EyI-SyTeZ vs OutCome

Alright I upped the limit to 12 lines...
No feeding off verses
No crew voting
No swaying votes
Have your verse up within 30 minutes (but you said you would be back so i guess the time limit is two hours...)

Wow, your holding three wins, and you think thats a thumbs up
you already lost once, this chumps just a seventeen year old fuck/
Voice of the streets?? man your own block doesnt wanna hear you
ima play an anti-villin, an destroy this wack rap super-hero/
His talents like ray charles, theres none seen with Eyi- sytez
poor excuse with battle rhymes, you remind me of bum fights/
Ill cut your "eye site" in half maken you see a new vision
its simple addition, you plus rap equals wack, dont you listen/
I couldnt agree more, after this battle it will destroy your image
Its not sunday so why is your wackness helping my talent scrimage/
your starten beef to raw for you to chew, are you high flyweight
this herbs ready to shake, its like harlems haven an earthquake/

I'm Here, HoLLa At Me

I’m Probably Ya Most Comp, But What Made You Wanna Knock Wit Me?/
I’ll Just Punch You Constantly, “No Combinations Needed” Like “Locker Keys”/
Out’s Been Beatin The Hell Outta Newbies, But I’ll Have To Stop Ya Win-Rows/
When He Just “Shows Up and Agitates Ya Screen” Like “Pop Up Win-dows”/
Noboby Wants To Read Ya Shit, I Hate To Be The News Breaker/
OutCome Wouldn’t Have “Personals” If He Took Em Out Of “Newspapers”/
You Aint Blazin Wit Me, Endin Ya Career In This Face To Face Till You See/
That Ya Chances Of Winnin “Hands” Down Are That Of An “Arabian Thief”/
Someone Must’ve Told You That You Were Dope, But You’ve Been Led Wrong/
Hell, Outcome’s Verses Are The True Reason His Frontlines Get Slept On/
This Battle’s "Wopsided"……………But Please Don’t Blame ME/
Ever Seen "Shaq and GP See-Sawin"….."Poll Votes Resemble The Same Thing"/(Get It)


****Arabian Thieves get there Hands chopped off

can yall help a nigg out and vote for this battle heres the link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111089
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Alright, nice drop... Upping for some votes

very nice stuff here. outcome had good personals and good punches. his stuff didn;t flow that well though, which is a shame. nice meta's though, and clever use of his name.

eye sytez punches were very well thought out, and his stuff flowed nicer too. good use of meta's too.

OUTCOME

flow: 6
meta's: 7
multi's: 3
punches: 8

EYE SYTEZ:

flow: 7
meta's: 7
multi's: 3
punches: 9

eye sytez got it.

can u repay the favour and vote on my battle? extremely slept on......

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110974

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Outcome had did a good job trying to beat Eye but I don't think he was consistent enough but close. What really hurted him was his weak ass opener and weak ass closer plus one of his lines didn't rhyme at all. he did a good job with his punchlines but could of been expanded better and metaphors were straight I can say. My enjoyment of his verse was kinda average I would say. Since Outcome had so many weaknesses he kept focusing on I would have to say dat Eye got da better of him. Eye came more consistent with flow and hitting punches unlike Outcome. Outcome would of had better personals he probably would of won but he didn't. Da bad part about Eye is he had some weak metaphors but still did good enough to earn his vote from me.

vote=EyI-Sytes

return da favor for my battles too ya know.........thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110451
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978

Uppin for POLL VOTES

Eyi got this he had better punches and waty better flow his but had nop personal..Outcome u was ight u had personals u had really bad flow
and ur opunches was decen..but he hit tha bigger subject so he get
my vote..

Vote:EYI

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Noboby Wants To Read Ya Shit, I Hate To Be The News Breaker/
OutCome Wouldn’t Have “Personals” If He Took Em Out Of “Newspapers”/
nice.... the best bar from eyi, vey good

Wow, your holding three wins, and you think thats a thumbs up
you already lost once, this chumps just a seventeen year old fuck/
well, its not any good, but is the best line i could screw off outcome`s verse...
outcomes tried to make a whole statement as a punch, but with 10 lines is hard to.
eyi had a great flow, really nice punches and was a lot more funny to read, so im about to vote him
no hate, bos

upping

outcome
Wow, your holding three wins, and you think thats a thumbs up
you already lost once, this chumps just a seventeen year old fuck/
pretty weak for opener 4/10
Voice of the streets?? man your own block doesnt wanna hear you
ima play an anti-villin, an destroy this wack rap super-hero/
ok I guezz 5/10
His talents like ray charles, theres none seen with Eyi- sytez
poor excuse with battle rhymes, you remind me of bum fights/
ok punch 6/10
Ill cut your "eye site" in half maken you see a new vision
its simple addition, you plus rap equals wack, dont you listen/
personal 6/10
I couldnt agree more, after this battle it will destroy your image
Its not sunday so why is your wackness helping my talent scrimage/
4/10
your starten beef to raw for you to chew, are you high flyweight
this herbs ready to shake, its like harlems haven an earthquake/
decent closer 6/10
total: 31/50

eyi
I’m Probably Ya Most Comp, But What Made You Wanna Knock Wit Me?/
I’ll Just Punch You Constantly, “No Combinations Needed” Like “Locker Keys”/
nice opener 7/10
Out’s Been Beatin The Hell Outta Newbies, But I’ll Have To Stop Ya Win-Rows/
When He Just “Shows Up and Agitates Ya Screen” Like “Pop Up Win-dows”/
nice metaphor 8/10
Noboby Wants To Read Ya Shit, I Hate To Be The News Breaker/
OutCome Wouldn’t Have “Personals” If He Took Em Out Of “Newspapers”/
funny shit 7/10
You Aint Blazin Wit Me, Endin Ya Career In This Face To Face Till You See/
That Ya Chances Of Winnin “Hands” Down Are That Of An “Arabian Thief”/
ok 6/10
Someone Must’ve Told You That You Were Dope, But You’ve Been Led Wrong/
Hell, Outcome’s Verses Are The True Reason His Frontlines Get Slept On/
ok punch 7/10
This Battle’s "Wopsided"……………But Please Don’t Blame ME/
Ever Seen "Shaq and GP See-Sawin"….."Poll Votes Resemble The Same Thing"/(Get It)
decent finisher 7/10
total: 42/50

Outcome had a pretty nice verse there but eyi's punchez were just a lot harder and funnier... He also had the better metaphors...
vote - eyi

plz return a favour:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623

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Here's how I see this one.

Flow=Sytez, his just flowed a bit better and was an easier read, Outcome had a okay flow as well, just not as good.

Punches=Sytez, his punches just hit harder, Outcome if your punches hit just a bit harder you might have taken this catagorie.

Personals=Sytez, he just had a little bit better, and funnier personals. Outcome this is something that you could work on, you had some stuff that made me laugh but not consistent enough.

Vocab=Sytez, he just had the consistent use of vocab, Outcome, your vocab was kind of basic.

Over all=Sytez, he had the consistency to take this battle. Outcome if you had just been a little more consistent through this whole battle you might have been able to take this.

Vote=Sytez

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POLL VOTES

i accidently poll for wrong person sorry had a modd change it

Damnit, Can We Get This Over?

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Outcome

Wow, your holding three wins, and you think thats a thumbs up
you already lost once, this chumps just a seventeen year old fuck/
weak opener no real punch 3/10
Voice of the streets?? man your own block doesnt wanna hear you
ima play an anti-villin, an destroy this wack rap super-hero/
some creativity, but wack 3/10
His talents like ray charles, theres none seen with Eyi- sytez
poor excuse with battle rhymes, you remind me of bum fights/
decent 5/10
Ill cut your "eye site" in half maken you see a new vision
its simple addition, you plus rap equals wack, dont you listen/
Pretty good personal- math punches are played tho 6/10
I couldnt agree more, after this battle it will destroy your image
Its not sunday so why is your wackness helping my talent scrimage/
OK punch 6/10
your starten beef to raw for you to chew, are you high flyweight
this herbs ready to shake, its like harlems haven an earthquake/
No- flow was off an earthquake an shake are played to death 3/10
TOTAL: 26/50

Eyi

I’m Probably Ya Most Comp, But What Made You Wanna Knock Wit Me?/
I’ll Just Punch You Constantly, “No Combinations Needed” Like “Locker Keys”/
Nice 8/10
Out’s Been Beatin The Hell Outta Newbies, But I’ll Have To Stop Ya Win-Rows/
When He Just “Shows Up and Agitates Ya Screen” Like “Pop Up Win-dows”/
Flows off a lil but good punch 7/10
Noboby Wants To Read Ya Shit, I Hate To Be The News Breaker/
OutCome Wouldn’t Have “Personals” If He Took Em Out Of “Newspapers”/
Pretty good 7/10
You Aint Blazin Wit Me, Endin Ya Career In This Face To Face Till You See/
That Ya Chances Of Winnin “Hands” Down Are That Of An “Arabian Thief”/
Coulda been better 5/10
Someone Must’ve Told You That You Were Dope, But You’ve Been Led Wrong/
Hell, Outcome’s Verses Are The True Reason His Frontlines Get Slept On/
Played still ok tho 6/10
This Battle’s "Wopsided"……………But Please Don’t Blame ME/
Ever Seen "Shaq and GP See-Sawin"….."Poll Votes Resemble The Same Thing"/(Get It)
OK finish 7/10
TOTAL: 40/50

EYI takes this with better more complex an better punches

Upping this.. Ok ima admit i underestimated, but i keyd this shit up plus you got about 2-3 more hours than i did...

Also the voters in front lines fucking slacking mad.... there are at like 5 bars that hold some type of personal on you, also the "opening" thats weak as fuck is taken from his sig and his profile... LoL damn i love it when people dont realize that there not paying attention.. i will admit, Eyi did throw out some good metpahors.. i guess from now on

ill just have to "put Little quotes" around "every metaphor" so people Understand them "more"

All of you really need to take more time on realise what metphors are.. im not saying i won this battl eat all, im saying yes Eyi came off a little more witty but generic.. Im my biggest credic plain and simple.. But i know damn well my verse didnt lack lack as much as you people are saying it did... LoL i mean shit this is the entire reason why dope battles are losing to fucking newbies... Fuck it though i got cable internet, so im back at audios

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upping.

Wow, your holding three wins, and you think thats a thumbs up
you already lost once, this chumps just a seventeen year old fuck/
ehhh... no punch.
Voice of the streets?? man your own block doesnt wanna hear you
ima play an anti-villin, an destroy this wack rap super-hero/
decent..
His talents like ray charles, theres none seen with Eyi- sytez
poor excuse with battle rhymes, you remind me of bum fights/
lol...

rest.. was iite, most of this verse was filler and played punches.. I kno u can do better then that dawg... but maybe you didnt have too.. lemme check out this other cat..

I’m Probably Ya Most Comp, But What Made You Wanna Knock Wit Me?/
I’ll Just Punch You Constantly, “No Combinations Needed” Like “Locker Keys”/

ehh... played. like in 2000!

Out’s Been Beatin The Hell Outta Newbies, But I’ll Have To Stop Ya Win-Rows/
When He Just “Shows Up and Agitates Ya Screen” Like “Pop Up Win-dows”/

ahh.. not fellin.
Noboby Wants To Read Ya Shit, I Hate To Be The News Breaker/
OutCome Wouldn’t Have “Personals” If He Took Em Out Of “Newspapers”/
hmm.. iite

You Aint Blazin Wit Me, Endin Ya Career In This Face To Face Till You See/
That Ya Chances Of Winnin “Hands” Down Are That Of An “Arabian Thief”/
lol....

lmao @ the end.. vote=sytez..... not bye much.. ending took it for him.. lotta filler and played punches by him... outcome just didnt come with any good puches... return the favor.

1 more,............................................. .........

Outcome

Wow, your holding three wins, and you think thats a thumbs up
you already lost once, this chumps just a seventeen year old fuck/
Wack

Voice of the streets?? man your own block doesnt wanna hear you
ima play an anti-villin, an destroy this wack rap super-hero/
Wack

His talents like ray charles, theres none seen with Eyi- sytez
poor excuse with battle rhymes, you remind me of bum fights/
So So Lines

Ill cut your "eye site" in half maken you see a new vision
its simple addition, you plus rap equals wack, dont you listen/
Pretty Decent

I couldnt agree more, after this battle it will destroy your image
Its not sunday so why is your wackness helping my talent scrimage/
Wack

your starten beef to raw for you to chew, are you high flyweight
this herbs ready to shake, its like harlems haven an earthquake/
Played

Outcome's verse was wack, he didnt' have any hard punches, his wordplay was bad and his meta's sucked.

Eye-Stylez

I’m Probably Ya Most Comp, But What Made You Wanna Knock Wit Me?/
I’ll Just Punch You Constantly, “No Combinations Needed” Like “Locker Keys”/
Dope Opener

Out’s Been Beatin The Hell Outta Newbies, But I’ll Have To Stop Ya Win-Rows/
When He Just “Shows Up and Agitates Ya Screen” Like “Pop Up Win-dows”/
Nice Punchline

Noboby Wants To Read Ya Shit, I Hate To Be The News Breaker/
OutCome Wouldn’t Have “Personals” If He Took Em Out Of “Newspapers”/
Played

You Aint Blazin Wit Me, Endin Ya Career In This Face To Face Till You See/
That Ya Chances Of Winnin “Hands” Down Are That Of An “Arabian Thief”/
Decent

Someone Must’ve Told You That You Were Dope, But You’ve Been Led Wrong/
Hell, Outcome’s Verses Are The True Reason His Frontlines Get Slept On/
Wack

This Battle’s "Wopsided"……………But Please Don’t Blame ME/
Ever Seen "Shaq and GP See-Sawin"….."Poll Votes Resemble The Same Thing"/(Get It)
Nice Closer

Vote: Eye-stylez

I felt his verse had more punches, outcome's verse was kinda weak. Stylez just punched his ass constantly