alright now
15-20 lines
house rules
You spit first
verses due at least by noon tomorrow.
Ima make it as painless as possible for you.
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alright now
15-20 lines
house rules
You spit first
verses due at least by noon tomorrow.
Ima make it as painless as possible for you.
why should I drop first?.....bah humbug....ur dead buddy....g'luck
lol@ur past battles...your wack
Seen ur last battle, that just sucked
Kid, Salma Hayek gave Antonio Banderas a better front
U gets no luck, I'll give ya a 1st class ticket to hell
Not an easy sell, but i'm droppin 'cents on duke like poor kids in wishin wells
I'm robbin kid for his clothes, with no gun
Damn son, Didn't know i was stealing new styles...from 2001!
This shit isn't fun, kid's life has been a lie
& I just found his life, was portrayed in Boys Don't Cry
Lookn' at deaths eye, you don't deserve ta live
Even got Michael Jackson jealous, the way I sticked up Da Kid
I don't work off feeding, i just gut mine
You been here 4 months longer than me, & still stuck in front lines
I murdered you, motels got me feelin killer
& ur verses and girl got something in common, they just fill her
Got u singing "Right Thurr", but you think they care?
Nah, I'm let Da Kid go, & drop him back off at day care
isn't it noon buddy??......I think its ur time to drop..
omg, jacent that was sum sick shit...... da kill aint drop yet, and i cant poll vote cus hes in my crew, but you wanna join jacent?
Calm down nigga im droppin my shit right now
*Wipes semen residue off mic*
Now Jacents wastin his time acceptin battles wit the Kid,
suicide shoulda happened years ago ima make you wish it did,
you came to me so don't get pissed when I blow ya face back,
and expose the fact you stay on head like fitted hats,
Jace's a quitter attemptin' rap, but still the talk of his town,
Yep, talkin bout him like Whitney's career...Post Bobby Brown,
This ain't a battle dog, cause I saw the last one you put up,
you won cause of DQ muthafucka so don't push ya luck,
Ah fuck, now Jacent must like fuckin round wit the young-ins,
R. kelly's protege is trying to rap just give it up for him,
back to destroyin him, bring ya ghostwrita ill rip his ass up too,
Yall bitches couldn't beat me together, if i passed ya half my crew,
ill take each one of ya lines like its nuthin wit one sniff,
cause ya lyrics potency's like sand and pixie stix bitch,
Ja-cent, 50-rule man what in the fuck you tryin to prove,
that 2 halves of bitch rappers give you a chance not to lose,
And I aint quelude nigga it's gon take more than that to take me out
ill step off my pedistal so ya weak punches can at least see my mouth,
I gotta give the vote to Da Killa kid, It was even until this line gave him the upper hand.
"Ja-cent, 50-rule man what in the fuck you tryin to prove,
that 2 halves of bitch rappers give you a chance not to lose"
^^ur a fuckin herb..dont ever touch a battle again with wack ass non important votes like that...damn hoe...even my ass....fuckin newb wouldnt no what wordplay was if it pappyslapped him... now let the real voting commence..killa..i gotta give you props...i didnt know dynasty soldiers had it in them..that was actually a pretty good verse...it was decent..i liked the new approach at name flipping j...but j shit was fresh as fuck..his shit had me laughimng out the ass...punches surprisingly new...everything was on point...so yeah.....nice battle both...
v/jacent
..I'dve broke it down verse by verse..
but that way i'd have to read Da_Killa_Kid's twice..
After what jacent dropped there wasnt much he could do..
Jacent had dope punches & sumwhat personals..
Funny..made me laugh..
Da_Killa_Kid made me laugh too..but for other reasons.
You where not that bad..especially for a Dynasty Soldier.
But Jacent is just........dope. thats it.
Comedy with personal facts makes for dope punches.
Only thing i could say is.."Jacent, ur structure is fucked"..
But with content like that..who cares?
..Uneven, blameworthy battle.
& Dazasta..is a moron.
Thank you.
Jacent - vote
2-0....that one kid's vote doesn't count...i hate this uppin crap...but yeah..uppin
Ok people let the real votes commence Uppin This shit.
holy shit... jacent almost merked kid... breakdown:
punches - j: 3 awesome bars that had me laughing hard...
flow - kid: went real well, easily said...
structure - kid: read easier...
personals - j: front lines line was off tha hook...
j's last 3 bars were awesome, i almost started to cry i was laughin so hard...
vote - jacent
dont have 200 posts, so when i reach that i will come back and poll my vote... peace
WOULDNT LET ME EDIT!!
vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111229
Hmm...
Da Kid - Blah At His Whole Verse It Was
Garbage, I Had A Hard Time Readin It. Most
His Verse Was Either Played Or It Was Filler.
Nothing Stuck Out At All, Elevate And Word
On Punches...
Jacent - Killled It, Better Punches Better Every
Thing. Some Of His Punches Actually Made Me
Laugh Out Loud. He Had Good Flow Also Wich
Added To His Verse He Had Everything Da Kid Lacked.
Vote - Jacent.
3-0.........Let's go people....ya'll quit being lazy
yo ite damn jace nice soit dawg....
...tryout for instant...........
your shit was on track nice sense of flow,
with witty consistent punches...only thin to work on wud be structure.
...try and use lines that are as long as eachpotha...not like this,
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get it...nice verse tho man tryout,
da killa...not bad but punches wernt to good they were funny,
just not hard disses...work on your structure cam abit strewched also abit played man,
nice battle v-jacent
plz hit this now http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110695 thx alot...........pz
4-0..lookin for the sweep over Da Kid.....quit being lazy
Uppin for this shit people.
Uppin to finish this shit off.
V/ Jacent, much harder hitting punches & a more ejoyabler verse other cat came stretched & boring as fuck, mostly filler, & some played lines.. Jacent takes this.