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10-12 Lines
No crew d/r bullshit votes
Due by sunday
All votes explained
Im about to fuck u up
Imma rip out ur gut like its as menial as a paper cut
Change ur name Lyrical MC
U should be named after a peady like Micheal Jackson when he had a weave
I'll Play wiv words too descrbe u
Im phat but ur a fat bastard u should think before u chew
Now dont cry son
Just because ur boyfriend doesn't suck as well as ur Dyson its cuz he's Bi son
Im cold like im from the south pole
U broke kid cuz u bin suckin cock since u were six years old
I destroy people like syphilis
I swirl u about an spit u out Im like an expensive wine u cant get a sniff-o-this
il flip da script on dis shit,
dis battle is un~equall, like eminem vs limp bizket//
www.rapbattles.com defending illness,
same they couln't defend musick's pillness//
ur whole stlye is about to currupt and u won't lyrical justices,
dawg u signed u to dis battle, so fuck dis//
dis battle is very one side,
coz of fuckin rhymes neva colided//
ur mistaken,like micheal jakson wen he ad a face like instead of a boob job,
u can't rap,rookie!coz my lines are jst to gud to rob!//
ur vocabulary is speechless as grath gates,
with punches dat grayham nortan probalbly takes//
ur rhymes will leave u wid only da loser cup,
using viagra is your only way up//
leave u wid battle scarz, and 3 degree burns,man,
me join u? i'd sooner join da Klicks closs klan//
I spit lyrical,like every word iz clinical,
but ur beats are pitifull, with flow dat is un~literal//
but like Dick your chances are very small,
my rhymes will leave u week,you'll b seeing a lot of da medicain ball!!
a close battle, but im gunna go for Lyrikal mc purly cos his flows betta. keeo workin at it though.
Vote = lyrikal mc
return da favahttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111215
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uppin^^^^^^
aiight vote......vote.........vote.......vote
ite this battle was very newbish................wak 2 be honest,
lyrikal-you had punches sumwhere(very weak)...but your strcuture was wak..
...you need to make your lines longer..with complexed werds..etc..
also hit harder with punches they were quite played,
musik-wak man you also had sum sort of a punch but strcutre let you down,
read sum battles in elavated and werk on your structure,
vote-lyrikal for a decent attemp as a newb........
make sure you hit this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109550 thx..........pz
cheers bro^ 2-0 uppin///////////////////////////////////////
plz vote
unpin for votes
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Lyrical MC definetly took this wack battle with a verse just above wack, and as said before it was a good attempt at being a newb, i know this guys just started, the flow from both halfs was off most of the time but occasionally was there, no punchlines at all, but lyrical MC had some nice single handed diss's, Props
V/Lyrical MC
they were both pretty elementary, not very good for either but lyrical was the better of the two bad verses
uppin^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^4-0
keep votin!!!!!!!!!
flow - lyrical mc had the better structure/flow but still could use some work on it...
punchez - lyrical took that one cuz of the very weak punchez musick dropped
personalz - none ?
metaphors - lyrical had better metaphors although some were played
vote - lyrical mc
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
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UPPin 4 votes#
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Dick FUCKING Riding, ur verse was shit so fuck the above voters they don't know what the fuck they're talkin about. Their only reason was ur flow/structure was better than mine, they failed to mention ur punches were wack/u can't spell an it didn't make sense.
I wouldn't mind losing if the battle was voted on properly.
Uppin for votes
lyricalme is gonna get dq for uppin too many times
a close battle, but im gunna go for Lyrikal mc purly cos his flows betta. keeo workin at it though.
Vote = lyrikal mc
This is not an explained vote
they were both pretty elementary, not very good for either but lyrical was the better of the two bad verses
This is not an explained vote
And as one was dq u've only had 2 valid votes, so unless these voters expand on their explanations they shouldn't count. No doutb they will though u dickriding fucks.
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I think MuSick took this one...
His flow and concept kinda reminded me of DMX in some parts...
L.MC's verse was ight...Ya wordplay and shit is pretty played...
Also limp bizkit lines are sooo played...Just remember that!
Vote// MuSick
The rules said 10-12 lines, u done 20..............
by far lyrical got it./.. punches were pretty good 4 a newb.. an' personally musick jus' came with a really poor verse.. i think it's obvious so i don't think i need to go into detail here
peace..
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom
yo lyrical MC was gud, gud punchlines good flow everything was better MuSick so vote Lyrical MC
Come on vote on this, thx
www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111593
musikk, if u cant handle losing just leave the site cos Lyrical MC's verse was much better then urs, so just hack it man
Vote:MC
Musick, you verse was really basic. The structure and flow were off. You didnt have any hard hitting punches either. This veres was disappointing. I guess its ok if you just stating, but get some elivation.
MC, you verse was newbis too. Your flow and structute was better though. Also you didnt have any punches that blew me away, but you attempts were better that Musicks attempts, so thts why you get my vote.
Please return the favor...I know you both prolly cant poll, but just leave feedback cause at least it will up my battle.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...=111341&page=1
This was no match for MC
Musick you didn't had any flow or structure, your lines were playes, you tries to pull of some punches but they were wach, you had a bad wordplay, no personals at all, you need toe elevate bro
MC you had agud flow cuz you sum nice lines going on, you had great punches cuz i felt that they came harder than Musick, I would like to see more personals from you, you alsio had a gud wordplay and you were much more original than MUsick cuz you actually put sum lines in there thatt weren't played so...
Vote(not close) MC
This was a good battle, lets see if it can be finsihed aye, nice to see axiom doing his job, props to you man. Pz
both came weak in punches...musick u need to work on them badly none of ur punches hit...u need to got to tha wackness emergency centeso some1 can demeonstrate to u what a punch is....lyrical u had bad punches but a coupleof urs hit...flow was ok from both sides...musick u nned to have longer lines but them short lines made ur stuff flow really good...lyricalu stuff flow good aswell ...neither 1 did bad in tha departement...personal i really didnt see good ones from either side..ya both need to work on them really bad.....musick u had weak metas and u only had a few...lyrical u had more then musicks but ur was played....structure was whack from both sides ya'll need to work on that seriosly cause that can determine a vote....
Vote:lyrical he came harder in more departments and he had bette punches, flow, and metas