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checkin in, you have 30 minutes, and I'll take 20 after you drop
ayo
Lyric bust flows, but he chose the wrong rival,
he wouldn't bust a dope verse wit a firework in a bible,
this kid coulden't come hard wit concreat on his dick,
the lyrics he spit, are sick, they havin numonia fits,
couldn't "bust a tight lyric" wit a dildo's stuck up his ass,
tryin to put me on blast, while all he spit is trash,
and I'll gladly show him what the truly simple fact is,
an eplietic fit coulden't shake off all his wackness,
we can see how fake you are, your just a faggot imposter,
the crew you say you from don't got you on their rosters,
how dare you think you can see, or even get wit this,
insane jokers should have known you ain't no lyrisest,
tell ya homie 'virginoso' he can get off da nuts too,
kill you klean wit deez lyrics, see how dey cut through,
IJL must have had a bad day, lettin you in,
from dis day forward, the'll neva get a-na-va win,
P.S.
and Fuck dat lil bitchdizzle ROUX
*Not on IJL Rosters
**Virtuoso talked shit b4 battle
***a-na-va=ebonics(anotha)
i said drops in 30 min... you breakin rules and shit... you should just drop.. don't recycle my shit ma fuckka it just shows how much of an wack herb you really are fake wanksta...
herbariffic bitchdizzle...
Bitch you talk mad shit in bitchslapped, but I jus LYT ya ass up
Ya could be makin porn, cause ya blow as well as you suck
I roll this Herb into an L, look at BLAQs thin frame bend
Created two fuckin alias so he could say he had a friend
Reppin that BLAQOUT crew in ya sig, guess they movin nowhere
Like retards playin sports their expectations must be lower
Your rhymes aint worth my trouble, Comin with da whackness
Fuckin newb, I merked you, I dun care about ya Blaqness
Like the AA program fo alcoholics you need ta take 10 steps
And you'll still be under me, with regrets, beggin fo repents
Comin at me wit played rhymes, you run a basic show
The shit you spit is illiterate, like STDs I bust ill flows
Watch who you call out next time, ya got more than you deserve
I ripped ya insides out, rematch nah now you dun got the nerve
aight yo... i ain't gonna vote ... i just wana say this.. I know blaq, and lytblaq they is 2 diffrent ppl, dunny, we all play on da same comps on one network... that's why you get da ip issue... your sick anyway... tell your homie virtue what up wit blaq... dat nigga wanna rip him too.....
Whatever^ Uppin thisa shit for the first time.....
LYTBLAQ had the stronger opener... second bar goes to lyric, nice personal... LY, yours was a bit played, with the concrete thing... the next two bars from both had pretty weak punches... from there on i think lyrics took it, the cloer also goes to lyric tho it wasnt too hard, but LY's was like what?....... also the structure of lyrics verse was better..... vote=lyrics
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LYTBLAQ
Lyric bust flows, but he chose the wrong rival,
he wouldn't bust a dope verse wit a firework in a bible,
lol nice punch 2/3
this kid coulden't come hard wit concreat on his dick,
the lyrics he spit, are sick, they havin numonia fits,
this was ight.. your set up was weak tho.. 1/3
couldn't "bust a tight lyric" wit a dildo's stuck up his ass,
tryin to put me on blast, while all he spit is trash,
ight.. could have had a better punch 1/3
and I'll gladly show him what the truly simple fact is,
an eplietic fit coulden't shake off all his wackness,
that was coo.. 1½/3
we can see how fake you are, your just a faggot imposter,
the crew you say you from don't got you on their rosters,
lol nice ass personal.. 2½/3
how dare you think you can see, or even get wit this,
insane jokers should have known you ain't no lyrisest,
that was ight.. nothin hard.. 1/3
tell ya homie 'virginoso' he can get off da nuts too,
kill you klean wit deez lyrics, see how dey cut through,
weak.. ½/3
IJL must have had a bad day, lettin you in,
from dis day forward, the'll neva get a-na-va win,
that was ight.. weak wrold play tho.. ½/3
10/24 42%
this was an ight spit.. some lines were not needed.. should have hit more wit personals.. cuz that one personal might just win this battle lol nice shit..
lyric
Bitch you talk mad shit in bitchslapped, but I jus LYT ya ass up
Ya could be makin porn, cause ya blow as well as you suck
lol nice man.. but could have worded the 1st line better.. 2/3
I roll this Herb into an L, look at BLAQs thin frame bend
Created two fuckin alias so he could say he had a friend
lol nice shit man.. 2/3
Reppin that BLAQOUT crew in ya sig, guess they movin nowhere
Like retards playin sports their expectations must be lower
dont really rhyme maybe in a audio.. sorry couldnt get past the fact that it dont rhyme.. ½/3
Your rhymes aint worth my trouble, Comin with da whackness
Fuckin newb, I merked you, I dun care about ya Blaqness
ight.. 1/3
Like the AA program fo alcoholics you need ta take 10 steps
And you'll still be under me, with regrets, beggin fo repents
blah.. ight... 1/3
Comin at me wit played rhymes, you run a basic show
The shit you spit is illiterate, like STDs I bust ill flows
weak.. 1/3
Watch who you call out next time, ya got more than you deserve
I ripped ya insides out, rematch nah now you dun got the nerve
ight.. 1½/3
9/21 43%
yo shit was startin off hott then died down..
Text Standards
Punchlines - Lyric
Multis - none
Flow - tie
Creativity -tie
WordPlay - none
VOTE
Lyric
This battle was ight.. most weak.. but ight none the less.. stay up and return ta fav.. check the battles in my sig..
MADEvil...
LYTBLAQ
Lyric bust flows, but he chose the wrong rival,
he wouldn't bust a dope verse wit a firework in a bible,
Blah...played
this kid coulden't come hard wit concreat on his dick,
the lyrics he spit, are sick, they havin numonia fits,
weak punch
couldn't "bust a tight lyric" wit a dildo's stuck up his ass,
tryin to put me on blast, while all he spit is trash,
could have had a better punch
and I'll gladly show him what the truly simple fact is,
an eplietic fit coulden't shake off all his wackness,
Decent
we can see how fake you are, your just a faggot imposter,
the crew you say you from don't got you on their rosters,
lol... funny, good personal
how dare you think you can see, or even get wit this,
insane jokers should have known you ain't no lyrisest,
Not really direct hard punch at all
tell ya homie 'virginoso' he can get off da nuts too,
kill you klean wit deez lyrics, see how dey cut through,
weak
IJL must have had a bad day, lettin you in,
from dis day forward, the'll neva get a-na-va win,
blah closer..coula been much better
lyric
Bitch you talk mad shit in bitchslapped, but I jus LYT ya ass up
Ya could be makin porn, cause ya blow as well as you suck
coulda been worded better but overall it wasnt bad
I roll this Herb into an L, look at BLAQs thin frame bend
Created two fuckin alias so he could say he had a friend
lol...made me laugh, funnyand creative
Reppin that BLAQOUT crew in ya sig, guess they movin nowhere
Like retards playin sports their expectations must be lower
not the greatest rhyme, just aight
Your rhymes aint worth my trouble, Comin with da whackness
Fuckin newb, I merked you, I dun care about ya Blaqness
not feelin it at all
Like the AA program fo alcoholics you need ta take 10 steps
And you'll still be under me, with regrets, beggin fo repents
meh..coula been re-worded
Comin at me wit played rhymes, you run a basic show
The shit you spit is illiterate, like STDs I bust ill flows
so-so, not bad
Watch who you call out next time, ya got more than you deserve
I ripped ya insides out, rematch nah now you dun got the nerve
decent cloesr
overall - lyric fell off towards the end but he still took this battle wit harder punches at the start, they were more creative too
uppin #4
Last uppin, come on hit this up guys and leave a link
im gonna have to go with the majority in this battle here. Why? Lyric had the better verse. He had some whack lines...but made up for it with others. LYTBLAQ was ok, but he didn't really ever get to the level that lyric displayed in some of his punches. Does structure take effect? no...both were pretty even. Does flow? both easy reads. What about personals? Personals must work with punches...personals alone do not work as well as punchlines. So who do punches go to? Lyric, his were better, and harder hitting. So who do you vote for?
v/ - Lyric
Drop an honest vote on one of the battles in my signature please. Thank you.
Ya'll were both good, but...
Blaq: Nice personals and punches. But u gotta incorporate more vocab in ur verse. I liked it tho. Keep elevatin'.
Lyric: U had the better personals. U had better vocab, but he took it slightly on punches. I liked ur verse too.
Vote: Lyric
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Feeble Minded
yo battle is re-opened, so usin the first of my new 5 ups to get it closed again
Come n yall,, honest votes here please so this closes
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Shit uppin number 5. Last one, Hit this up honestly and leave a link and we'll check yours out
Personal PUNCHES - I have to choose Lyric with personal punches. He had more personals and the words he choose made sense. The other guy was just rhyming.
FLOW - Both LYTBLAQ and Lyric TIED in the flow department. I like how both verses flowed so I thought this was a tie...
Wordplay - I didnt see much wordplay, but I picked Lyric in this category. The reason I thought his wordplay was superior is because he used a better selection of word and his verse made sense. The other guy seemed just to be rhyming
Structure - TIED Honestly, I thought both verses had some good structure to it...
Multi - N/A -I didnt see any in this battle....
I vote lyric because he had better punches and wordplay..Creativity was about a tie as well....