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aight check it .....
My styles so outstanding theres no defense against my rhymes
you couldn't beat my in a battle if you memorized your lines
with all your friends combined, my rhymes you still have to borrow
you lost this battle kid but you can try to win again tommorow
instill sorrow make u sad i'm not sorry, on this make i spit game and i play u like atari
you rap and try to scare me , but i don't think you heard what i just said
you step up against me on this mic and i'ma butter your bread
Everbody asking " MAn you wanna end up dead?"
try spit some corny rhymes i dare you go ahead
you try to think rhyming words but just sign off instead
pump you full of lead and my bullets are just lyrical
You couldn't win this battle with a God given miracle
on this mic i tear you open, i infect like a disease
you were a rapper before i brought you to your knees
Waitin there like " PLEASE..... don't let his tight rhymes just diss me "
I'm the one thats here to show u you what all ur rhymes are missing
check it,
Its Not Hard To See Who’ll Be Receivin The L If They Spar Wit Me/
You Never “Mobb’d Deep At A YouNg Age“, You Aint No “Child Prodigy”/
You Probably Never Peep’d Rap, Eyi-Sytez’ll Give You A Long Look/
This His First Battle On RB, Already Startin Off On The Wrong Foot/
I Take Time To Defeat Rookies, But They End Dead In Hearst/
You Probably Wack As Fuck, No Wonder You Were Scared To Go First/
I Will Purposely, Beat This Geeks Cheeks Until His Face Burgundy/
Serve Emcees? Hell I End Careers Like Athletes Wit Severe Surgeries/
Don’t Try Battlin The Talented When You’re Really No Contender/
After This, Go Get Some Advice From The Wackness Emergency Center/
for real sytez rap was just more put together and it was much easier to follow. His punches where better and it just came off much smoother. vote sytez. prodigy keep at it though
I gotta give this one to sytez good punch linesk, overall good battle. You should go another round.
Here it goes
Flow=Sytez, he had better structure, just all around easier to read.
Punches=Sytez, his just hit harder, CP's were a little weak.
Personals=Sytes, I didn't really see any from CP.
Vocab=Sytes, have to go with Sytes again here, CP started off okay with vocab but kind of fell off toward the end.
Over all=Sytes, he just did better over all, keep at it though CP
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breakdown:
punches - styez: just came harder...
flow - styez: easier to read, period...
opener / closer - eh.. styez: hard decision, both of styez were ok, but child's opener was dope...
structure - styez: easily won, just read the verses...
well, nice job both of ya'll, peace...
vote - styez
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punches e: I Will Purposely, Beat This Geeks Cheeks Until His Face Burgundy/
Serve Emcees? Hell I End Careers Like Athletes Wit Severe Surgeries/
metas e: Serve Emcees? Hell I End Careers Like Athletes Wit Severe Surgeries/
personals e: You Probably Never Peep’d Rap, Eyi-Sytez’ll Give You A Long Look/
This His First Battle On RB, Already Startin Off On The Wrong Foot/
peep my battle please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109965
Flow - Child Prodigy was okay, but Eyi was just a little better.
Punches - Child Prodigy really didn't have any hard punches, and Eyi came in & out punchin' pretty good.
Personals - None for C.P., it kinda looked pre-writ, but I doubt it. Eyi had two or three decent personals in his rap.
Multies - C.P. had vertually none, meanwhile, eyi had quite of few, and they weren't bad.
Vocab - C.P. didn't really impress me on this. Eyi was just a tad bit better on this one too.
Originality - Not Really origional for C.P., he need to visit WEC. Decent verse from Eyi Sytez.
VOTE-Eyi Sytez
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Last Up, Lets Get this over people
punches
eyi stylez
Its Not Hard To See Who’ll Be Receivin The L If They Spar Wit Me/
You Never “Mobb’d Deep At A YouNg Age“, You Aint No “Child Prodigy”/
was his best to me, his were hard all the way through
personals ^peep above punch^
metaphors
Serve Emcees? Hell I End Careers Like Athletes Wit Severe Surgeries/
gotta agree with physik on this, eyi's were a lot better, he had more quality in his also
eyi takes the structure,
eyi takes this one pretty easily really, he had more, harder hitting punches, which really took the battle for him!!