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ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll...
you try yo ass to run fast...
but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else....
Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass...
Gnaw on yo bone...
Don't condone...
Try and rewind and begin again...
Go back to your pig pen...
Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch!
The End!
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
^WOW KILL YOURSELF....JK horrible though and i'm not kidding......
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
^so simplistic a 3rd grader could spitit......
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
^this is even worse hey man you forgot one fish 2 fish red fish blue fish.....quite now or elevate drastially...you are not dope......ego check....
Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll...
^HOlY COW whats with the simplistic shit are we all in elementary school...
you try yo ass to run fast...
but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else....
^I'm just speechless.....confused....it makes no sense....
Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass...
^WHERE THE FUCK DID THIS COME FROM?...WTF ARE SAYINg?/
Gnaw on yo bone...
Don't condone...
^this is just like crack ticks...your like terets or something right?
Try and rewind and begin again...
Go back to your pig pen...
Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch!
the end....
WOW ok ......I dunno whether to slit my wrists or vote....i guess i would have to go with Rengade sorry y'all ELEVATE OR LEAVE HURTS MY HEAD TO READ SHIT LIKE THIS....
i wasn't done dick fuck look here hold up i wasn't done
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
this bitch ain't got no green/
his whole family poor/
they all freezin there ass off, sleepin on the floor/
ill put u in deep freeze u won't breath with ease/
ittl take a nuke ta make ya rhymes hot/
i know you be dickriden bitch ur jsut caught/
u post ur first verse/
who the fuck could wite worse/
ya shits not better than mine/
u can't take the 9/
ill stick with the auto matic/
the shit ima bout ta do to u is gunna b tragic/
why u gunna mess with me/
when u gunna learn that ur/
ass is jsut plain old freezer burn/
uppin 1 vote on the 2nd rhyme i accidently ssent the first one early
uppin
OK freeza die pleas..you need to learn how to stuctuer your shit better and work on punches........LIL you had some OK shit but wasnt really feelin it..you both need to elevate and work on it more..by far the weakest battle of all time...
ok heres the break down
punches:LIL had some ok punches freeza i wasnt feelin any of um.
flow:nethier of u had flow in this battle
structuer:freeza ya structuer was wack as hell/LILyours was to but it was better then freeza's
wordplay:nethier of you had any wordplay,u need to learn how to use the words alittle better with out streching your lines
personals:LIL had some personals on freeza,freeza didnt have 1 good personal on LIL....come on guy's this rap shit is easy,try not to talk abpout your self in your battles but diss the hell out of the person you are VSing....hopefuly i have helped u guys out..........*1*
my vote: lilrenegade89..............
Yo Lilrenegade like killed this dude once again freeza pop sound like i had for a snack this afternoon and like his rhymes are so broke and like i'm ashamed to even read what the hell he spit Renagade up one! By the way holla at me i wanna battle
uppin this shit. Drop a link for ya girl. Peace
Uppin this shit please drop an honest vote here
uppin
yo LIL this is a girl u battled HAHA im gunna laugh if she win's LMAO.....J/k...good luck.....peace hommie......
uppin vote please
I feel ya, U killed him, keep it up nucca, U the shitQuote:
Originally Posted by freeza pop
Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll...
that was the most pathetic personal I've ever seen.
you try yo ass to run fast...
but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else....
Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass...
why....please tell me why.....blah..garbage
Gnaw on yo bone...
Don't condone...
WHACKNESS
Try and rewind and begin again...
Go back to your pig pen...
Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch!
The End!
I'm at a loss for words...This was garbage...no this was shit on top of garbage...no it was worse. Elevate please for the love of God. Thanks and have a good day
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
no punches/personlas/metas here at all that were even sumwhat decent
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
Weak as hell
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
this bitch ain't got no green/
Whack
his whole family poor/
they all freezin there ass off, sleepin on the floor/
ehh whack
ill put u in deep freeze u won't breath with ease/
ittl take a nuke ta make ya rhymes hot/
i know you be dickriden bitch ur jsut caught/
BEST LINE OF THE BATTLE FROM BOTH SIDES> WHOOOOOOOOOOO!!! Still whack as fuck tho
u post ur first verse/
who the fuck could wite worse/
I agree...But yours is whack too so don't talk
Omg this was the worst battle I've ever seen in my life. Fuckin awful. Both of you need to check the Whackness Emergency Center for battle tips. On that note, Renegade wins this cause he had one not shitty punch. Oh and I omly broke down 15 lines cause that was the limit You set. Freeze came simple....for a kindergardener even. Clifford? Dawg...no. But I love you both anyway, and I know you'll improve. Peace
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112337 If you want :)
uppin
ok that fag from iowa he didnt kill me i just tko ed him
but i have to wait for 2 more votes so this shit is gay
freeza pop murdered this nigga.........and he ain't that nice neither.
all i can say is that renegade sucks, but my advice is elevate BIG TIME. Your verse sounded like somethin a lil kid would say shawty.
Vote-Freeza Pop
ur just hatin casue i said u suck u dont suck i jsut said lay off da syllinbals
first off..you suck...and if you wanna go then set a battle up wit me and i will embarass you...shit nigga we can have a banishment match. im that confident.......my vote dide even count anyways, i was just givin an honest opinion and your shit is doo doo garbage. damn set a battle up wit me..............10 lines......bitch nucca
this battle was kinda wack, but ima go wihgt freeze cuz i felt sum shgit, barely but atleast here shit made sum sense, reagade, i dunno wtf wast thgat but eh work it out elevate a little
uppin
when u look at my poast it's #5 not #3 `
um ne mods do i ned 5 votes or did i tko
u didnt post 3-0 knock out in your rules so no mod will close it remember next time to post that............*1*
o thats yo i didnt know that
uppin homies i need votes c' mon
lilrenegade89
ima pop tihs lyrical hit it ain't gunna freeze/
this shit so eazy it's like shootin the breeze/.
metiphore,personal = 2
im from p.s.a. were we smoke the treez/
u can't fuck with ne of our mc's/
-self hype = 0
freezer get burnt ne day by me/
ima murk ur ass u ain't no mc/
-repeat ryhme,-self hype,punch = 1
ill blow ur ass up n set u free/
-structure,punch = 0
Very bad. Sorry but this is what you need to do. You need to add more detail into each line along with a lil complexity, and mix sum punches with your metiphores. Kill the easy ryhme scheme's and don't repeat words at the end of you lines, it's to basic. Work on That. Alot. And don't complain, I don't value second drops.
Overall = 3
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freeza pop
Renegatorade searchin' for the soul...
sorry brotha you gonna lose this poll...
-confusion,punch = 0
you try yo ass to run fast...
but we all know you gonna fall on your asssk someone else....
-stretch,-flo,-wordplay = 0
Clifford da big red dawg runnin' through the grass...
Gnaw on yo bone...
Don't condone...
-vocab,-metiphore = 0
Try and rewind and begin again...
Go back to your pig pen...
Go to bed and sleep it off, bitch!
-flo,metiphore,punch = 1
The absolute worste I have viewed so far. I sure hope I start viewing good battles again. Anyways, You honestly need to just quit. And I'm being nice or atleast trying to be, but let's face it. You have no skill what so ever. I can't even put what you need to improve. Just forget about this site. Work on that.
Overall = 1
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Vote = lilrengade89
this battle was like a basketball game wit hockey scoring
ok vote for real when u get 100 poasts
Ok Dis Otha Bitch Dont Up Idont Want This Battle Closed Casue Well Tie Or Sumthing But If I Win If U Close It Casue He Dont Up Then Hella Yea Close It N Give Me The Win Cause This Othaa Bitch Dont Up Please Mods Tell Me How It Works If He Dont Up
Weel this was boring to read
flow: i guess Lil had sum flow in there, at least he tried cuz pop didn't had any flow with no gud rhymes or wordplay, both need elevation, especially pop
Punches: I felt that lil had more punches and they just came harder, same way bout the personals, pop you have to have punches and personals to win a battle, if not you gonna be crushed by everybody in here, work on this man
Structure: They both had, I suppose, sum structure in their verses but nothin great....
Originality: Lil had sum lines who were 'original' and I didn't see any original lines from pop cuz they were all played....
This was a crappy battle, but my vote goes out to lilrenagade89