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You know the rules.
ill check in after you and verses are due an hour after that.
Drop It.
Yo checkin in, Ill drop when i see you check in...
Check..
I'll drop when I told you......
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This bitch been on my jock for weeks beggin for altercation,
in realization, I ain't Ice ill take ya lyrics and masticate* em,
treatin Wise like masturbation, quick to beat wit my hand,
its like second nature, id pound him everyday cause i can,
have em fucked up worse than kanye west spittin his shit through wires,
Fake ass gangsta, crash course breaks him down like Bone and Mariah,
This yungin read a few books, now Kaos he's got cognition*,
He's, fake and we know Wise Sways votes for vet attention,
Verbal sickness is my affliction, and infection will begin,
When wise achieves the fact that his Wit is at its end,
Now Ways been talkin shit, claimin that he's been ready for the brawl,
Bullshit the last time this muthafucka elevated was at the mall,
buying thongs wit his momma thinkin how to fuck me up,
but his train of thinking's derailed, thinking of which mods dick to suck,
now ill split his thoughts like protozoa so this bitch can think twice,
bout poppin off at the mouth and endin up like battered wives.
*Masticate-to chew or eat
*Cognition-knowledge
No disrespect to Ice in this shit, it jsut went with the line yo.
So Wise can see this shit. I dont know if he found it yet.
He ain't working his way to wack..Kid's status is complete
& Yeah..he's inefected..
...........................Killa's gonna die from AIDS next week!
Killa Kid's got i's 4 talent..peep his sig..not that much sight
And tha only thing going for Killa..is he's dick sucking height
Get ya facts right..this ant's on tha bottom of tha food chain
Forgets punches & personals..use ya brain..
....................I don't blame tha kid..he even loses his name
Went from one herb crew to tha other..shit kid..whats next?
Its sad..in that wack of a crew..& he's even far from tha best!
U can't even impress tha n00bs..even makes them look strong
This cheerleader's on tha side..all this queer needs is pom-poms
His winning streak is not long..actually it dosen't even exsist
Da_Killa_Kid<--That right there's enough for you to be dissed!
Shit..catch my drift? Killa Kid's quality is gone like tha wind
Don't doubt it..Cuz his biggest punches are smaller than lint!
& Tha only way this whore is growing..is horizonal bitch tits
Cuz like Bob in Fight Club...
...........................Killa dosen't have tha Balls for sickness!
Aight..to get punches..peep his sig, name, crew..etc..
No herb votes!!! good luck
#1............
Line 3 was suppose to say..... Peep his Avy.....
Vote....I'll return them with honest ones
Da_Killa_Kid
This bitch been on my jock for weeks beggin for altercation,
in realization, I ain't Ice ill take ya lyrics and masticate* em,
Nice flow.. nice punch 2/3
treatin Wise like masturbation, quick to beat wit my hand,
its like second nature, id pound him everyday cause i can,
That was ight.. 1½/3
have em fucked up worse than kanye west spittin his shit through wires,
Fake ass gangsta, crash course breaks him down like Bone and Mariah,
lol nice.. 2/3
This yungin read a few books, now Kaos he's got cognition*,
He's, fake and we know Wise Sways votes for vet attention,
lol nice personal.. 2/3
Verbal sickness is my affliction, and infection will begin,
When wise achieves the fact that his Wit is at its end,
that was nice.. 2/3
Now Ways been talkin shit, claimin that he's been ready for the brawl,
Bullshit the last time this muthafucka elevated was at the mall,
lol nice punch.. 3/3
buying thongs wit his momma thinkin how to fuck me up,
but his train of thinking's derailed, thinking of which mods dick to suck,
ight.. 2ed line could have been reworded 1/3
now ill split his thoughts like protozoa so this bitch can think twice,
bout poppin off at the mouth and endin up like battered wives.
lol nice one.. good way to end the battle.. 2½/3
16/24
nice spit man.. no doubt..
Wise Ways
He ain't working his way to wack..Kid's status is complete
& Yeah..he's inefected..
...........................Killa's gonna die from AIDS next week!
weak.. punch could have been better.. 1/3
Killa Kid's got i's 4 talent..peep his sig..not that much sight
And tha only thing going for Killa..is he's dick sucking height
i wasnt feelin the punch but you could have used the set up better.. 1/3
Get ya facts right..this ant's on tha bottom of tha food chain
Forgets punches & personals..use ya brain..
....................I don't blame tha kid..he even loses his name
nice... 2½/3
Went from one herb crew to tha other..shit kid..whats next?
Its sad..in that wack of a crew..& he's even far from tha best!
lol nice dog.. 3/3
U can't even impress tha n00bs..even makes them look strong
This cheerleader's on tha side..all this queer needs is pom-poms
lol damn.. nice one again.. 3/3
His winning streak is not long..actually it dosen't even exsist
Da_Killa_Kid<--That right there's enough for you to be dissed!
lol nice man.. 2/3
Shit..catch my drift? Killa Kid's quality is gone like tha wind
Don't doubt it..Cuz his biggest punches are smaller than lint!
that was ight.. 1½/3
& Tha only way this whore is growing..is horizonal bitch tits
Cuz like Bob in Fight Club...
...........................Killa dosen't have tha Balls for sickness!
lol that was nice.. 2/3
16/24
Nice spit man.. i wasnt really feelin the 1st few lines.. but you picked up strong.. nice..
Text Standards
Punchlines - Wise
Multis - Kid
Flow - Kid
Creativity - Wise
WordPlay - Nobody really had enough strong wordplay for me to pick.. tie..
VOTE
Wise[it was a tie butt.....]
I Voted for Wise cuz I Like his verse more.. it was more enjoying, and i was feelin his punchlines more and punches are what should win a textbatlle..
this was a good battle.. cant really tell whos gonna win in the long run.. but hit up my battles doe.. check the sig..
MADEvil...
damn yall should have said 150post.. well if i get that before this battle is done.. ill make my post really count.. =\
wow nice battle guys.....
This bitch been on my jock for weeks beggin for altercation,
in realization, I ain't Ice ill take ya lyrics and masticate* em,
^ok thats a fine opener...not too personal...good punch nice vocab...
treatin Wise like masturbation, quick to beat wit my hand,
its like second nature, id pound him everyday cause i can,
^this line makes you sound gay....sorry
have em fucked up worse than kanye west spittin his shit through wires,
Fake ass gangsta, crash course breaks him down like Bone and Mariah,
^nice wordplay this is a good spit from you kill
This yungin read a few books, now Kaos he's got cognition*,
He's, fake and we know Wise Sways votes for vet attention,
^not the best rhyme good punch effective line
Verbal sickness is my affliction, and infection will begin,
When wise achieves the fact that his Wit is at its end,
^fine personal good play off the crew
Now Ways been talkin shit, claimin that he's been ready for the brawl,
Bullshit the last time this muthafucka elevated was at the mall,
^meh played i spit it before...its ok though....
buying thongs wit his momma thinkin how to fuck me up,
but his train of thinking's derailed, thinking of which mods dick to suck,
^good punch intrestin that he would buy thongs with his mom ahah
now ill split his thoughts like protozoa so this bitch can think twice,
bout poppin off at the mouth and endin up like battered wife
^nice closer very good killa i'm impressed......
He ain't working his way to wack..Kid's status is complete
& Yeah..he's inefected..
...........................Killa's gonna die from AIDS next week!
^aight then good opener some personal and a punch
Killa Kid's got i's 4 talent..peep his sig..not that much sight
And tha only thing going for Killa..is he's dick sucking height
^bahhahha nice play off the avy..or just a punch whatever...
Get ya facts right..this ant's on tha bottom of tha food chain
Forgets punches & personals..use ya brain..
....................I don't blame tha kid..he even loses his name
^meh ok punch i didn't really feel this one....
Went from one herb crew to tha other..shit kid..whats next?
Its sad..in that wack of a crew..& he's even far from tha best!
^simplistic but effective
U can't even impress tha n00bs..even makes them look strong
This cheerleader's on tha side..all this queer needs is pom-poms
^hahaha nice punch second time i laughed this battle
His winning streak is not long..actually it dosen't even exsist
Da_Killa_Kid<--That right there's enough for you to be dissed!
^played concept punch but its whatever
Shit..catch my drift? Killa Kid's quality is gone like tha wind
Don't doubt it..Cuz his biggest punches are smaller than lint!
^l like it thoughtful good
& Tha only way this whore is growing..is horizonal bitch tits
Cuz like Bob in Fight Club...
...........................Killa dosen't have tha Balls for sickness!
^lol where the fuck did fight club come from anyway nice shit this was tough but i think that the vocabulary used by killa Kid gave him a little bit to much false sense of security and lessend his punches just enough for kaos to sneek in there with 2 really nice punches and take this...no hate peace guys....check this out...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110264
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shit this battle was ill
kid had some nice vocab along wit some nice punches....
wise had ill punches and nice personal long wit wordplay
vote-wise
hehe, i really liked this battle, both of you actually had me laughing. It's nice to see that their are atleast some good battlers in the frontlines. Can this battle be decided by punches...no. Wise did have funnier ones, but killa had the complexity. Flow...both were easy reads, didn't get lost. Personals...Wise ways does get my vote here...but personals can't decide a battle alone. So I am going to judge this basically on the factor of enjoyment...and this is why Wise Ways gets my vote. Great job though Killa Kid. You elevate every battle...imma keep my eye on you.
/v - Wise Ways (Enjoyed the verse more)
Line of the battle...
"U can't even impress tha n00bs..even makes them look strong
This cheerleader's on tha side..all this queer needs is pom-poms"
This bitch been on my jock for weeks beggin for altercation,
in realization, I ain't Ice ill take ya lyrics and masticate* em,
ehh ok, decent vocab
treatin Wise like masturbation, quick to beat wit my hand,
its like second nature, id pound him everyday cause i can,
played and ...whack
have em fucked up worse than kanye west spittin his shit through wires,
Fake ass gangsta, crash course breaks him down like Bone and Mariah,
weak attempt
This yungin read a few books, now Kaos he's got cognition*,
He's, fake and we know Wise Sways votes for vet attention,
dope line dawg
Verbal sickness is my affliction, and infection will begin,
When wise achieves the fact that his Wit is at its end,
played
Now Ways been talkin shit, claimin that he's been ready for the brawl,
Bullshit the last time this muthafucka elevated was at the mall,
played again
buying thongs wit his momma thinkin how to fuck me up,
but his train of thinking's derailed, thinking of which mods dick to suck,
played also. weak too
now ill split his thoughts like protozoa so this bitch can think twice,
bout poppin off at the mouth and endin up like battered wives.
decent closer
He ain't working his way to wack..Kid's status is complete
& Yeah..he's inefected..
...........................Killa's gonna die from AIDS next week!
decent personal
Killa Kid's got i's 4 talent..peep his sig..not that much sight
And tha only thing going for Killa..is he's dick sucking height
kinda played, but ok
Get ya facts right..this ant's on tha bottom of tha food chain
Forgets punches & personals..use ya brain..
weak
....................I don't blame tha kid..he even loses his name
Went from one herb crew to tha other..shit kid..whats next?
Its sad..in that wack of a crew..& he's even far from tha best!
decent personal and punch
U can't even impress tha n00bs..even makes them look strong
This cheerleader's on tha side..all this queer needs is pom-poms
nice
His winning streak is not long..actually it dosen't even exsist
Da_Killa_Kid<--That right there's enough for you to be dissed!
nice personal
Shit..catch my drift? Killa Kid's quality is gone like tha wind
Don't doubt it..Cuz his biggest punches are smaller than lint!
ok
& Tha only way this whore is growing..is horizonal bitch tits
Cuz like Bob in Fight Club...
...........................Killa dosen't have tha Balls for sickness!
pretty nice
WW gets this, he had a nice compact verse filled wioth metas, punches and personals. Da Kid had too many played lines. Try and be more creative with ya punches and metas.
Please drop an honest vote here. I took the time for yall http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110513
Uppin Votes
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I'll return honest votes...
So vote!!!
Uppin For Votes
Wise.. took this one
Punches-both came hard, That "infected next week"opener was Ill,Some punches were a lil played by both, Wises closer really gave him the upperhand
Wordplay-Both showed good creativity, Barely any flaw, good use of Meta's wordplay was pretty much a tie,
flow-I Think wise took flow because he was constanly hitten w/ punches, which made the flow Pretty good, KK had a nice flow to,, as I said both were pretty much flawless but Wise's creativity did it for him
Structure-Wise's structure was kinda hard to read( his opener & close) So I think that KK Had a cleaner structure..
Personal-once again both came hard, but i felt wise brought a lil more to the table and had more humour throught his shit
Overall...this was a good battle, But Wise Just came constinent w/ his punches & personals, No beef,,keep elevatin
V/ Wise Ways
Please return the favor and honestly judge n vote on this
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108038
Sorry bout the free post...........
Honestly Judge and vote on this also
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110833
..............thanks for tha votes guys
#5..lets finish this off
punches- Wise (harder more to the point more creativity an comical)
personals- Wise(he almost had one in every bar, and they were quality)
flo- Wise(easliy....Kid was very stretched...it took for ever to end a bar)
structure- Wise(alot easier to read, better Format)
Multi's- Kid(quantity of them....wise had better quality, But I'll help the Kid)
Meti4's- Wise(close....but Kid's meti4's were too long)
overall Wise
Kid really tried in this one...but he really aint there yet...