10 lines blind spit
normal voting rules
this is also my check in
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10 lines blind spit
normal voting rules
this is also my check in
will you check in so i can start typin' this up
oh yeah, modifying the rules, we both agreed this would be a twenty minute blind spit, so c'mon man check in
sry...dog.............................checkin..... .....................
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First lesson you gotta learn don't let the battle be set up by me
Look at the title, even it doubt's your chances of your victory
Seems this kid is only runnin' around in a circle only with corners
You must be drunk, too bad they don't have an avi of homer
If you say somethin' bout my name, your wild like evil kanevil
Dissin' my name in a battle is almost as old as dissin' feeble's
Kickin' this out you might just want to stay out in your garage
'Cause these punches so hot, they leave you stuck in a mirage
You're tellin' me to look up, only 'cause you just left the airport
You think you'll drop bombs, if you use that line as your last resort
done
good luch
(just so you know)
"that line" is the one in his sig and if you look above the votes, you'll get the first line
that was pretty tight, not the best ive seen tho....keep it up man.....tight as hell
^^agiht no D/R before i post........lol
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You’ve ‘seriously’ leaking blood… so now you’ve had a lose-of-flow
I’d tell you to “go home“… but your ass wouldn’t know were-to-go..
For a good verse… punches that are….Amusing-the-key
..I see your fired up….. We’ll pretty AMP’ed to losin-to-me (his names AMP)
Given u 20 minutes in writing…. Well dog… how far-u-get.. (20 min deadline)
lookin at your record…hmm... Im guessin you haven’t even started-yet (8-17 somthin bad like that)
To make it your dealth official…. I got a few more (I)’s-to-dot
.. I think your PLAIN bad….. Not still.. just stuck in writers-block..
Send u well dressed…. But im conviced… nothing will “Suit“-you
…With all the cars in your sig… its kinda sad… No crew will Recruit-you…
~Sonned
lol, im not a d/r voter...i cant even vote ennit? lol, you was pretty tight too...this gon be a good one...
amp you got murdred!!!
your verse was pretty simple, nothing really that landed hard, an you had hardly any wordplay!!!
virtuso, you had nice multis, wordpay, harder hitting punches!!
those were probs ur best bars!!Quote:
You’ve ‘seriously’ leaking blood… so now you’ve had a lose-of-flow
Send u well dressed…. But im conviced… nothing will “Suit“-you
both verses were aight, amp u had an ok flow, sum ok punches, sum played....vituoso u had a good flow, lil betta punches, i think u came more original, ender was blah though. vote-vituoso
someone explain the 20 minute deadline thing
it made no sense
:: confused :: and i wasn't original?
okay whatever
Giving my vote to Amp, i think he had a cleaner verse. Some of Virtuoso's shit made no sense...Well, it made sense. But it wasn't a punch, it was just..blah. He has cars in his personal. Yes, and your point? Amp through punches that were clearly punches to me, clean verse, stuck to structure and the basics and that got him the win.
Vote Amp
Drop a vote here if you would
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109567
Ok Amp gets my vote becuz he had better punches, wordplay and flow so Amp gets my vote peace.
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Virtuoso won cause i didnt get the utha niggas rym play and vote on this battle it hot
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/show...64#post1129964
Thanks for the votes Uppin(1)
and Meters I don't know about virtuoso but I'll check out your batte
i think virtuoso ripped amp's verse it was pretty plain no offense but it's simple to see who won
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damn i aint bein gay and just sayin dat ya'll sucked like the other people do, but ya'll sucked. i wish i battled guys like u, damn.....well da first guy's was too structured can't get a flow like that really, u gotta get multi's and your meta's are mad gay.......i cant vot but the second guy won even his was real bad too, but he said made an attemp to make punches and maybe had a multi or two in there, but when u spicify your punch, by sayin (amp's his name) your gay, so ya'll sucked, but i cant vote anyway so fuck it
thanks for teh comment PP...ummm.....smh ...........
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i think it was a pretty close battle but virtuoso took this one...he had more creative punches and personals but only by a little...my only complaint is virtuoso you use too many....(parenthesis) and """"" marks....just type your verse straight out...people will find that they like your structure much better and flow
hey vir...you forgot to poll on my battle bro...and amp will you drop an honest vote as well for the link in my sig?
Close battle..
I think Virtuoso took it slightly.. worse flow but more creative punches.. witty lines..
No need to explain the shit tho..
Amp.. good structure/flow throughout.. a tight verse, but a little less creative.. lacked wordplay that V had really..
Real close battle but...
Vote - Virtuoso
Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110373
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Amp had da average flow, metaphors, and decent structure compared to Virtuouso in my eyes.
favorite line:
Kickin' this out you might just want to stay out in your garage
'Cause these punches so hot, they leave you stuck in a mirage
Virtuoso wasn't too much focusing on any of his structure but his punches and metaphors still gave da nigga da vote from me.
favorite line:
Virtuoso fav. line:
Kickin' this out you might just want to stay out in your garage
'Cause these punches so hot, they leave you stuck in a mirage
sorry i ment to put my vote down too.
vote=Virtuoso
check dis shit out and reply
AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=109978
thanks
agiht 1 more to end it...................
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.. drop your link so i can return the honest vote
pretty close battle but in the end virtuoso took this one...he won with more creative punches and personals, not by much but he did...virt drop the """ and ((())) write ya verse straight out, itll fix ya struct. amp u came iight but not enough to take em, elevate then try again
anyway, my vote - virt