10-15 lines
you spit first
spit witin 25 mins afta check in
no hate/dr/crew or shit votes
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10-15 lines
you spit first
spit witin 25 mins afta check in
no hate/dr/crew or shit votes
Checking in
Im up for this battle
i can take you on anytime
ill spit first gimme a couple of mins a
Yo Yo Listen Up Yall
This guy smarts rapping about being sexy
But all this time im behind him holding two buses flexing.
Ive got this mega phone im saying: 1 2 3 testing
what are you a neckrophliac
your 35 shes 13, get off her back.
When your thinking about your battle tacticks im ready to attack
with my fists and hand
and kamakarzi head bands
i will arive in a gangster van
and you will be behinds on a push bike trying to catch a tan
so this is the end i hope you learnt your lessin
you dont need brain to best ya
Respect SylicoN
shit man i forgot about this battle...here is my check in
i'll pick you up and puncture a hole through you like a voodoo doll
blood jus falls downstream and gushs out as if it were Niagra Falls
I spit bars dat Golden Corral and Shoney's haven't even probably carried
shoveling dirt on your computer it's your final resting place to get buried
your pad and pen nigga go ahead jus set it on da ground
even though i'm on my computer I'm still gonna shut it down
my lyrics have you running around in circles like a dog chasing it's tail
home boi in yo mind keep thinking i'm a test to ace and you gonna fail
your girl told me riding your dick was like a bike with training wheels
erectile dysfunction must really make it "hard" for sensation to feel
I'm attackin-clicks, slap-ya-bitch, and smash-ya-quick
bash-n-hit, wouldn't make the cut if ya packed-a-switch
Ya lack-the-wits, my voice boomin like I'm clappin-clips
since your shit was wack i made my shit as wack as i could.....uppin for votes (1)
yea every1 that view this VOTE...........yea flash nice shit ill be lucky to beat that
you think so? i was jus messin around...but yeah if you serious thanks...
dont vote on this battle unless you can poll vote...if you wanna give us your opnions about the battle then jus pm us
sylicon, you just need to elevate more, you came to simplistic with your drop, no real flow or complex punches and personals.....flash just outclassed you on this one, he had some decent punches better structure and flow...flash you need to use more personals as well though...all in all flash took this with a better all around verse but keep elevating you two..you'll both get there.
yea man thanks for the advice ill work on my personals a
RespecT
fo show....i woulda thrown some personals in but didnt have time....sylicon...if you want a rematch sometime jus hit me up....ill do it again
Maybe in a couple of days ok i got a couple of battle going now
yeah its koo when eva you wanna do it...hit me up when you ready
ok sweet as then
wont be to long a!
SylicoN
WE NEED MORE VOTES!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
CHECK MY OTHER SHIT
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...23#post1155323
ok...well sylicon is banned..so Flash should win by DQ
sylicin- Not gonna break down his verse cause he can't benefit from
it seeing as he is banned..
Flash- You came ok.....punches were mostly on target..a few were
played tho..try adding some original concepts to your verse to
inhance your punches...also throw in some personals...multis were ok..
...but try to make them punches as well instead of jus having them there
....Add some wittiness...decent verse
Vote=Flash
Other guy is banned...
Flash wins.
Peace
^Reversed!
Just because the other dude is banned,
doesn't mean that the other guy gets the win.
*Re-open'd*
show 2 ir..sylicon is banned..u get win...
anywho..
i wanna say my opinion...
sylicon lost this..another newb.....no structure....weak...
flash- ur shit was okay..structure was better than in most battles..."voohoo?"?????..lol...ya opener..mad me laugh...but u had st8 punches n ok flow...
even thought sylicon is banned...u did take the win...imam vote cuz im bored...
vote- flash..
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. Votes should still be valid even though one battler is banned. - Axiom
ok first of all, vote goes to flash
reason:
flash-better red, ya structure was good, ya flow was good(goes along with structure and wordplay), ya vocab was good, could be better, ya multies- u had a couple aight ones in there. u had an alaround good verse, enough to beat this sorry kat.
sylicon-wow!........u need to elevate quite a bit, ya structure was terrible, ya wordplay was wack, ya vocab flat out sucked, ya multies, had none, and ya verse all together needed some mad work. Just a bit of advice, quit rapping, peace.
vote goes to- flash
flash is a bitch............................................. ..........
flash u ate him alive but sylicon u need a few pointers. one
kamakaazi