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10 lines
15 minutes....
usual voting rules accept 300 posts to vote......
no recycling......
check in now.....peace,,,,,,,,
this is my check in si i'll be droppin.......
good luck
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Who you think you are I drop the Bombz around here ......
tHE 15 minute time limit got this kid sweatin in fear ....
Another IJL victim ... I just Ko'd theunderated earlier ....
Now we got another challenger & he he actin gurlyier!....
Cant even come with a decent punch .... I believe my hunch
Beat you like theres 12 months ... a garuntee like phille makes them blunts
Truth is you'll get smoked like the herb that you really are ....
You bore people to sleep like you actually spit Sealy bars ...
Weapon of Mass Destruction but your sig lies to Rb's eyes.....
U aint nothin but consumption & addition to -Technician-'s pride
Hit with full destruct, struct you once, and already your stuck,Forever ya' clutched, bruised lyricaly, used the bible and prayed to god,still couldn't win this miracally, runnin' into a plague of black death, facts is left but the acts of an ax to ya' head, pack of max flow, couldn't move me, thought it was facts? couldn't prove to be raw will skillz, 15 mins with 10 lines these laws I kill, ruthless I don't care, I leave you flat without a spare, clear and said, get near dread the scare of a pussy niggah who dared, so wheres the truth? Since youth I known, your act of cockiness and talent is all talk, cuz I don't see where its shown..
uppin......................................
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This Battle One Handedly Goes To BombZ I Was Feelin His Punches,His Flow And His Vocabulary On The Other Hand Technicians I Liked Your Flow As Also But Thats Really All You Had And You Didnt Really Have Personals..
Overall Vote-BomBzZ
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blah wack battle...both of you go kill yourselfs....lol
Worse verses I've seen from either of you...
Umm Bombz..you didn't have any punches...just a mest up flow
And multies here and there..umm..subpar wordplay
You had no personals..and ya structure was effed up
Tech..your verse was shit too...just not as much
you actually attempted somewhat punches..like
Phillie/blunts..umm and ya last bar...
had personals...but really wack..don't come this wack again
Both of you...up ya games..or try next time
v/ Tech
yea........^..........i'm drunk so its all good................just a random battle.............
UPPPN......../////...............
lol....i forgot to post a link...
here ya go...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...56#post1146356
.. Clear To See WHo Got This ..
.. Bombz Keep Battlin And u'll Elevate ..
.. But Techinican Got This Hands Down ..
.. Vote..Technician
this battle was fuckin horrible. tech u had an aight flow, and structure, just the punches were iffy...bombz i don't kno wut the fuck u were doin, u tryin to freestyle..cuz that verse was horrible, i seen you come allot better, that aint even u'r style nigga...aight well, tech was more creative and came better...vote-tech
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I must say...I'm a little dissapointed..I expected something better from Tech...Bombz this was your first battle I've seen and I was not impressed...Tech had few more punches that hit..flow was about the same...both of ya had a decent wordplay going on..Tech had a way better structure..vote-Tech
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yea....up it goes........................................
technician
Who you think you are I drop the Bombz around here ......
tHE 15 minute time limit got this kid sweatin in fear ....
6/10
Another IJL victim ... I just Ko'd theunderated earlier ....
Now we got another challenger & he he actin gurlyier!....
5/10
Cant even come with a decent punch .... I believe my hunch
Beat you like theres 12 months ... a garuntee like phille makes them blunts
6/10
Truth is you'll get smoked like the herb that you really are ....
You bore people to sleep like you actually spit Sealy bars ...
6/10
Weapon of Mass Destruction but your sig lies to Rb's eyes.....
U aint nothin but consumption & addition to -Technician-'s pride
7/10
overall 30/50
bombz
Hit with full destruct, struct you once, and already your stuck,Forever ya' clutched,
5/10
bruised lyricaly, used the bible and prayed to god,still couldn't win this miracally,
5/10
runnin' into a plague of black death, facts is left but the acts of an ax to ya' head,
pack of max flow, couldn't move me, thought it was facts? couldn't prove to be raw
5/10
will skillz, 15 mins with 10 lines these laws I kill, ruthless I don't care, I leave you flat
without a spare, clear and said, get near dread the scare of a pussy niggah who
6/10
dared, so wheres the truth? Since youth I known, your act of cockiness and talent is
all talk, cuz I don't see where its shown..
5/10
overall 26/50
plz dorp an homest vote in my sig, the battle
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yo tech got this he came harder in punches and flow.... he had nicwe wordpaly..bombz u came ight but ur shit was too strenched that messed
up ur flow really bad and ur wordplay was decent along wit ur punches
but they needed to be harder and they wasnt..so tech gets this..
Vote:tech...
can u drop an honest vote on this its 4-0
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111122
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wak battle seen batter from both...
v- tech(good structure and flow...your punches were disapointing,
none rly hit hard...nice persoanls tho...seen alot better man),
bombz(i swear your like 2 pll man always cum pout with new structure and this was wak
streched and shit, also no clear punches just a mess,you can cum so much harder man wats up?)
not a gd battle but tech gets it with clear punches and better struucture,
tech make sure you hit this with an honest vote now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110695 thx alot..........pz
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make sure you hit that link man.....thx.............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...............pz
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damn upmmmmmmmmmmmmmnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn nnnnn
still upn............................................... .................................
get this shit closed Damnit............................................ ....dq me for uppin too much if u want like youngblood....i give no fuckz
Dope...Quote:
-Technician-'s verse
Who you think you are I drop the Bombz around here ......
tHE 15 minute time limit got this kid sweatin in fear ....
Another IJL victim ... I just Ko'd theunderated earlier ....
Now we got another challenger & he he actin gurlyier!....
Cant even come with a decent punch .... I believe my hunch
Beat you like theres 12 months ... a garuntee like phille makes them blunts
Truth is you'll get smoked like the herb that you really are ....
You bore people to sleep like you actually spit Sealy bars ...
Weapon of Mass Destruction but your sig lies to Rb's eyes.....
U aint nothin but consumption & addition to -Technician-'s pride
Good punches
Flow was straight
Structure was good..
Wordplay was decent
Multies were lacked...
Overeall.....13/20
...Flow was weirdQuote:
BombZ verse
Hit with full destruct, struct you once, and already your stuck,Forever ya' clutched, bruised lyricaly, used the bible and prayed to god,still couldn't win this miracally, runnin' into a plague of black death, facts is left but the acts of an ax to ya' head, pack of max flow, couldn't move me, thought it was facts? couldn't prove to be raw will skillz, 15 mins with 10 lines these laws I kill, ruthless I don't care, I leave you flat without a spare, clear and said, get near dread the scare of a pussy niggah who dared, so wheres the truth? Since youth I known, your act of cockiness and talent is all talk, cuz I don't see where its shown..
Multies was tried..
Structure was gone to hell
Writtin like it was for audio..?
Idk... verse needs work...
Overall.......7/20
V/-Technician-
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damn this was open all this time? sum1 vote.
please sum1 just vote and get this over.
Pretty easy vote right here.....
Technician - Not a great battle, umm, I've seen so much better from you so maybe you've elevated since the time you wrote this. However, you did punch him which is more than he can say. The thing about mass destruction was aight, sealy bars thing was okay, rest was eh, but at least you punched him.
Bombz - Your verse was a bunch of silly multies that didn't really go anywhere. A lot of it didn't even rhyme like the closer. Eh, pretty wack verse and you didn't really diss him hardly at all. Disses win battles.
Vote - Technician
8 votes have been given...
But Feeble said 4 weren't explained.
That leaves one more needed.
Peace
i understand its a old battle but he upped 9 times.
dq