u post 1st
no drs/crew
or any other gay crap
peace :thumbup:
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u post 1st
no drs/crew
or any other gay crap
peace :thumbup:
1more rule u forgot 2put!............................................. ............
Drop by 2mora at 12midnight GmT
Im gona Check in now but not sure when im gona drop!
i only have 10 mins so i'll post 1st..
First off, I’ll battle u fist-2-fist or lyrically/
cuz evidently I’ll literally break that glass jaw eventually/
And secondly,
u must be “Dizzy” swinging those “Parkinson’s Disease” lines all crazy/
only proven to me that your flows too “Shaky” /
Not to mention,
your verse’s “worthless” like “cells without the nucleus in cell division”/
in major need of revision, because by the looks of things I’ll win by knockout instead of decision/
Cuz clearly your skill lacks,
your more “artificial” than “juice lacking natural extracts”/
“blind” 2 facts, of me winning, like “faulty retinas without the assistance of contacts”/
so I’m ganna rip out your heart through a cavity they call your thorax/
to leave you “bleed more” than wounded “hemophiliacs”/
And Dizzy,
Its time 2 make u fold cuz the only “clutch” u had on me in here/
Got “blown” like an “over “torqued transmission” in 1st gear/
This is sincere,
Cuz if hip hop had a “physical form” 2 harm it/
even if u “shanked” it, your weak skills still wouldn’t “cut it”/
I mean,
Your imaginary fabrication of victory I’ll turn 2 a dream/
By destroying your amateur composer, like the safety of a New Yorker from a terrorist regime/
Just face it,
U “suck” worse than “females without saliva glands”/
With my verse “twisting” u more than “double helix DNA strands”/
B-cuz Visibly,
I’m "splitting" your "cranium" and "dividing" performance ability/
“Ripping” your “brain” in “2 halves” so u “think twice” to battle-Me/
:shoot:
peace :thumbup:
Look nephew didnt hav time 2dropp 2nyt but ill drop sumtime on wednesday!dnt worry iwontt be a no-show!
man this guy prob won this battle he has great punch lines yo can someone vote on this battle
http://]http://www.rapbattles.com/fo...64#post1129964
yo Mc shadow how cud he of already won if i aint dropped dats gota be a D/R................................................. .
aight nephew im about 2 flow.............................................. ...........................checkity check in
Now dis is my chance 2teach u a lesson,
Ijus red ur verse damn u aint impressin./
u hav shocked me in many ways,
read my flow its like a fire a burnin beginin 2 blaze,
my battle records 4-8 but lossin was jus a faze!/
Ifeel sory 4 u son i herd about ur life,
Ur family startin runnin so u chased dem wiv a knife./
u caught up wiv ur mom she told u bout ur dad,she told u d truth,
she dusnt no hu he is he has no proof,
yes it was a 1nighter he went and left her no traces,
dnt be stupid thinkin of travelin the world comparin similar faces!/
luk son ur lyrics were poor ive broken them like bones at the joint,
they were like a blunt needle they were missin a point!/
ok battle......but i think its onesided......
i say knowlege took dis for nice punches n nice personalz
yo dizzy- good shyt...but u played it out by talkin bout momz n shyt...datz not tite
so mah vote goez 2 knowlege.....
punches: knowledge- he had more of them big time
flow: knowledge- it came smoother and it waz nice
structure: dizzy......knowledge- werk on it...it waz all ova da place
vote: knowledge
no hate......1
dizzy hommel dats sum week shit dawg evaluate.if i cld vote,i'd vote Knowledge. His punches hit a lot harder and his beat had more struture.dizzy hommel,bit short dawg.knowledge took da humour side as well :your verse’s “worthless” like “cells without the nucleus in cell division”/
in major need of revision, because by the looks of things I’ll win by knockout instead of decision/ dats sum good shit.my only bad point bout knowledge was he uses to many science facts.
Vote= Knowledge(if i cld vote)
Now dis is my chance 2teach u a lesson,
Ijus red ur verse damn u aint impressin./
u hav shocked me in many ways,
read my flow its like a fire a burnin beginin 2 blaze,
my battle records 4-8 but lossin was jus a faze!/
Ifeel sory 4 u son i herd about ur life,
Ur family startin runnin so u chased dem wiv a knife./
u caught up wiv ur mom she told u bout ur dad,she told u d truth,
she dusnt no hu he is she has no proof,*
yes it was a 1nighter he went and left her no traces,
dnt be stupid thinkin of travelin the world comparin similar faces!/
luk son ur lyrics were poor ive broken them like bones at the joint,
they were like a blunt needle they were missin a point!/
Correction were the * is!
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vote peeps.
Knowledge just totally killed this one, nice punches, i didnt like how you had a little thing introducing every next set of lines, but your flow was really fucking sick. Hommel it looks like your improving, but you still got a while to go, some of your lines were just fillers, and didnt really make sense. keep at it. Vote: Knowledge
hey guys, please drop a vote on this one, noone's voted yet
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110243
Whoa...
ok, Knowledge - is that an alias? style seems remarkably familiar...
but anyway I like the way you spit. Too many multi's for my taste, but you seem to work them into a nice format to set up decent punches. Advice - most cats on the site won't fell that style, change it now and you'll have a better record. Or you can stay stuck on it and take the losses with pride until you eleavte enough to hold your own, but let me tell you you're gonna get hated on for that format. I liked it.... witty and rhyme scheme was excellent.... BUT battles are about punches.
so...
Dizzy - basic structure we always see on RB, so nothin wrong there... but you're missin the punches! where's the punches at? Personals? basically you need to focus and elevate, you have potential but not showin much here. Disappointing really..
vote goes to Knowledge (Knowledge - if Dizzy would have came harder he could have merked you cuz of that style you spit, but you held this one down nice).
pz
yall hit this up w/ an honest vote, gettin mad slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=110264
thanks
Knowledge you dont need that many multis even though u did work them in well wit ya punches. multis are about 5% of battling, punchs are 50%, concentrate on them and forget about multis. you had a decent verse, punches were aight
Dizzy your struct wasnt bad, but you were lackin the punches? try to enclude personals too and make em complex wit metas. you will do alot better.
Vote - Knowledge, he came harder with his punches
uppin uppin uppin
thx to those who voted..appriciate the insight
we are being slept on bro ..u wanna cut the battle votes short?
uppin' for votes
iight...
first off... a think Knowledge is an alias... does seem familiar...
neway... Knowledge takes this... he has alot of good personals on dizzy... the parkinsons disease one... lol... funny... flow was iight... dont know about the 'And secondly' bits... sorta messed your structure...
thats the only thing dizzy took... structure... marginally... lol...
id say this was a merkin as dizzy came wiv played shit... and it didnt even hit hard...
knowledge had some good ideas... and some personals that a havent seen used on dizzy before...
merkin tbh...
v/ Knowledge...
OUT
uppin for votes...
1 more vote yall..cmon
Damn, this was a hard one.... Syke, I never really read either of yall's battles b4, but I mite start lookin out 4 knowledge! Knowledge gets my vote in this one, I liked all of ur punches, an structure was more sophisticated, I just really like this verse better than dizzy! Dizzy, you had a couple O.K. lines but def. need to elevate, The structure, an flow really wasnt that good at all, just improve!
Vote~~Knowledge
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my last upneed 1more vote
Ok my bad, i guess i didnt explain myself enough!
Knowledge Dizzy
Flo~B C
Structure~A C
Punches~ A B
Metas~B C
Multis~WERENT REALLY ANY
Personals~C C
Overall~B C
vote=Knowledge
I just think dat knowlege's style an flo was way better, theres not much more to say thna that. He cam harder, an i like how he was cocky between bars, dat was tite, Dizzy, u just really didnt come as good as i thought u could. I just lookked at a few of ur other battles, an i have to say that uve had better, but i still dont think they were good enough to beat knowledge,. Vote goes to knowledge, an thats all there is to it.
KNOWLEDGE