10 lines
u drop first
check in then u got 20 minutes
good luck ..........
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10 lines
u drop first
check in then u got 20 minutes
good luck ..........
wait...did u change your name from youngthug or something...??...hit me up......
here it is, 10 minute key...
This kids been laughed at ever since he made-his-verse
‘Him creating the link’ is the only time his ‘name-is-first’
I called u out cause I wanted an easy win, why would u test-veterans?
‘I’ll call u ill’ only because ‘I find laughter to be the best-medicine’
‘Bone spitter’? this kids gay he wants to grow up to be a ‘male Jenna-Jamieson’
Your lyrics are awful kid, shit even newbies find it be betta-plain-then-him
I’m ‘multi tasking’ while writing this verse, jus to show not much-is-needed
You’re a ‘femcee you fag‘, ‘unlike many men’ this kids will ‘blush-when-heated’
I’m gonna kill this kid easily, your nothing, shit I can even leave thunder-shook’
Being stepped on’ is the only time this fag is ‘under-stood’
a shit man i dint think you were gonna battle i started a new one and gota go now but i will come back to this and get some votes in sorry man but i gota run...
tomorow before this time fo shure
lmao.....wtf.....i had 20 minutes to write a key...now its your turn...hurry up today before 6.......its a key battle.....
6:40 is this a joke.....come on man.....lets go..i want my first win to be a ko..not a no show.....
alright this is a joke whatever man i told u what happen i have a life mi had to go out i just got your message i was gonna wait till after work but ill take my 20 minutes now
Listen to this CAT, its crazy but i'll call u up like pussy
check out under multi..you aint a vet ya still a newbie
im laughin hystericaly, yo favorite actor is Ron Jeremy
my lines are short and plain?yo verse is plain and shitty
I cant beleive this kid, what you thought id know show
yo lines dint rhyme nor flow, your drop aint worth a KO
you must be the one gay fan,cause commin in you blow
your mom n dad disowned ya,why?yo tried to rape yo bro
fuck this bitch im done with you this aint somthing false i won its true
your whole lifes gone downhill, your slidding and still dont have a clue
a little over 20 minutes
This kids been laughed at ever since he made-his-verse
‘Him creating the link’ is the only time his ‘name-is-first’
played to all hell man
I called u out cause I wanted an easy win, why would u test-veterans?
‘I’ll call u ill’ only because ‘I find laughter to be the best-medicine’
YOu aint a vet firstly, second line is good
‘Bone spitter’? this kids gay he wants to grow up to be a ‘male Jenna-Jamieson’
Your lyrics are awful kid, shit even newbies find it be betta-plain-then-him
played
I’m ‘multi tasking’ while writing this verse, jus to show not much-is-needed
You’re a ‘femcee you fag‘, ‘unlike many men’ this kids will ‘blush-when-heated’
refrain from using your own name. Gay shit is played
I’m gonna kill this kid easily, your nothing, shit I can even leave thunder-shook’
Being stepped on’ is the only time this fag is ‘under-stood’
Heard the thunder line before, ok second line
Listen to this CAT, its crazy but i'll call u up like pussy
check out under multi..you aint a vet ya still a newbie
played first line, ok personals in second
im laughin hystericaly, yo favorite actor is Ron Jeremy
my lines are short and plain?yo verse is plain and shitty
kinda whack, and doesn't rhyme
I cant beleive this kid, what you thought id know show
yo lines dint rhyme nor flow, your drop aint worth a KO
ehh ok I guess
you must be the one gay fan,cause commin in you blow
your mom n dad disowned ya,why?yo tried to rape yo bro
kinda creative but still played a bit
fuck this bitch im done with you this aint somthing false i won its true
your whole lifes gone downhill, your slidding and still dont have a clue
not bad
Bone takes this, he had some ok punches and personals. Multi came with some played lines. Keep elevatin man, yall be dope sumday.
Please take the time to hit this up with honest votes guys. I took the time here
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110084
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Uppin Need Votes Please. .................................................. .....................................
Umm... hard to call really.. a good battle...
Multi.. a good verse, nice punches in there as well as wordplay and metas.. 'understood/medicine' lines..
Flow wasn't up to standard tho.. and there were only two lines that stood out as original..
Bonespitter.. structure/flow was on point throughout.. altho I wasn't feelin the verse overall too much.. kinda basic at times..
A few nice parts, but generally average.. not much in the way of some good metas etc..
Personal punches were good, but try and add something really creative..
Good battle but..
Vote - Multi Talented
Return the favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110373
i think dat lyric voted 4 bonespitter juss cuz bonez a flyweight..datz not rite...
but i think multi plainly took this battle....
i think multi took da opener and the closer....
da battle overall waz weak....but multi takez it for ok punches...but a wak flow
both gotta werk on ya structure...
but from mah point of view....multi talented takes it
punches: none...but if i had 2.....multi
humour: tie...both sadly hilarious
opener: multi
clozer: multi
vote: multi talented
n if yall vote....make an honest vote......
Multi
This kids been laughed at ever since he made-his-verse
‘Him creating the link’ is the only time his ‘name-is-first’
So-So
I called u out cause I wanted an easy win, why would u test-veterans?
‘I’ll call u ill’ only because ‘I find laughter to be the best-medicine’
1st line was wack becuase wins mean shit..its who u battle, 2nd line was decent so put together it was iight punch
‘Bone spitter’? this kids gay he wants to grow up to be a ‘male Jenna-Jamieson’
Your lyrics are awful kid, shit even newbies find it be betta-plain-then-him
Wack
I’m ‘multi tasking’ while writing this verse, jus to show not much-is-needed
You’re a ‘femcee you fag‘, ‘unlike many men’ this kids will ‘blush-when-heated’
Wack
I’m gonna kill this kid easily, your nothing, shit I can even leave thunder-shook’
Being stepped on’ is the only time this fag is ‘under-stood’
Decent
Bone
Listen to this CAT, its crazy but i'll call u up like pussy
check out under multi..you aint a vet ya still a newbie
played and blah personal
im laughin hystericaly, yo favorite actor is Ron Jeremy
my lines are short and plain?yo verse is plain and shitty
Dont rhyme at all.. wizzak
I cant beleive this kid, what you thought id know show
yo lines dint rhyme nor flow, your drop aint worth a KO
Blah... dont feed kiddo
you must be the one gay fan,cause commin in you blow
your mom n dad disowned ya,why?yo tried to rape yo bro
Creative but not a hard punch
fuck this bitch im done with you this aint somthing false i won its true
your whole lifes gone downhill, your slidding and still dont have a clue
You just ripped this homo...but what you dont know is u wack too
thinkin you all that and tough....really your the one wit out a clue
Overall - Bone won this wit harder punches...weak battle
I saw better battlez (not my own but still...) I think multi took it although he used some played linez... Still it was better to read and more enjoyable so...
vote - Multi-talented
now plz vote on thiz:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110377
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109623
good battle...can't vote, but I'll give my opinion...
BEST LINE
I call you Ill cuz laughter is the best medicine
BEST PERSONAL
...not a vet you still a newbie
overall bones flow was better and kept to the point
Uppin For Votes .................................................. ..................................
I gotta give this to Bone by the slightest of margins...
Only and ONLY cuz he threw the better directed and because of that, more effective punches.
Multi relied on his name, and kept trying to bunch his punches by blending multiple words for flow and rhyme...
I think that hurt ya some cuz I felt your concentration was on flow, not on hitting hard.
Real close, but for punches that landed, Bonespitter.
uppin 3rd time need votes plz ............. /?//////////////////////////////////////////
uppin uppin uppin 4................................................. .................................................. ....
still uppin need 2 more votes .................................................. .......................
lmao this is comical.....very very comical.....im not a vet...sure...cause my post count is low...your garbage kid...i have batttled way better.....voters are garbage...this is funny......kid didnt have multis...metas...wordplay...EVEN DECENT punches......i mean jesus christ......w/e
up.....#2.....by the way......this kid had two days to write a verse.....i had about 15 minutes...but i still kicked his ass.....im asking for a real vet to vote...one whos knows what a multi is...what a meta is.....and what real wordplay is......
uppin for the shit i mentioned above......(vets.....who knwo what true elements are...IE: multis, (hence multi talented), wordplay, and metas are.......and others
easy there playa dont get all pissed youre a joke complainin let the voters vote
your still a newbie and a rookie .. .. . if you have a probleme so what and it took me 20 some minutes to key that i dont prewrite if u are sayin i do dont battle me !!!!
i had another battle started right after yours cause you werent chekin in or dropin
oh well lets try to finish this poll
last up so please someone vote on this.............................................. ......
if you dint know but everyone that votes has over 100 posts so they must know something and I got the vote from B2K wich has over 150 battles so quit wining