from this u can't be guarded
Ok punch, nice flow here
It's like a lightning strike, except you see no 'flashes'
wake up next morning, with CAMROK spelled on you in gashes
your done, just took this battle and placed it in the ashes
Good personal punch, good closer
flash:
I'm 'diss-interested' in 'dissin' this kid, dismissin his shit
disinterested in lettin him live...
Sick multi, good opener
livin for killin these kids, these scripts be written in sigs....
only 'flow' that you know is the 'spit'-in ya bib
lol, nice
the only 'hard'ness within, is the 'dick' in your ribs
Now I see how you 'rip shit'....I'll rip ya lips from ya chin
Good flow, ok punch
distilled my spit, and yet im sick of dis still
sick cuz i'm ill, I've been inflicted wit skill
Nice wordplay, especially the first line
he tasted 'hate' for a minute as i 'pissed' in his grill
picture per-fect when I have this bitch cuffed to the back of a movin hearse-its
murder in the first
Interesting style change, it fits, and yet it doesnt
hit high speed, as I watched his eyes bleed, crazed to see his spleen burst
dragged this fag over broken glass till the blood from his inside started to drip from his ass
Stepped out for a second, to teach him lesson, heel to his 'nuts'...now whos 'cummin' in last?
Dang, nice closer and finish
Personally, I think that Flash took this with a much better approach and more creativity. This was not easy, and CAMROK, keep doin what u do, flash just brought it too hard. Vote-flash .. peace, and nice job to both, loved this one!
Check this one out:
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111789
that link i posted was one i thought as also a very tight battle.
yo MichaelCorleone if you wanna battle i will battle you....but its gonna be a 2 style battle...to show that you got a lil bit a skill and you aint jus spittin insults...you down...hit me up in bitchslapped or pm me
This was some mad shit, CamRok them micheal jackson lines where of tha hook.
Flow- Camrok - His flow aws brutall, Flash at parts u jumped, but was still dope
Punches- Flash- Although Camrok had the good Jacko lines, Flash had more punches
Wordplay-Flash, just read it and u'll see, although Camrok u were still aiight,
Overall- Gotta be Flash, but this was close.
alriht, com'n... get the votes up!! lets go! Upppin (3)
Uppppppppppppppppppppppinnn (4)
Leave links.. I'll return favors and checkout battles.
uppin (3)
yo i appricate all the votes and shit and tellin why but if you gonna post vote you have to be able to poll vote also...pc
ok heres the break down
FLOW:camrok had a little better flow,flash u need to elevated and use more words that fall in to place better
PUNCHES:um im gunna have to go with CAM u got some deep shit on him,FLASSH work on getting more in to punches then rambiling
personals:flash uhad i dont think 1 personal on him it was wacked,camrok u had some ightt personals but need to elevate
structuer:nethier,u both need to structuer your shit alittle better.......
i hope i have helped u out in elevateing good luck next time
MY VOTE:CAMROK
flash is DQ'ed for being in four active battles.