12-14 lines
due in half an hour
first to 5 votes
no dickryders or NEWBIE VOTES
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12-14 lines
due in half an hour
first to 5 votes
no dickryders or NEWBIE VOTES
uh look,
this battle dont mean shit to me.. gasp, dont think yo life is gon last, gon get clapped//
by a cat...who breaks niggaz backs wit bats, and murders with gats...i attack, fuck RB stats//
ya hear a...Ratta-tat-tat, when i get the nack to rap, all i do is talk crap, but i back it up, like shaq//
fuck stacks...i take a punch straight for your head...effecting u mentally, so u soon gon be dead//
u crazy fuckin wit this man...in 30 min u gon be a dead man...u a father more like priest, givin lil kid head//
but when niggaz see me...i dont even touch them, and there blood shed.//
or as so its said i can spit 6 lines and get it over with, but u wanna get murdered...so ima ryme a lil bit//
smokin cannibus...fuckin herb...u gettin mad at this? u cant handle this...spit, and rip shit//
silly faggot dicks are for chicks...i kill with automatics…murder crack attics, arobatic//
shit…fuck this bitch, who talk about cliques, take a puff on the blunt for my niggaz in heavin//
but fuck u, put out the blunt… pick up the gun…POP POP POP, u on the run//
this is the ending nigga, this shits don’t with, coz I pissed off rapper jus pulled the trigger//…::POW::
ok hey u got spit ni 30 min remembver,
lol
im waitin, damn u slow
aight lets rip this shit....
Watch this loser, he choked in this peep show...
Cuz he aint a good head, he cant deepthroat!
Like spam, I Flood Roster,Dam..Water the odds?
I kill this kid in my Wake, like Freddy Krugers job
Seriously..
I thought you were ill, saying you battle often..
the fuck??
Your verse is shittier than asses in washrooms
Your powerless kid, its no use you better run.
I compare your skill to ya cunt..It'll never cum
Just cuz I'm iller, I'm sure you hate me kid....
Cuz whenever you rhyme.. :spit: you make me spit
Fuck a verse fucka time, I know I'm late now
But then again so were ya pubes, birth and style!
sorry im late..mont python was on TV
half assed too
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yup...
lol iight....nice verse
GoOD LUCK ::the smily with his thumbs up:: lol
uppin............................
::thumbsup::
i would have voted but you made the rules no newb votes so
ok lets say u werent a nebie who would u vote for..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111506
do a nigga a favor a vote on this battle much thanx to you who vote on it
u vote on this
ill vote on that
id vote on roster mainly for the structure and clarity of his rhymes
lol^ for the structure?
i was wondering who RB.com's father was....i thought maybe an alias...but after reading...i guess not. none the less he still wins. Rosters shit was structureless, read some more text battles and you'll see what u need to do. hey u could of spit that off the dome in real life and it might of been good for freestyle, but this here isnt freestyle rapping off the top of your head so much. make it good with good concepts. RB Father takes it, not too hard to beat roster though. the water dam wordplay was kinda useless, but at least u came nice and structured, clear and punched.
vote: RB.com's Mommy
ok 1-1 uppin
thats ridiculous
1~0... peurtoricanelly dropped a 1 line newbie vote
Ya this wasnt that great but RB.com Father takes it cuz simply had a better verse
ROster u need to eleavate more I mean u had half an hour and thats all u came up wit....tsk tsk not good enuff and structure was fucked up!
vote: RB.com Father
vote on this!......http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111683
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thanks for the vote mayne...I'd hit that up if my post count was past 100...
2~naught
thanks for the vote mayne...I'd hit that up if my post count was past 100...
2~naught
can someone just finish this????