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35 minutes upon check in
blind spit
good luck
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..meter........hmm.....smh.... bout to merk him
Your greatest punches were ..erased.. while the rest-were-irrelevant
You'll never elevate like your "skills caught up with the law", just "arrested development"
This pest-aint-intelligent but I'll still maim and dangle-this-nerd
A tangle-with-Verb? I should be "stepping in flower beds" the way I "trample-this-herb"
This tramp-is-absurd, I "get under your skin" to the point I could "dance-with-your-nerves"
Im invading the "corners of your mind", you feel my "hands-on-the-curb"?
In case you don’t figure-in-time I’ll let you know the kid-is-divine
Serve you like “Baby Backs” at “Chili’s” when I dangle your “rib”-in-your-“spine”
You so “gassed” that if you smelled smoke, then most likely your ass might-be-”burning”
Meters “wrapping hair” (rapping here) puts more people to “sleep” than an Afghans’ “nightly-Turban”
Only way you’d ever have “nerves of steel” is with the “shank-through-ya-skin”
I’m taking all categories for voters but at least in boredom-you’ll-win.....
~sonned....
Stepping to me launches you in the air…an crushes ya flat
Took your advice and looked up……….
…………..……..so I could see what ya sig’s laughing at!
Wanted in on this battle...couldn’t have been more wrong
Because you’re out of the woods when I beat you…….
…………...back to the cunt reside in which you belong!
I stepped into this battle vicious..ready to win at all costs
What a surprise it was for me……….
……………………………when at any rate, you lost!
Trying to hang with me…you’re one of the week I ditch
Woke up to check the calendar……
…………………….................and then I sunday bitch!
Two of my verses should be posted..make it even lyrically
Because you’d have to bite my entire verse…..
………………………………….to get a taste of victory!
I merked you in this battle…but who really won is blurred
Because I have to hear this bitch squeal…
…………….……..….after I made him a broken record!
Running with IJL……and you can’t even step to them
Ya only in that wack crew……
……………….’cuz you couldn’t beat so joined ‘em!
awaiting yours*.... but for real duck don't duck this shit i wanted to battle u cuz u were experianced im sick of NEWBS dodgin shit....
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sry bout that last post.... uppin for votes..............................
srry 2 freepost....but virtuso....u 4got 2 poll vote in mah battle....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358
na i jsut did.... drop ur vote honest vote in this now
wow......madddddd nicee battle.....4reall....dis iz an honest vote:tie......
vitusoz waz niceee...pretty funny
meterz was more serious....but yet had a lot of decent punches....
i seriously call this match a draw....
at first wen i saw meterz name id think hed won...but nahh.....dis waz a tite battle...
great punches thrown.....great flow by both...sum linez in both had me crakin....
so vote: tie.....
datz how i c it.....
any more honest votes, upping (1) ................
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vote on this and return tha fava!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ummm..aight battle..had one emcee with wordplay
Had another one with punches and personals...
Umm..Virt...you need to take out tha "around tha words"
It takes alot away from tha flow...and ppl know where your punches are
Meters had more and consistant punches and was tha only one w/ personals
he had good flow..but meters..I wouldn't do that structure in FL man...
People don't understand that structure here and they vote against it..
Look s like you some of tha same concepts as me....lol
so
v/ Meters
meter got this this in my opinion it was a good battle from both sides its juss virtuso u need to shorten ur lines up a bit that really threw off ya flow but ur punches was decent...and meters u had good personals punches and flow so u took this...
Vote:Meters
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
lol, good battle. But Meters takes this for sure. He had sum real hard hittin punches in this one that allowed him to pull off teh victory and they were creative too. Virtuoso was good too...but as good as meters, no way. Flow goes to Virtuoso...but meters takes structure. Great battle guys.
v/ - Meters...He had the punches.
Both please return the favour and drop honest votes on the battles in my signature please. Thank you.
Thanks for the vote west, upping for more honest votes......
Why not up again, i'd like this to be voted on.........................
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iight...
this was quite a tight battle... a think that Meters took this one...
Virt... a think that you need to shorten your lines... and take out all the ~"! crap... you had some good ideas but jus cudnt convey them in the best way...
Meters... your verse had a good flow... structure was cool {looks jus like mine... lol}... you had some hard hittin punches... this was a decent verse man... nice work...
v/ Meters
pz
virtuso
Your greatest punches were ..erased.. while the rest-were-irrelevant
You'll never elevate like your "skills caught up with the law", just "arrested development"
nice, strong opener
This pest-aint-intelligent but I'll still maim and dangle-this-nerd
A tangle-with-Verb? I should be "stepping in flower beds" the way I "trample-this-herb"
second line kinda played, but not too bad
This tramp-is-absurd, I "get under your skin" to the point I could "dance-with-your-nerves"
Im invading the "corners of your mind", you feel my "hands-on-the-curb"?
nice wordplay, aiight punch
In case you don’t figure-in-time I’ll let you know the kid-is-divine
Serve you like “Baby Backs” at “Chili’s” when I dangle your “rib”-in-your-“spine”
not too bad, second line was nice
You so “gassed” that if you smelled smoke, then most likely your ass might-be-”burning”
Meters “wrapping hair” (rapping here) puts more people to “sleep” than an Afghans’ “nightly-Turban”
oh oh, nice, flow was a lil off to me
Only way you’d ever have “nerves of steel” is with the “shank-through-ya-skin”
I’m taking all categories for voters but at least in boredom-you’ll-win.....
not good for a closer
the multies you used made you punches hit pretty hard, coupled with your wordplay, a very nice verse!!
only thing is some of the lines were a little stretched which made the flow a lil off!!
meters
Stepping to me launches you in the air…an crushes ya flat
Took your advice and looked up……….
…………..……..so I could see what ya sig’s laughing at!
i could see what you was aiming for, could of been worded better
Wanted in on this battle...couldn’t have been more wrong
Because you’re out of the woods when I beat you…….
…………...back to the cunt reside in which you belong!
not too bad, another nice concept
I stepped into this battle vicious..ready to win at all costs
What a surprise it was for me……….
……………………………when at any rate, you lost!
made me laugh, nice flow, an pretty witty
Trying to hang with me…you’re one of the week I ditch
Woke up to check the calendar……
…………………….................and then I sunday bitch!
noice concept, wordplay let you down
Two of my verses should be posted..make it even lyrically
Because you’d have to bite my entire verse…..
………………………………….to get a taste of victory!
shouldn't of said verse twice, was a pretty good punch though
I merked you in this battle…but who really won is blurred
Because I have to hear this bitch squeal…
…………….……..….after I made him a broken record!
again bad wordplay
Running with IJL……and you can’t even step to them
Ya only in that wack crew……
……………….’cuz you couldn’t beat so joined ‘em!
nah, this didn't come off
you shouldn't of used the structure all the way through, there was only a few bars which needed it!!
you concepts were nice, but wordplay let you down, consistancy helps out in battles,
if your wordplay was batter you would of won this battle.
no hate.
my vote - virtuso
harder punches, nicer multies, an consistancy that made his verse strong all the way through!!
^blah, whatever. upping (4 i think) for last few votes, drop your link.
Your greatest punches were ..erased.. while the rest-were-irrelevant
You'll never elevate like your "skills caught up with the law", just "arrested development"
This pest-aint-intelligent but I'll still maim and dangle-this-nerd
A tangle-with-Verb? I should be "stepping in flower beds" the way I "trample-this-herb"
This tramp-is-absurd, I "get under your skin" to the point I could "dance-with-your-nerves"
Im invading the "corners of your mind", you feel my "hands-on-the-curb"?
In case you don’t figure-in-time I’ll let you know the kid-is-divine
Serve you like “Baby Backs” at “Chili’s” when I dangle your “rib”-in-your-“spine”
You so “gassed” that if you smelled smoke, then most likely your ass might-be-”burning”
Meters “wrapping hair” (rapping here) puts more people to “sleep” than an Afghans’ “nightly-Turban”
Only way you’d ever have “nerves of steel” is with the “shank-through-ya-skin”
I’m taking all categories for voters but at least in boredom-you’ll-win.....
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Weak closer, very nice opener, good consistent wordplay, but the multis were sketchy, sorta messed up midway with your multis. Punches were alright, but excelled with wordplay. Used a bit of filler.
Stepping to me launches you in the air…an crushes ya flat
Took your advice and looked up……….
…………..……..so I could see what ya sig’s laughing at!
Wanted in on this battle...couldn’t have been more wrong
Because you’re out of the woods when I beat you…….
…………...back to the cunt reside in which you belong!
I stepped into this battle vicious..ready to win at all costs
What a surprise it was for me……….
……………………………when at any rate, you lost!
Trying to hang with me…you’re one of the week I ditch
Woke up to check the calendar……
…………………….................and then I sunday bitch!
Two of my verses should be posted..make it even lyrically
Because you’d have to bite my entire verse…..
………………………………….to get a taste of victory!
I merked you in this battle…but who really won is blurred
Because I have to hear this bitch squeal…
…………….……..….after I made him a broken record!
Running with IJL……and you can’t even step to them
Ya only in that wack crew……
……………….’cuz you couldn’t beat so joined ‘em!
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Good punches, ill personals. The 'looking up' line was real nice. Set up lines with the flow wastes a lot of space though. Punches were more effective than Virt's, but no multis. Flip some multis next time. Good opener, good closer. Slightly better than Virt's
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Vote - Meters
Upping (5) for the win!...........................
i aint tryin to cause hate meters!!
but in my opinion thats how the battle went!!
V had some nice punchlines and killer wordplay dat Arrested Develpoment line was good for him.......and he stayed focused on dissing Meters and not getting served backed da same dish he dished out which was actually kinda hot.V had some good metaphors but what really hit were his wordplay then punches.......Meters got beat by a couple of meters as far as i'm concerned. Meters jus relyed on punches and metaphors but was decent as well.... but da better dissing verse is V i'll have to go with dis guy on dis one no hate or dick riding, peace.
vote=Virtuoso
place an honest vote on dis battle to close it ...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978
upiin this................... ish............................................... ...............
well i cant vote on this battle just givin feedback...(in meters crew)
..uppin thread as well...
anyways....ironically, (sarcasm) i do think meters took it. V, your style is so oldschool with all the quotes and dashes and somewaht worthless metaphors. u only picked them cause they rhyme. focus on the concept of your punch.
meters just punched the whole time. had some ill ones, had some okay/kinda weak ones as well. but in my worthless opinion u took it from the punches. good battle though.
virtuoso hit up my battle vs. bombz
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111995
great battle in my opinion.....
meters had a different type structure...like it :thumbup:
Virt : structure ... kinda stretched....loose the quotes! wordplay was good liked it...
punches were ok...decent....metas were dope...added some good trys at personals with ur punches....good job on that...your flow was a little off...at points....good verse tho....15/20
Meters: structure....tho looked weird....it made ya verse flow very nice...and your punches and personals connected real good....also witty...as was the wordplay here ans there....metas were interesting...cool.....overall a good verse....punches hit hard and direct......17/20
virt just work on elevating you'll get there.....please loose the quotes...fucks up flow and strucutre sometimes!!
vote - meters....nice battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...75#post1155075