14linez MAX....no crew....d.r
blind spit...
afta both chek in.....30 minutez
if both cheked in but da odaz not there wen da 2nd one chekz in.....not a DQ
chek in..............9:53 eastern
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14linez MAX....no crew....d.r
blind spit...
afta both chek in.....30 minutez
if both cheked in but da odaz not there wen da 2nd one chekz in.....not a DQ
chek in..............9:53 eastern
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word checkin in.......lets do this.........................
ite chek yall...chek dis....no need 2 go datt hard....loll
he dope?!..dis ni99a duz more "biting" than Mike Tison in da ring
after i knock him wit mah punch he'll b on hiz knees, praisin' hiz king(me!)
he thinks hez tough behind his comp.... but he a pussy on da field
mah punches break thru hiz armor...n hiz "heavy weight" shield
yall herd "i wish i may, wish i mite, make my dream com tru 2nite?"
well he did it n had a nightmare bout me...n afta dat he neva saw lite
i merked five headz....but i got one of them winz cuz of a DQ....
but i'll get mah 5th true win....and dat win will be from you!
go 2 bed early......and wish dat u see the light of tomorrow
i mite get u first..dun wrry..ill b wit ur mom 2 share tha sorrow
shyt, i fuqed ur mom n' wen i saw u..i knew dat it waz a mistake
speakin of hurr....2dayz our anniversary...but i left hurr..srry 4 no cake!
**for 1st line.....mike tison bit holly..sutinz ear off wen he waz boxin
this kids head is like his occupation constantly knottin up...
took a fist from every MC on RB so the abrasions begin to erupt..
your a killer emcee? guess now we know why tupac really died..
he saw u used him in your avy and decided better dead than alive..
your too young to take me on wait till all your letters grow Up..
if you spit like you talk then you must inturn swallow like you suck...
This kid couldn't punch tough if he attached hulk gloves to his wrist...
believe me dawg i don't need a single Dynasty soldier to easily take this...
you prolly pre-wrote do you even know what a good personal no? go fig..
i could tell i was gonna add to my win column by lookin at your sig...
when i move you move just like that?...cause i'm stickin and movin kall me ali..
thought i needed alot of hardcore punches to take this but i ended up just doing a key..
uppin this for votes drop links and i'll do what i can man word peace out.....
ok then uppin for votes i know lots of motherfuckers are on fl right now c mon guys
ite upp upp upppinnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn
Under takes this. He had some original shit and some of his lines had me rollin. Good, punches, personals, and metas, multis. 2pac line had me rollin.
Killer, you was alright, but you came with that played sex joke shit. Keep elevating dawg.
Please drop an honest vote here. Thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110047
uppin this to close guys c m0n man i want more battles lets close this one.........
aight my vote goes to the underrated because his verse was overally better he had better punches and his punches hit harder
my vote goes to the underrated
underrated took this with more complex punches and personals................killer's verse was just too basic and it was kinda choppy.......underrated had the better flow and structure and he took this battle fairly easily...
Wordplay: UnderRated
flow: UnderRated
Multis: None
Metas: UnderRated
Punches: UnderRated
personals: UnderRated
fianl vote: UnderRated
Under Rated came much harder then killer Emcee
if i cld vote id vote under,flow and structure was beta.both had go punches but under rated hit harder.
vote.........Under rated
under took dis one cuz he had better everything.....lol.........also sex lines are played out killler
vote=underrated
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109267
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alright uppin too close this for the second time drop a decent vote so that new vote thing doesn't ahve to reopen my battles plz thank you leave a link if you need agood vote..............
leys close this people before i get dqed because i already had 2 battles and this reopened....
Another pretty good battle i'm gonna have to vote on.
Killer Emcee had some good punches, metaphors, but lacked a little originality because dem I fuck your mama lines are played out as fuck, next time man try focusing jus on him and no one else, but overall you did good and keep elevating.
favorite line:
he dope?!..dis ni99a duz more "biting" than Mike Tison in da ring
after i knock him wit mah punch he'll b on hiz knees, praisin' hiz king
Underrated had some pretty hot unique rhymes da were LOL like hell, da punches were damaging bad which da structure coulda been a lot better, but both did o.k.
but Underrated striked back much... much... harder than Killer Emcee. Work on ya structure and keep elevating nigga.
vote=Underrated (reasons explained above)
place an honest vote on ma battle (AK-mixa vs. Cashvillin) at da link below.
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=109978