~RapidFire~ vs. ven0m

ok..10-15 lines..no d/r votes or hate votes..and verses due in 30 minutes after sign in...I got somethin else to do first tho, so I'ma do my shit, then sign in, and I'll get to work on my verse iight?

peace

checking in imma spit first........................

I'm at a level that u couldn't possibly reach....
leave ya family missin, like Bill Cosby's teeth...
I'll drill ya fuckin brain, and hollow ya mind...
you're proud of my dick...so swallow ya pride!..
I'll spew 'venom' when I take ya 'Rap-I.D'...(use ur knoggin)
idiot...u couldn't even spit against I-T...(he didn't even drop a verse against I-T in there battle...)
I'll rip anything that this faggot creates...
tear off his head, whipe my ass with his face...
it's a shame ya girl's name is "right arm"...
ya fans neva bounce..like tits in a tight bra...
I.J.L...u gotta be insane to fuckin challenge us..
cuz u drop "weak shit" like turds on calendas...

fuck it..that's it...

peace

didnt he say that he was going to spit his lyrics first

Yo you can't beat me bitch, your not on my level
The syllables that I spit are for too incredible
I'll give your ass a chance now to run away a forfeit
cuz your style is fake, so change your name to counterfeit
My lyrical skill will have you feeling nervous
Break the rules so could get banned on purpose
I don't blame you,if i were you i'd do the same
Then hang myself with a rusty steel chain
to insane so watch what u say gay
i'll have u burried in the month of may

venoms shit was to simple but it was ok and i like rapidfires punchlines better so my vote is:rapidfire

....need to pollvote...

and yea..Proof he said he'd do his first..but the original rules said "you spit first" and that it'd be within 30 mins...well I did my shit, and came back to the comp n typed my verse n posted it before I read where he said he'd spit first...it dont' matter really..I gave him the advantage of spitting second if anything...

we need votes

id vote if i could, and yeah, for u fire, but because nobody is goin to the bitch slapped section, does anyone wanna battle?

uppin #2...

we need some fuckin votes...and Diabolic, u need to poll vote..

peace

Weak battle...no offence people but it sucked.

v/ - Rapidfire

Why...the existence of personals...even though both had crappy punchlines...atleast rapidfire's were beefed. With that category taken...rapid has pretty much won this battle. Structure tho...is awarded to venoms...rapid, explain your punchlines after the battle...not inbetween your verse.

Both return the favour and drop honest votes on my battles please. Thank you.

pretty one sided battle.....uhh
Rapid had way more advanced worplay
And punches..better structure and flow
Venom..you can't selfglorification lines
If you don't have strong enough punches
And thats what you did..u should of
focused more on ya punches
You need to think of more original punches too
(counterfeit)<--really played

so

v/ Rapid Fire

punches rapid
opener rapid
closer rapid
rapid was just better
u both should elevate

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom

lol...

trust me, that's not my best at all....I dont' try that hard when I battle here.....I'ma use this metaphor....Pretend u were a boxer, and u were getting kinda old, and when u figured out a good strategy u wanted to save it for a really good boxer...but when u fought some guy that u could easily beat, u would just do some basic shit, just enough to win, b/c u don't care about ur image anymore...well that's me...when I think of good punchlines, I save em in my head, n use em when I really need em..when I battle in these kinda battles when I know I can win, i just put enough for the W...and u voted for me right? ok then lol...

no offense to ven0m tho...I know it sounds cocky but shit...it's true

iight uppin #3 3-0 me...

Um ight
Punches- Well with what was used i would have to go with rapid, his punches hit harder, Swallow pride shit was dope...
personal-Again, Rapids brought harder hittin more humerous shit to the table,Venoms used some played shit, worded pretty badly, Rapid takes personals
Flow- Both Showd signs of and ok flow, Pretty mucha tie nothing really stood out that made one better than the other
structure- pretty much the same thing as flow, both had the same type of structure nothing special nothing really stood out
wordplay- Rapid, more creativity , asscoited way bigger and better words with his punches and personals,Venow had some ight wordplay, but again very basic kinda played,

no beef ...keep elevating
v/ Rapidfire

Honestly Vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111140

u both were good, (at least compared to me, check out my battle with MichaelCorleone) and i dont really think i should rate either of u because i dont even know what im talking about

No need to break shit down here. rapid had the better punches, and flow, used more personals. venom dropped a weak verse seems like it was done quickly, and didn't really have any good disses, cept maybe one. Overall both had good structure and schemes, but rapid was more creative and his punches hit harder.

vote-rapid

first off.........rapid fire took this shit easily.........Venom had to simple of rhymes and some stupid ass punch lines about how your incedible, and your lyrical skill......of course it's your lyrical skill............what are you talking about...........

punches go to rapidfire........structure to rapid, shit, everything to rapid on this one................my vote doesnt count cause i dont have 100 posts.....
but i vote rapid.........

yo I need one more vote to win this...the damn mods wanted to be mean and take away a vote for me cuz some idiot didn't vote right...n I need this shit to be closed so I can open a crew battle...

peace

^ Erm... rules are rules.. and I'm no idiot.

You get 2 more ups due to reasons I don't care to mention.

coo then...lol.....waiting on the last vote....

peace

fuck it....last up......somebody fucking kill this battle...

peace

iight heres the breakdown.. rapid had a much more complex rhyme scheme, and punches to back it up, even with short bars.. some witty lines and nice disses.. the ass/face line made me laugh.. venom came in.. not flowin too well at first, by the time he picked it up it was too late and he didnt throw any eyepoppin punches.. disses were mediocre, so i think rapid won this with a stronger verse, more directed at hitting his opponent.. hit this up with an honest vote, no hate or beef

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...49#post1185649