10 lines.. 30 mins..
Blind spits..
Good luck..
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10 lines.. 30 mins..
Blind spits..
Good luck..
My knife will split ya deep skin hanging out like fins/
My mac will have ya ass getting low like those ying yang twins/
My gun will have you twitching like a tick/
My Defining of Illness means you make me sick/
Fuckin wit me you must be drunk drunk drunk/
My ak will make you like b2k go bump bump bump/
Really homie wit these rhymes im bout to choke you/
Fuck that since you a herb I guess im gon have to smoke you/
I don't know why you think im the kid you should test/
Aww I know why you mad P.M.S and im not talking bout no private message/
cmon dawg dont choke
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i guess its time for a no show
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Just noticed your remark.. realistically, its laughable at best
You'll be gaining from this battle herb.. post traumatic stress
With those poor attempts at punches you've just admitted defeat
Herb's been drawing more blanks than a hardcore scrabble cheat
I'm similar to bridges.. you're fucked once you cross my path
Injecting humour in my verse with ya site link.. it made me laugh
Ya references are prehistoric son.. basically every bars a bore
Making me the only known meat eater.. thats also be a herbivore
Not much is needed to merk you.. this whole battles a lark
Ya bars been passed round so many times...
.... they're fronting trade marks
Uppin x1...
boy
My knife will split ya deep skin hanging out like fins/
My mac will have ya ass getting low like those ying yang twins/
ok opening
My gun will have you twitching like a tick/
My Defining of Illness means you make me sick/
wack
Fuckin wit me you must be drunk drunk drunk/
My ak will make you like b2k go bump bump bump/
lmao..played...heard shit like it before too
Really homie wit these rhymes im bout to choke you/
Fuck that since you a herb I guess im gon have to smoke you/
played again.. very played...
I don't know why you think im the kid you should test/
Aww I know why you mad P.M.S and im not talking bout no private message/
i would say creative but i thought of that before, ok closer
Harlem
Just noticed your remark.. realistically, its laughable at best
You'll be gaining from this battle herb.. post traumatic stress
Not a bad opener...not the greatest but not bad FL punch
With those poor attempts at punches you've just admitted defeat
Herb's been drawing more blanks than a hardcore scrabble cheat
Creative, good punch
I'm similar to bridges.. you're fucked once you cross my path
Injecting humour in my verse with ya site link.. it made me laugh
decent
Ya references are prehistoric son.. basically every bars a bore
Making me the only known meat eater.. thats also be a herbivore
not realy a punch or a diss again..so-so
Not much is needed to merk you.. this whole battles a lark
Ya bars been passed round so many times...
.... they're fronting trade marks
ok closer
Overall -H.F. took this battle wit eas...his punches were much more complex and harder, Elevate wonder
hey this battle was pretty decent
theboy wonda- you had some nice lines in this battle
like "My mac will have ya ass getting low like those ying yang twins"
however you had to many of these... my this will do that do you lines.. you could have used more creativity and better punchlines in your verse.. overall i give your verse a 5/10
harlems finest- your verse wasnt the best shit ive ever seen but you had some witty wordplay and disses tossed in your batttle.. overall i give your battle a 7/10
vote- harlems finest for the wordplay and harder hitting disses
hit this battle up with a vote
thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110459
Kinda bleh I know.. all that was needed really..
Uppin x2...
Uppin x3...
Drop a link...
ThaBoyWonda101
My knife will split ya deep skin hanging out like fins/
My mac will have ya ass getting low like those ying yang twins/
Ok..ok..i saw it coming..
My gun will have you twitching like a tick/
My Defining of Illness means you make me sick/
Dope!..well not really more like its opposite
Fuckin wit me you must be drunk drunk drunk/
My ak will make you like b2k go bump bump bump/
Like celestial said, its been done..& in the exact same form too
Really homie wit these rhymes im bout to choke you/
Fuck that since you a herb I guess im gon have to smoke you/
Nahhh..get creative.
I don't know why you think im the kid you should test/
Aww I know why you mad P.M.S and im not talking bout no private message/
For you..this was great..nice how u flipped a old concept
Harlem's Finest
Just noticed your remark.. realistically, its laughable at best
You'll be gaining from this battle herb.. post traumatic stress
Ok.. not a real good opener but ok.
With those poor attempts at punches you've just admitted defeat
Herb's been drawing more blanks than a hardcore scrabble cheat
Fresh..good
I'm similar to bridges.. you're fucked once you cross my path
Injecting humour in my verse with ya site link.. it made me laugh
Attempt at personal, ok
Ya references are prehistoric son.. basically every bars a bore
Making me the only known meat eater.. thats also be a herbivore
Witty..ok
Not much is needed to merk you.. this whole battles a lark
Ya bars been passed round so many times...
.... they're fronting trade marks
Nice closer..
So overall the decision is easy..
Harlem takes this in every aspect & catagory u could think of..
Just a more elevated verse..vote Harlem
Uppin x4
Final up... drop a link or whateva for a favour returned..
My knife will split ya deep skin hanging out like fins/
My mac will have ya ass getting low like those ying yang twins/
^metas.....ok not the greatest wordplay but eh.....
My gun will have you twitching like a tick/
My Defining of Illness means you make me sick/
^bad meta.......bad word play..simplistic shiat....
Fuckin wit me you must be drunk drunk drunk/
My ak will make you like b2k go bump bump bump/
^ok fine this is almost a punch...but its a weak meta for sure...
Really homie wit these rhymes im bout to choke you/
Fuck that since you a herb I guess im gon have to smoke you/
^not original at all......this was your worst line...
I don't know why you think im the kid you should test/
Aww I know why you mad P.M.S and im not talking bout no private message/
^and i was wrong this is your worst line of all...bad closer.....
Just noticed your remark.. realistically, its laughable at best
You'll be gaining from this battle herb.. post traumatic stress
^ok it rhymes....its a weak punch...but it was there...
With those poor attempts at punches you've just admitted defeat
Herb's been drawing more blanks than a hardcore scrabble cheat
^hehe nice wordplay...i like it good punch nice bar
I'm similar to bridges.. you're fucked once you cross my path
Injecting humour in my verse with ya site link.. it made me laugh
^bahahh that site was whack good play my man..personal....
Ya references are prehistoric son.. basically every bars a bore
Making me the only known meat eater.. thats also be a herbivore
^played punch i used it myself before...its fine though....
Not much is needed to merk you.. this whole battles a lark
Ya bars been passed round so many times...
.... they're fronting trade marks
^i like the closer....
Harlem took this peace.....
harlem you took this for sure dawg you were more complex all boy wondas was just played and basic but it was ok but vote=harlems finest
oh my.....
I mean litterally.....
The boywonda said MY about 10 times.....wtf?...
Harlem killed him in punches, flo, structure and meti4's...
This really wasnt close at all....
BOy....elevate...
vote harlem