check in's due by wednesday, earlier if possible.
Verses are due: Friday, 12 PM Eastern Time.
Come Dope, Read LLL rules, agree on line limit.
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check in's due by wednesday, earlier if possible.
Verses are due: Friday, 12 PM Eastern Time.
Come Dope, Read LLL rules, agree on line limit.
Checkin.In.
K.Largo...
Av..20 as agreed
I show 'em no mercy, when I leave the best smothered
Ya girl felt like Ms.Jackson when fag Left breast covered.
cause you'll die today fucker, theres' no sunshine tomorrow
"Verbal & nouns tremendous story".... when given in oral
you ain't got no moral, and your foul cries are a disgrace
I bet he'll try this time,
.....since he loves the mid-weight in his face.
let me ask you, your record.. whats the winning percent?
see your saga is over, and you've reached your witts end.
your condition is not right, I'd say nowhere near sane
the wishes are so intense he checked in with my name
not one to bicker, but cut the deal and make it a fight night
cause you'll go down quicker than Paris hilton and night lights
now your out of rythim and slowly you throw less
I hear u left me merk, cause they do say father knows best.
so let me play the role, and don't say it's not plenty
your just like your mother when you Im'ed me for twenty
yeah I hand the cash out, but I fight till I'm passed out
cause like old school laundry,
......I scrub 'em to rocks when they wash out.......
all your hopes in the past, and now you're tossed in my path
but might catch me for jaywalking when crossing this Av...
Merk Productions....
Kiss the Ring.....
The End.....
say bye bye to the belt...
this clowns dead, you know what the path is, I roast herbs,
only time I'm below avergage... is when you fuckin post first...
Verb's a fuckin god... look buddy don't try n' deny my power,
how you ready to wage war... when you make $5.25 a hour..?
and I'm damn serious... no sex forrest, don't want the hassel,
cause that's fuckin stupid... like Avalonius vs KLargo n battle...
it's crazy right..? How YOU can't win if YOU staged the fight,
and fuck ya crew... I'll beat Ms... like a angry lesbian's exwife...
K Largo's lackin the skill... must be matched to his wits... cuz
I said I'd move in for the kill... n' he asked how much rent was...
I'm the Jordan of RB... and truth is You're Grant Hill on defense,
he balls... you live in the park... but both'll stay on the bench...
ya careers finished soon... you know you should never try me,
"BrIbEoNe1: I'll start writing soon." How's that for fuckin irony..?
ya blurt bitch... while Verbal always spits slick, fast n' clever,
but with ya lack of props... how can Bribe get his act together..?
Hey... Nani Nani... Pencils... n' pens with books and a warm bisquit,
that line waws fuckin gay(s)... like the name I fuckin check in with...
Bribe... you're stealin father time... and just to make that clear,
that means you 'took second'................ the second I got here...
Verb...
Vote - Av
Bribe's verse was decent
His closer was dope and a few other nice punches
but the majority were average at best
and he had too many played lines (Wit's End, Oral, Yo momma)
Av's consistency was there in every line
and every punch made me at least chuckle
K Largo's lackin the skill... must be matched to his wits... cuz
I said I'd move in for the kill... n' he asked how much rent was...
^fawkin dope
More Wit, consistency and an overall better verse from Av
V/ Avalon
K. Largo...wasn't feeling your verse THAT much...you had a nice punch here and there but it didn't make up for the rest of the crap in there...although your closer was quite dope...overall..an OK verse
Avalon...opener was iight, played though, A LOT more consistency than largo, rent line was dope, closer was iight.overall..a good verse...you took this by far..
a lot where personals i knew none of the voters would understand...Eh my fault
shut up fibber... I had the same type o' personals in there...
bribe, the crossing av line was pretty good, but thats the only thig in your verse i thought was above average. The "father" line was played, the "wits end" lines is way played... your other lines were average. the opener.. i do know all about the halftime show and Ms. Jackson's breast showing, but the line just doesn't hit Av hard ..
Av's verse was directed at you better ..
this clowns dead, you know what the path is, I roast herbs,
only time I'm below avergage... is when you fuckin post first...
played too, but above avg still ^
Verb's a fuckin god... look buddy don't try n' deny my power,
how you ready to wage war... when you make $5.25 a hour..?
Iunno if he really does or not but it was funny ^
ya careers finished soon... you know you should never try me,
"BrIbEoNe1: I'll start writing soon." How's that for fuckin irony..?
another funny one^
bribe you need to take your next opponent serious ..
v / Av
Vote- Avalon
Simply put. A better verse. Flow was nice. Punches were a lot harder. Wordplay was dope.
I'm the Jordan of RB... and truth is You're Grant Hill on defense,
he balls... you live in the park... but both'll stay on the bench...
^That was raw Av.. lol
Av.
For better punches and consistency with punches. I also thought Av flowed better and was more witty.
"K Largo's lackin the skill... must be matched to his wits... cuz
I said I'd move in for the kill... n' he asked how much rent was..."
Tight^.
V/Av
Bribe didn't come too bad. He should have stepped it up though. Av came with punches and personals all over the place. Verse was much harder hitting with better flow and more consistency. He just outshined Bribe through'n'through.
Vote ~ Av
Bribe Came Dope, Some Punches Were Nice Then Some Ok, But The Wordplay Was Dope. I Think You Fell Off On Some Lines Later On In The Verse Where As Av Just Kept The Consistancy Going Throughout His Verse. Punches Were Funny And Hard Hitting.
Nice Battle Guys.
Vote - Av
v/ Av
not that its neccessary but i need to vote on sum battles
but yes, bribe came nice, but Av just hit with alot of witty
punches.. just took it.
Ya both my boys.
Av took it though.... he had a few of those grimey lines that just make you go "Oh shit"
He wins by that factor