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hey check in an we'll do a blind spit aight!!!!!!!
k mayne all spit first im checkin in, in 2 minutes got to get a coupple beats but rules are 10 lines 5-10 minutes spits winner takes all no crew votes
aight i gotta go get some music too!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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superbowl sunday im getting fucked up and none stop drinking two next sunday when i spit a ryme or a vers it kills who ever i aim at ryme this and that bust beets and smoke pot cause im the only person ur mom said hit the g spot when i strap on my rubber her face gose red she laid down and said gizzard is the king he makes my ears ring cause he is the white freestyler he never ryming seruisly i just try to keep it flowing beat bockin righting rumes till im out of ink and paper, some say im good some don't i don't give a fuck becasue i might be the only hockey playing white boy who can spit the spall wick and wick the wall. Some might evan say that gizzard is like a ghecho i can switch colers and hide ripe railes and die but one things for show my rymes arnt riped of the net un like ur im spitting sick shit cause my rymes are soft and jucy like ur moms clit shees on her nees asking for a nother sqweert but i got to get home before my bitch get another cock and anouther mayne who can slang the rock so all leave u with a thinker take your time if i were u i couldn't compeat ither
what up
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mayne how much time do u need fuck
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sorry my mom had ta get on ima spit now.AIGHT.!!!!
ayo,
i bomb on pussys like u wit ambition, and lyrics wit precision/
ima expose this dick head, like circumsition/
my punches come direct, and make you erode/
u suck so damn much you about tah implode/
you think that you tha only one that spit fire?/
man, tha shit i say leave you lookin like Richard Pryor/
dawg, ill smother you wit wisdom, and have you gaspin for simple lyrics/
you thought you had a win?, but mah flow jus cripple spirits/
ya shit put me tah sleep, ya need to use sum bettah diction/
cuz you coming out ontop, in this battle, is fiction/
nice spit but will see who votes
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Yo Hellspawn was gud
flow:Hellspawn
punchlines:hellspawn
Vote:Hellspawn
hellspawn u were the shit but i can't dawg,your flow was tight i liked the prior line
Thanx man it's cool.UPPIN Y'ALL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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I have to give this win to hell for the mere fact his lines were well structured
And hit harder... Gizzard your lyrics were to hard to follow..
“i bomb on pussys like u wit ambition, and lyrics wit precision/
ima expose this dick head, like circumsition/”
Nice starter.. Compared to the other kat’s
Gizzard I couldn’t follow your flow for anything I guess it’s your style
Mines can be that way as well…
My vote goes to Hell Spwan..
Over all better rhyme scheme
And enjoyable..
Both of you lacked punches..
Please vote here an honest vote please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...81#post1184681
vote = bio
b/c the other person didnt respond
fella, hellspawn took this one cus he had better flow, metaphors, and setup gizzard i couldn't even tell where ya rhymes was but a slash like this/ at the end dog it looked like a essay or sumthin clean that up man that made me not even read it all, pacaso,1
hey vote on this ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Metas= Hell
EVerything = Hell
Goodness = Hell
Rhyming = Hell
Not using stupid mom verses=Hell
In conclusion my vote goes to hell
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Thanks ya'll keep hittin' this up ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fella, hellspawn took this one cus he had better flow, metaphors, and setup gizzard i couldn't even tell where ya rhymes was but a slash like this/ at the end dog it looked like a essay or sumthin clean that up man that made me not even read it all, pacaso,1
hell spawn
tahnks dawg still Uppin ya'll!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
My two cents is:
HellSpawn won this and I'll even set it up for yall to see:
Opener: Hellspawn, that cricumscine line was a little tight.
Finisher: Tie, neither were very good
Flow: Hellspwan, gizzards was so wacked up I couldn't tell if much of anything ryhmed
Punchlines: HellSpawn...wouldn't be suprised if gizzard has a bruise from them. Heelsapwns came harder and left damage while gizzards had almost little to no effect
Personals:Niether of u......no good personals
Metas:Tie Neither of you had many
Since my last vote was disqualified for some reason ill do it again
Structure= hell wins---gizzard where was your structure hiding???
Flow = hell wins basiccaly same reason
Metas= Hell because gizzards were non-existant or the nearest thing to that
Multis= DInt really see any 1 liked
Personals= hell because he had personals
Punches= Hell because he had punchs
Overall= Hell because he had structure and his punchs werent that bad and i liked the scheme
Gizzard....what can i say...try getting a structure and working on rhymes and just quit with the mom jokes ok.....
THats my vote....you better not disqualifie it
can a moderator like make it so i can vote again because mine was dq'ed ok........
Hey ya'll they dq'ed a vote so I need one more!!!!!!!!!!hit this shit up
wat up hellspawn you kilt this nigga fo real ill battle you another time
uppin!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!
omy dawg......i luveed hellspawnz closer...sum ill ass shyt there....
weak battle....but hell surely took this
gizzard- ya shyt waz like a paragraph......no structure man
punches- hell...barely any
flow- hell...gizzard waz WAYY off
struc- surely hell
creativity- none...both laked.....
vocab- hell....good shyt wit dat
humour- none..boring shyt
vote- hellspawn 666
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...YRICALLYABBUSIV
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...YRICALLYABBUSIV
plze return tha favor on both......or just one.....thnx man...
good job on hellspawn 4 that one. Your punches were dope and you flowed well. Everything had relevance too, so that was a plus. creative too. Im surprised its your first post. you got some skills! I wouldnt mind battling you one day.
still uppin ya'll.How do I know when I won????????
when u get 5 votes and the poll closes............................................ ......................................
Uppin yall pleez vote on this shit.Been up for 2 months
punches:hell
flow:hell
opener:hell
closer:hell
\/0te:hell......
hell took this in a landslide verse wasnt the best but it won...
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