cutastraphe vs lyric (round 2)

no crew, hate, dr, or bs
all explained votes
10-16 line limit
verses due hour after u check in
i'm in

Check check checkin in innnnnnnnnn. lalalalala do wa dee da. k, Blind spit? 1 hour? Is that what I'm understandin?

yeh nigga blind spit!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

You a Middleweight? Yeah right kid to me your still a newb
Jus a fuckin preteen thinks he can rap, yet his Avy's Dr. Doom
You battlin a vet, and shit son.... you aint even worthy
Your raps worthless, I'm in the 'clear', you'll never merk me (merky water)
You need to elevate kid, cause your in negative digits
If I ever saw ya face, treat it like a hottie cause :hitit2:
I KOd you in our first meeting and I'm sensing a repeat
Cause like your name, you winnin would be a real cutastraphe
You still rhymin with played shit, like fag remarks and sex jokes
I'd say elevate kid, but you standin upside down, theres no hope
I'll drown out your flow, like when you freestyle under water
You'll beat me, yeah when dopeness means spittin retarded

lyric ya skillz is INVISIBLE, like my STATUS is/(look)
ya kno way LYRICAL even if ya split NOUNS with ADJECTIVES/
CUT eats EMCEE'S raw, just picture how a SAVAGE ANIMAL is/(ferocious)
i lost to u first round, but u played ya WORDPLAY-out on the FIRST punch/
now ya so quick to use FILLER, i'd think ya were takin a DENTIST to lunch/(he uses alotta filler lines)
i'ma smack ya to the FENCES, like Ike n Tina on the PICKET/(PF old ass drama show on when they were togetha)
talkin bout BITCHES only numbers ya eva see are TYPIN ya DIGITS/(herb!!)
WINS are INCONCLUSIVE, plus i don't even kno how many ya got/??
pull outa MACHETE size GLOCK, ya still nothin of a :BIG SHOT:/
u hard? i think not, i think ya GAY and WINKIN quite often/
suckin so much DICK, NIGGA i think ya shuld try FLOSSIN!!/
get a new STYLE that's AWESOME, u pop rock freak beast/
ya needa FLEE the scene and gather up ya STREET dreams/




i'm out this damn bitch was in my ear!!
lol gl

Uppin this #1. Drop a link and an honest vote please

uppin #2. Damn hit this up, its a goiod battle....

nice battle shame i cant vote tho. ohhhh well......

uppin for da 3rd time. Not one vote yet...........

i think lyric got this one.....cuts shit flowed nicely but was a little mesed up from all those perentheses and explanations and shit...u shouldnt have to really explain your punches much....to me lyric hit harder with his punches and i really liked the incorporation of the i'd hit it smiley, that was funny.

vote: lyric

good battle guys

I'm gonna agree with phoenixx on thiz one... The explanations after each punch were fuckin' anoyin' so it didn't read good. Smiley shit was funny indeed but shit like that wouldn't do the trick in a real battle... Lucky he had some other nice punchez. Cutastraphe had some nice vocabulary but wasn't up 2 lyric's skill...
vote: lyric

plz drop a vote on thiz...:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623

aight yeh well sum lines ya wuldn't of gotten like the picket fences shiit if i didn't put it in there and i didn't think it wuld screw up my verse that much. but the otha ish after was just to add sum flava. i won't do that anymore!! 2-0 i think symone forgot to poll....peace

K this is uppin #4. Please drop ya honest votes here

like others lyric got this 1 cut u dont really need 2 explain yo shit that was ennoyin....lyric came harder n e way man had nicer flow punches and shit the id hit it bit was sum funny shit

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Last uppin, come on lets get some honest votes here

aight...
lyrics verse i was feelin a lot wit the punches,flow, and the smiley haha....cutastraphe's was aight the explanations were wack and punches werent hittin hard...tight battle tho...both came wit a nice verse but lyrics came harder n punches take it...return the favor..thanks 1..........http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110270

Lyric- Vote

You Had Nice pUnches With Great Flow. Ok Personals Ok Wordplay Ok Vocab Ok Verse. I Liked You Structure That Was Nice Structure...

C- You Had Ok Punches With Good Flow, Ok Personals Nice Wordplay Ok Vocab Bad Structure. Dont CAPS Your PUnches, And Dont Put / At The End If YOu Plan ON TO Aagain Ya Heard?\

Punches- Lyric
Flow- Lyric
Wordplay- C
Personals- Ehh
Vocab- Tie
Vote- Lyric

Hit My Battle Up With Honest Votes VS. MIke Millz

In this battle ya'll were close, but...

Lyric: Ur verse was nice. I'm actually thinkin' I could learn a few things from ya, even though you just dissed my other verse. Ur flow was good, but kinda choppy at times. U got ur point across and had some good personals. Nice metas and all. Wordplay was good.

Cutastrophe: Ur verse was nice too, but it was like a step down from Lyric's. Ur explainin' shit was wack, but u can't even consider shit like that in a vote... that's kinda gay. Ur flow was beter cause it was slightly more consistent. Okay personals, but his was better. Nice metas, but that was about the same for both of u. Wordplay was good.

Vote: Lyric (Close)

bitch got reopened, uppin the first of my new 5 ups to get this closed again

LOL IT IS!! i thought u got this already. basically did, but i'ma come back at you. for round 3 no doubt.

the first thing, is the flow, lyric yours was pretty consistant, set ya punches up decent... Cut, yours was ok, but the cap's shit n explaining throws ya a bit.... also you had some ok punches, but the execution could have been better... lyric, your punches were better, harder hittin and more consistant, with better personals... overall my vote goes Lyric, just the overall verse was more thought out, easier to read and harder hittin....vote=Lyric..... .......decent battle...

uppin #2. POLL YOUR VOTES PLEASE! THANKS

Uppin #3. Dev poll your vote please.

uppin #4. Come on guys..uppin for the close again

come on now uppin this last time...drop an honest vote here guys